Valsa George Poet Verse

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Down a Forest Path

"Has solitude ever led your steps down a forest path . . . "
                                 Quote by Constance La France


On a beautiful afternoon, seeking solitude
I set out on a trek to the nearby woods
Except my camera, intentionally picked up
I hadn’t carried with me any other thing
All along, I saw wildflowers and strange herbs
And paused to take pictures, but kept moving
No doubt, it was a rewarding experience
The lure of the unknown seemed bewitching

From the cluster of flowers on a sprawling tree
The wind wafted a rare exotic smell divine
I heard the twitter of chirping sparrows
And could spot large squirrels with bushy tails
     
Proceeding further, heard a gurgling sound
It must be a small cataract, I did suppose
My guess was right. It fell off a rock running into a stream
With murmur enough to lull one to sweet sleep
Close to the falls, I went frolicking in mist
Splashes of water vapor, making me pleasantly wet

The whistle of a quail fell in my ears
And the rhythm of the tapping of a woodpecker
Also, the creaking of dry leaves under my feet
Sounds so familiar to any forest trekker

Feeling happy over my progress without a hitch
Listening to the soft cajoling of birds,
And the confused drone of honeybees,	
I walked playfully stamping on the dried-up leaves
That moaned painfully under my feet.

Passing fragrant cedar trees and tall growing pines,
I roamed for long enjoying the beauty of the woods

Amid the multitude of trees and the flora and fauna
My spirit felt a deep solitude, I couldn’t explain
Though I longed to explore more into its hidden pockets
I saw the slanting rays of the setting sun
And quickened my way home before darkness invaded 
Feeling quite happy and at peace with myself !


Nov.16.2022

~ Placed First~

Writing Challenge “V” forms Poetry Contest
Sponsor. Constance La France

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Sara Kendrick November 30, 2022 at 6:03 AM Back with congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara

Constance La France November 28, 2022 at 10:16 AM Valsa, a beautiful Villanelle poem, I love it and the image. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, V Forms inspired by my quote, well done, blessings

Ann Peck November 25, 2022 at 10:30 AM A lovely poem, Vassa! ~listening to the soft cajoling of birds ~ You describe all the beauty of a walk in the forest. Congratulations on your win!

JC Brul November 25, 2022 at 5:20 AM My kind of poem! You vividly captured the sublime hues of solitude in the woods. Breathtakingly beautiful! This theme was my choice, too, but I didn't have time to write. Congratulations dear friend. A fav for me.

Christuraj Alex November 23, 2022 at 8:50 PM "The wind wafted a rare exotic smell divine", "frolicking in mist" - Beautiful. Great poetic expedition. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet November 23, 2022 at 11:58 AM Back with congratulations on your first place contest winner, dear Valsa. You amply deserve it with this amazing Gem of poetry.

Harry Horsman November 17, 2022 at 5:42 PM An amazing poetic ramble, Valsa. a joy to read. Harry

Anselmo Boles November 17, 2022 at 9:32 AM The body and mind entwined in a mesmerizing journey! It exudes love and the reality of the unknown. Great poem Valsa!...ab

Susan Lawrence November 17, 2022 at 6:42 AM Valsa, Just beautiful. I rode along with you and enjoyed every nuance, moment and step into the forest. It came alive for me. One of my favorite places to always be as a child and as an adult as well. Best of luck in the contest. Big hugs, very special poem. Hugs, Sweet Susan :)

Gershon Wolf November 16, 2022 at 7:25 PM Ah, the path of a poet! Lovely trail blazed there, Valsa. :) gw

Bill Baker November 16, 2022 at 3:46 PM A lovely poem of the path in the woods, Valsa. Your imagery made the walk real. I take that walk as often as I could. the serenity is such a benefit to both mind and body. Enjoy this day that you've been given, my dear friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick November 16, 2022 at 2:25 PM I enjoyed reading this one for Constance's contest. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara

Rico Leffanta November 16, 2022 at 10:16 AM Walking is very healthy, and in a forest, it is very healthy for your eyes! Enjoyed your trip! Aloha!

Sotto Poet November 16, 2022 at 7:41 AM Oh, Valsa, my dear friend, this is so very lovely and captivating. I hope you find a lot of joy in the natural world, which you have portrayed so well in your poetry. I really enjoy the way you use metaphors in your poetry.

Len Gasun November 16, 2022 at 6:35 AM So beautiful and enchanting my dear friend Valsa. While reading your poem I've set my trek vicariously on that wood to follow you and i immensely enjoyed the journey through your stunning imagery. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. All the best in the contest my dear friend. Hugs

Vijay Pandit November 16, 2022 at 5:49 AM I journeyed through your words down the forest path enjoying the images you created. Much happiness in realm of nature as you so wonderfully depict in this poem. Best to you, Valsa.

Stephan McBride November 16, 2022 at 5:12 AM There is so much beauty around us when we are aware to stay away from the darkness, I will quicken my feet as fast as they can go to stay out of it, love ya. God bless you in your writing there is always a message

Tom Cunningham November 16, 2022 at 12:48 AM The woods are tranquil and have a certain magic that lifts your spirits, love the imagery in your verse Valsa. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Victor Buhagiar November 15, 2022 at 11:40 PM Your poem is overwhelmingly beautiful. So full of imagery that I wished I was there following the forest trail. Blessings.