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Down A Path With Nature

Quote By Poet: "Morning arrives when the brilliant sun first kisses the earth." A new morning is now arriving the brilliant sun first kisses the earth over the hill. The furry little bunny hops down nature's path looking for breakfast. Pretty butterflies have been awakened they are magically dancing on the pretty flowers with joy. Down a path with nature I will... walk and talk. Walk beneath the tall green trees talking with my God. Searching for answers answers to the haunting questions the ones that come with sleepless nights. As the sun is now slipping behind the moon the day is closing so the sun can go to sleep. I must... return home for I to need to try to sleep.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/11/2024 10:29:00 AM

What a beautiful walk in the woods "beneath tall green trees," Paula. I feel like I was right there with you sharing in the tranquility, serenity and pure joy of a woodland trek! Co0ngratulations on your win. Blessings to you as you continue to walk in the beauty of creation.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/12/2024 8:47:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you found this to be a beautiful walk in the woods beneath tall green trees. A peaceful place. Wish I was there. I will dream.... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/20/2024 8:08:00 AM

A lovey walk down a path with nature Paula, congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest. Keep walking and talking to the king up above… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2024 9:19:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Nature Walk" write. Yes, we must keep walking/talking to the king up above. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/7/2024 7:42:00 PM

"1 Place" Down A Path With Nature ~ Date Written: 7/23/2024

Crystol Woods

Date: 8/7/2024 11:24:00 AM

How pretty and gentle this is! We need this kind of happy poem just as much if not more than all the ones with the more depressing emotions lol. Loved this and so glad to see you in a #1 placement!! Woohoo! Xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/7/2024 7:42:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you loved my "Nature Walk" write. I enjoyed writing this happy/fun story. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Constance La France

Date: 8/7/2024 9:39:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my contest, I enjoyed your poem a lot, well done, love the quote, Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/7/2024 7:39:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my "Nature Walk" write/love my quote. I enjoyed writing this for your contest. First time writing like this. I am so happy you like it. That made my day. Thanks for having this fun contest/for my placement. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Len Gasun

Date: 7/28/2024 7:59:00 PM

I adore this exquisite free verse poem of yours my dearest poet friend. I love the joyful feeling and imagery as we journey into the path of nature especially in the morning. This will go to my fave. I also love your quote. So much enjoyed both. Thanks a lot for sharing. Abundant blessings to you, so with your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/30/2024 10:27:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Abundant blessings. Glad you found this to be an exquisite free verse poem. I see FAV??? Thank You, that makes me very happy with a big smile on my heart. Maybe the captcha said PEN is a sign for you to write. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Len Gasun
Date: 7/28/2024 8:01:00 PM

Before I entered this comment my captcha said PEN. I know it's your loving message my dearest poet friend. I will, soon. Thanks a lot my dearest friend. Hugs, hugs

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/26/2024 4:57:00 AM

I walk each morning and your lines so steely and eloquently describe so many of my own thoughts and feelings Paula! Such a lovely poem to read and contemplate at any time of the day!! happy Friday!!! xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/30/2024 10:20:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Nature Walk and found it to be a lovely poem. Morning is a great time for a walk. Cheers for a Happy Tuesday.... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Valsa George

Date: 7/25/2024 8:38:00 PM

A lovely description of nature. Early in the morning, a walk in the woods is an energizing experience. The sights of small creatures are so beautiful. I liked the alignment of lines in your poem. Best of luck in the contest, dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/30/2024 10:16:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Best of luck. Glad you enjoyed my Nature Walk write and found it to be a lovely description of nature. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/25/2024 7:56:00 PM

Ah! your furry furry little bunny hops down nature's path, such a happy morn. I still remember your cute BUNNY acrostic dear poet. You have given a beautiful morn, the free verse is indeed challenging. Happy writing. I will be back to congratulate.Cheers

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/30/2024 10:13:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your lovely comment. Glad you found this new furry bunny to be as cute as my last one. Yes, I like bunnies. I also enjoy nature. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2024 2:34:00 PM

Yes, nature and God go hand and hand. He can answer so many questions on a quiet walk. If this is for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2024 1:33:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Nature Walk write. I love being in nature/talking with God. Yes, for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2024 2:13:00 PM

Now that's what I call a very long walk. I like how you inserted talking with God.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/26/2024 1:31:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Nature Walk write/how I talked with God. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/25/2024 6:14:00 AM

Tranquility and peace you will always find down a nature path or in your garden. Talking to God is comforting, about significant, sometimes insignificant things, and I always thank him for listening. Awesome write dear friend, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2024 12:46:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found this to be an Awesome write. I enjoy nature. What a great place to go thanking/talking/listening to Him. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Gary Radice

Date: 7/25/2024 1:33:00 AM

Hi Paula! I’m reading your first line there and if I was waiting for a brilliant sun that kisses the earth where I live there would never be mornings - summer in Liverpool, UK has been a washout so far. :) I digress. The path you walked in your poem is one that celebrates nature and spirituality. You may be contemplating to yourself on that metaphorical path but there is always that feeling within your lines that you are not alone. Cheers - Gary

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2024 12:41:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Nature write. It would be hard for me to life without some sun. I think you have here, a poem waiting to be written. Cheers back to you.... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 7/24/2024 11:00:00 PM

Your path is an enjoyable read. Nature is shown in its glory and spiritual beauty.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2024 12:33:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my Nature write to be an enjoyable read. I enjoy nature. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/24/2024 1:46:00 PM

I can relate to this poem Paula. The nature, the search for answers and lack of sleep. Well done! I hope you get some nice rest. Blessings :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2024 11:44:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Nature write. Nature & God go together for me. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 7/24/2024 8:23:00 AM

Dear Paula, What a wonderful journey of introspection and spiritual seeking in the tranquility of nature. I loved the part talking with God under the tall green trees. - Blessings My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2024 11:41:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my Nature write. I enjoy talking with God when I am out in His nature. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/24/2024 1:52:00 AM

Wonderful layout and poem. You captured nature with all its beauty. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/25/2024 11:38:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my write to be a Wonderful layout and poem. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. I enjoy nature. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Deb M

Date: 7/23/2024 2:10:00 PM

A very lovely tranquil poem Paula! Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/23/2024 2:30:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found my write to be A very lovely tranquil poem. That makes me happy... Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/23/2024 12:34:00 PM

Down A Path With Nature ~ Date Written: 7/23/2024