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"Has solitude ever led your steps down a forest path . . . " Quote by Constance La France
On a beautiful afternoon, seeking solitude I set out on a trek to the nearby woods Except my camera, intentionally picked up I hadn’t carried with me any other thing All along, I saw wildflowers and strange herbs And paused to take pictures, but kept moving No doubt, it was a rewarding experience The lure of the unknown seemed bewitching From the cluster of flowers on a sprawling tree The wind wafted a rare exotic smell divine I heard the twitter of chirping sparrows And could spot large squirrels with bushy tails Proceeding further, heard a gurgling sound It must be a small cataract, I did suppose My guess was right. It fell off a rock running into a stream With murmur enough to lull one to sweet sleep Close to the falls, I went frolicking in mist Splashes of water vapor, making me pleasantly wet The whistle of a quail fell in my ears And the rhythm of the tapping of a woodpecker Also, the creaking of dry leaves under my feet Sounds so familiar to any forest trekker Feeling happy over my progress without a hitch Listening to the soft cajoling of birds, And the confused drone of honeybees, I walked playfully stamping on the dried-up leaves That moaned painfully under my feet. Passing fragrant cedar trees and tall growing pines, I roamed for long enjoying the beauty of the woods Amid the multitude of trees and the flora and fauna My spirit felt a deep solitude, I couldn’t explain Though I longed to explore more into its hidden pockets I saw the slanting rays of the setting sun And quickened my way home before darkness invaded Feeling quite happy and at peace with myself ! Nov.16.2022 ~ Placed First~ Writing Challenge “V” forms Poetry Contest Sponsor. Constance La France

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Date: 11/30/2022 6:03:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 11/28/2022 10:16:00 AM
Valsa, a beautiful Villanelle poem, I love it and the image. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, V Forms inspired by my quote, well done, blessings
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Date: 11/25/2022 10:30:00 AM
A lovely poem, Vassa! ~listening to the soft cajoling of birds ~ You describe all the beauty of a walk in the forest. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/25/2022 5:20:00 AM
My kind of poem! You vividly captured the sublime hues of solitude in the woods. Breathtakingly beautiful! This theme was my choice, too, but I didn't have time to write. Congratulations dear friend. A fav for me.
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Date: 11/23/2022 8:50:00 PM
"The wind wafted a rare exotic smell divine", "frolicking in mist" - Beautiful. Great poetic expedition. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/23/2022 11:58:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your first place contest winner, dear Valsa. You amply deserve it with this amazing Gem of poetry.
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Date: 11/17/2022 5:42:00 PM
An amazing poetic ramble, Valsa. a joy to read. Harry
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Date: 11/17/2022 9:32:00 AM
The body and mind entwined in a mesmerizing journey! It exudes love and the reality of the unknown. Great poem Valsa!...ab
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Date: 11/17/2022 6:42:00 AM
Valsa, Just beautiful. I rode along with you and enjoyed every nuance, moment and step into the forest. It came alive for me. One of my favorite places to always be as a child and as an adult as well. Best of luck in the contest. Big hugs, very special poem. Hugs, Sweet Susan :)
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Date: 11/16/2022 7:25:00 PM
Ah, the path of a poet! Lovely trail blazed there, Valsa. :) gw
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Date: 11/16/2022 3:46:00 PM
A lovely poem of the path in the woods, Valsa. Your imagery made the walk real. I take that walk as often as I could. the serenity is such a benefit to both mind and body. Enjoy this day that you've been given, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 11/16/2022 2:25:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one for Constance's contest. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for sharing and for stopping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/16/2022 10:16:00 AM
Walking is very healthy, and in a forest, it is very healthy for your eyes! Enjoyed your trip! Aloha!
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Date: 11/16/2022 7:41:00 AM
Oh, Valsa, my dear friend, this is so very lovely and captivating. I hope you find a lot of joy in the natural world, which you have portrayed so well in your poetry. I really enjoy the way you use metaphors in your poetry.
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Date: 11/16/2022 6:35:00 AM
So beautiful and enchanting my dear friend Valsa. While reading your poem I've set my trek vicariously on that wood to follow you and i immensely enjoyed the journey through your stunning imagery. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. All the best in the contest my dear friend. Hugs
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Date: 11/16/2022 5:49:00 AM
I journeyed through your words down the forest path enjoying the images you created. Much happiness in realm of nature as you so wonderfully depict in this poem. Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 11/16/2022 5:12:00 AM
There is so much beauty around us when we are aware to stay away from the darkness, I will quicken my feet as fast as they can go to stay out of it, love ya. God bless you in your writing there is always a message
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Date: 11/16/2022 12:48:00 AM
The woods are tranquil and have a certain magic that lifts your spirits, love the imagery in your verse Valsa. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 11/15/2022 11:40:00 PM
Your poem is overwhelmingly beautiful. So full of imagery that I wished I was there following the forest trail. Blessings.
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