Down(A) Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Down a lonely spiral

He sat alone as outcast.
Cut himself off all family and friends.
Dark thoughts circling above him.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 2nd place 2026

Premium Member I Laid Down a Heavy Burden

I laid down a heavy burden called yesterday,
another called tomorrow,
and finally one called today. 

Afterward I felt an infinite lightness surround me
buoyed by the breezes embracing the eternal present
which never leaves and which we leave
at our own peril and to our own dismay:

There is not another
just the one that is us and our own self
resting in the embrace of timeless praise.

Christopher M. Swan 2008

Premium Member A Woman Saw An Empty Raft Floating Down A River

A woman went walking 
On the river trail
On a sunny day
Someone went rafting 
Along a river

When she got closer
On the river trail
She noticed a raft
The raft was floating
No was on it

She thought it was strange
That no one was there
She looked all around 
To see anyone
On the ground or hurt

There was no one there
She pondered a thought 
Maybe someone drowned
Yet  she thought 
Maybe they got saved


Premium Member witch who faced down a warlock

she was nicknamed witch who faced down a warlock
she was fearless, confident, radically ready to roll and rock
the toughest being who lived on a Brooklyn block
don’t mess with her, my mother said, looking at the clock

witch who faced down a warlock was slated to walk
down the block, on her way to school, where she could shock
classmates who were terrified of her confident walk.
and her willingness to take on a werewolf and a warlock

Premium Member Take it down a notch or two

Take a chill pill, Alfie.
You're wired and need to calm down.
Take a long deep breath.




Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Premium Member Send Me Down A Sign

I’m about to ride into battle Lord, 
Hoping victory will be mine, I
 fight only as a last resort Lord, 
But I think it’s justified this time, 
If you agree my cause is just Lord 
Will you please send me down a sign.


Premium Member Down A Path With Nature

Quote By Poet: "Morning arrives when the brilliant sun first kisses the earth."     
A new morning is now arriving
       the brilliant sun      first kisses the earth
                   over the hill.
The furry little bunny hops down nature's path
               looking for breakfast.
     Pretty butterflies have been awakened
                    they are magically dancing
         on the pretty flowers with joy.
Down a path with nature
                     I will...
walk and talk.
         Walk beneath the tall green trees
                    talking with my God.
        Searching for answers
                 answers to the haunting questions
        the ones that come         with sleepless nights.
   As the sun is now        slipping behind the moon
the day is closing      so the sun can go to sleep.
                        I must...
    return home         for I to need to try to sleep.

Premium Member Cutting Down a Tree In a Light Brezze-

... a man  Forrester Ortiz
He used to cut down trees
But the tree breaks
He made a mistake
He didn't appease the light breeze

7/12/21
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr © 2021

Premium Member Finding a Drop Carrot Down a Rabbit Hole-

drop a carrot
Down the rabbit hole
just where does it go
leaving where how does it grow
 drilling past the core 
tunnel spiking wiggling like a worm 
Coming and going Burns
turnpikes out of sight
 channel and traveling so
Go rapid rabbit Go

11/1/20
Written words by James Edward Lee Sr ©

Premium Member Double Down -A Rondel For Donald Trump

A Rondel for Donald Trump

As those Fake News polls keep coming 'round
And their predictions drag you down,
Just face the music like a Man
Deny it all, the best you can:
Try to deny that deepening frown.

There is, alas, an ever-growing sound
A quiet voice ever gaining ground
That makes you grasp at each more desperate plan
To salvage your sinking ship.

But there is no helpful, salvaging sound
Within the silence all around,
To spare you the darkness closing in
To spare the wages of your sin,
To stay the darkness that abounds
Through which you cannot hope to slip.

Taking Down a Bookshelf

The authors
blink only when looked at,
they recall for you
a story, perhaps a tale half-read.

One book lifted,
pages fly between thoughts,
a few scrapes of knowledge 
peck and preen again.
Phrases return
demanding still to be displayed
though rarely used.

There are mystic scriptures
that hover between
fiction and non-fiction.
I imagine temple beasts 
still guarding them.
I overreach,
shake this collected tree of knowledge.
Books fall, some like stone, 
some like fluttering birds.

I am ankle deep
in the printed word and its aftermath.
Some will go to the thrift shop,
some to the garage,
a few will stay between bookends
surviving these winds of change.

Today I have time to admire
the dance of sunlight on bare walls,
the transpiring poetry 
of blameless space.

Down a Storm Drain

I fear if this piece of glass
         Hanging on end wall
      Shows who lies beneath my skin
        Her outlets,words that drop from my curved lips
     Or the words that she hides
       Compressing them beneath tied tongue
   Stares, through which she sees a world
       In her own perspective
    Keeps her contemplations beneath my  fleshy layers
      Some dying in flick of moment
   And some expanding to the universe outside
      I always walk the line
   Of fear and false ego
      If you see the bitter water
    Maybe you'll hate standing
       Besides my eclipsed stream
    As it slowly engulfs 
        In shadowed mouth of it's darkness
     Whoever close to her
        The known alien who started staying from eons
      The time unknown to me
         I know,she cares not for anyone
     Just I and myself
         Every selfish emotion it hides
      Beneath folds with tiniest pores
          Struggling forever for it's freedom
      I wish I could abandon it in the storm drain
          When monsoon clouds decide to come down
      Failing to bear it's own weight of tears
 
 20/03/2019

Premium Member Down a Drainage

The drizzle whips mildly like an omen
Along the ashen lane ; and I am troubled
While gazing through  a drainage
Filled with mud and waylaid boughs,
As  a  quivered sigh trails below the cement
Until my knees bow down,  wobbling.

I linger around  almost numb
In the gradual  dip of sunset’s  orange hue;
While  these eyes peep closer closer--
A moment  too excruciating for me
For it lays still on debris … unmoved by any  yell.
What I recall is a slip-sliding of our romp
Perhaps,  a  brief escape from my wet palm---

And now it is gone, my  pet, my hamster
That I weep, unforgiving,  upon rainfall…swollen.


3/18/2019
For Eve Roper: Down A Storm Drain Gone Forever

Premium Member Down a Storm Drain Gone Forever

My heart was racing, for the boy
that I adored had handed me
a note he told me wait to read,
so home I ran excitedly!

I did not dare to read it yet,
for he was walking down the street
with friends of his. Oh, how I hoped
that he had written something sweet.

When almost home, I crossed the street
but tripped! That was not clever.
From my hand slipped Johnny’s note,
down a storm drain gone forever!

Too shy to ever tell the boy
I had gone and dropped his note,
I saw him next day; he just smiled.
Oh, to know what Johnny wrote!

Johnny must have been shy too.
What if all  that he could say
was in the note that he had written
which had gone and slipped away?

Had Johnny wanted anwers from me?
His smiles then stopped! I will never
know his feelings, for now his note was 
down a storm drain gone forever!

March 17, 2019
 for Eve Roper's Down A Storm Drain Gone Forever Poetry Contest

Heading Down a Corruptive Path

Heading down a corruptive path 
Will put you in a lot of trouble 
Your life will sadly become a dead end 
If you do not move on the double 
Darkness will rear its ugly head 
And the walls will come closing in 
Quit hanging around bad company 
Make better choices my friend

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