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Poetry/Free Verse/Down A Forest Path
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"We are on a journey and all the answers we seek, are whispered without words." Quote by- Constance have your feet ever taken you down a forest path a place of quietness where a thousands birds sing like a symphony meant just for you ... the foliage lush green dripping trembling and you hear water flowing peacefully you are totally alone separated from the turmoil of life at peace, serene and tranquil and in the moment I have ... the drums of time have ceased and my fragile soul is a sea of tears scars are bleeding, bleeding, bleeding .... wind whispers my name and caresses me like a lover I must let go of my history ! the many twisted passages and contrived corridors the waves of regret like daggers but, putting my thoughts aside for now I wander ... a sparkling stream musical rocks decayed with years sitting on one I meditate breathing in and out I let go of this reality ... becoming a bird flying, gliding, drifting my soul free I float on the wind swirling away God tells me to let go of my past history that he loves me as I am- Buddha tells me to live in the moment as life is short I wake suddenly- was I sleeping ? the sun is now fading the air around me is saturated with my prayers and dreams the trees infinite sentinels a cool breeze kisses my lips as I leave ...

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Date: 7/31/2024 9:49:00 AM
Feling serenity on walk through forest. Nice experience.Quote is excellent. Format is enchanting. Love.
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Date: 7/31/2024 2:38:00 PM
Anisha, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 7/30/2024 11:40:00 PM
Wow .. such a lovely poem, dear Constance. I could feel the serenity you experienced. Nature is such a solace in our distress. A walk through the forest track away from the distractions of life is so rejuvenating. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 7/31/2024 2:38:00 PM
Valsa, thank you for the compliment, nice comment and FAV, appreciate, Constance
Date: 7/30/2024 9:33:00 AM
What an enchanting lyrical free verse, Dear Constance! Enjoyed the form you have created - love the way you have a format to follow in free verse! The alluring title creates a sense of tranquility even before we read the poem. Love and blessings ~
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Date: 7/31/2024 3:26:00 PM
Back again, Constance, sending this stunning poem to my Faves. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 7/31/2024 3:25:00 PM
Back again, Constance, sending this stunning poem to my Faves. Love ~ Mala
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Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2024 2:39:00 PM
Mala, thank you for the compliment and lovely comment, love, Constance
Date: 7/30/2024 1:02:00 AM
A beautiful free verse poem Constance, free verse is something I can’t do, wish I could… Beryl
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Date: 7/31/2024 2:40:00 PM
Beryl, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance
Date: 7/29/2024 10:09:00 AM
Okay, I see you, I hear you... Lovely and serene but, as with life, some turmoil to get through, learn from. Imagery on point! Breath taking! Xoxo
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Date: 7/31/2024 2:40:00 PM
Crystol, thank you for the comment, and compliment, Constance
Date: 7/27/2024 3:44:00 PM
Wow. Such an amazing example for us
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Constance La France
Date: 7/28/2024 4:48:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance
Date: 7/25/2024 7:09:00 AM
Gone through. I have special Reverence to Lord Buddha. I’m not a religious person but righteous and believe in only religion HUMANITY. Love.
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Date: 7/28/2024 4:49:00 AM
Anisha, thank you for the comment, love, Constance
Date: 7/24/2024 10:27:00 PM
Lovely write, though I don't believe in buddha. Much love and God bless you, Always amazed at your creativity and imagery. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/28/2024 4:50:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the compliment, and comment, love, Constance
Date: 7/24/2024 10:06:00 AM
Nice poem. Love to share your dreams.
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Date: 7/24/2024 4:25:00 PM
Jay, thanks for the compliment and comment, Constance
Date: 7/24/2024 8:26:00 AM
Dear Constance, I loved the transformative journey through nature to find peace and spiritual renewal. Yes, through our God, we are encouraged to let go of past regrets and live in the present moment. So well written and motivational! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 7/24/2024 9:20:00 AM
Daniel, thank you so much for the usual great comment and compliment, love it, and for your friendship, Constance
Date: 7/23/2024 2:54:00 PM
Constance …..your poem is excellent so engaging…l love how the 1st and 3rd verses are so calm and uplifting…. and the 2nd verse is full of your inner turmoil and darkness! I felt both the calm and the turmoil as l read! Cleverly written…Debx
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Date: 7/24/2024 7:44:00 AM
Deb, thank you so much for the lovely comment and compliment, Constance
Date: 7/23/2024 10:55:00 AM
I love your write/quote/pretty picture. Have a wonderful day writing away................
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Constance La France
Date: 7/24/2024 7:44:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the compliment, blessings, Constance
Date: 7/23/2024 10:29:00 AM
Hello Constance, I really enjoyed this poem. I felt i was watching your dream. It will be my fav. Love, & Friendship, Darlene/
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Date: 7/24/2024 10:31:00 AM
Hello Constance, I hope all is well with you. You are welcome. Friendship & Love, / Darlene/
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Constance La France
Date: 7/24/2024 7:45:00 AM
Darlene, thank you for the compliment, comment and FAV, love, Constance
Date: 7/23/2024 10:17:00 AM
Beautiful poem. A real gem. Thanks for posting.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/24/2024 7:45:00 AM
Jay, thank you for the compliment, and comment, Constance

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