Down a Storm Drain Gone Forever

My heart was racing, for the boy
that I adored had handed me
a note he told me wait to read,
so home I ran excitedly!

I did not dare to read it yet,
for he was walking down the street
with friends of his. Oh, how I hoped
that he had written something sweet.

When almost home, I crossed the street
but tripped! That was not clever.
From my hand slipped Johnny’s note,
down a storm drain gone forever!

Too shy to ever tell the boy
I had gone and dropped his note,
I saw him next day; he just smiled.
Oh, to know what Johnny wrote!

Johnny must have been shy too.
What if all  that he could say
was in the note that he had written
which had gone and slipped away?

Had Johnny wanted anwers from me?
His smiles then stopped! I will never
know his feelings, for now his note was 
down a storm drain gone forever!

March 17, 2019
 for Eve Roper's Down A Storm Drain Gone Forever Poetry Contest
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Leffanta Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:58 PM
Oh, the iron knee! Well done! Aloha! Rico
Laurie Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 5:24 PM
G'day Andrea … wonderful Andrea. Possibly all day long, along with other readers will be surmising about what was written on the note - well done Andrea - Lindsay
Lawless Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 12:01 PM
very intriguing take on the theme Andrea. A very different take on the "dear john letter"......
Pandit Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 7:24 AM
Johnny's note you speak of is symbolic to many of that age ...in various forms..you left the reader without closure..a great entry for the contest, Andrea.
May Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 8:48 PM
No keys no phone, no money no chain, just a love note down the drain. Great take on the theme Andrea..Winning wishes
Krutsinger Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 7:43 PM
This was a darling answer to an interesting prompt, and could turn itself into three more poems at least, Andrea.
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2019 at 5:58 PM
aww Andrea what a cute touching story, I love your interpretation of the theme:-) hugs Jan x
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