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It’s A Good Life If You Don’t Weaken

I polish ghosts into a golden age,
 the past appears the way I need.
Where I reside is carved on the page,
 walls erected outline my screed.

So many names dissolve into the dust,
 a lifetime’s work reduced to yellowed ink.
One path is quietly being discussed,
 another burns alone beneath the drink.

Stitched a self from fragments within,
 a life becomes the story that remains.
Bus rides through the snow become a hymn,
 breathing softly in the smallest pains.

Is artistic dedication noble
 or just self-imposed isolation?
The mystery is solved inside the story,
 but the mystery itself is an illusion.

Premium Member MUSIC AND THE VISUAL

MUSIC AND THE VISUAL
extraordinary
influence
celebrated
  paraphrased
experiments

a discussed
  prefaced
    leitmotif
illustrative
   evocation
translating
  literal
   juxtaposed
polychrome
conceptions
floating
mirrored
  settings
    interrupting
transformed
apotheosis
parallelled
as
   notional
    utterances
     seemingly
unbounded
imagined
    superiority
extolled
narrative
  embodiments
edifying
   emotive
discourse
of
   intrinsic
harmony

Premium Member Your Spirit Still Flows

The morning light spills gold across the floor,
Yet shadows linger where your laughter stayed.
The clock ticks on, but I can’t close the door,
For time can’t heal the shape your absence made

The moon-controlled tide continues to kiss sand
It can recall the voice that I can no longer hear
Though thousands of stars still glow above the land
Their beauty falls dim at thoughts of you, my dear

Yet, I adjust my life to live without your voice
We discussed days happenings, nature, God's love
Now life has to be lived, continued, there's no choice
I think of you each time I see those wonderful doves

Grief floods my heart, and mind so many times
I never know when something will of you remind
Me, as flowers you planted without reason or chime
All spring more appeared for all of us to find

Did you know death was near and wanted us to see
You in every place on these acres, which used to grow 
Crops; just like you to start planting not stop; just be
Well, I want you to know that your spirit still does flow


Premium Member INTELLECTUAL CONTEXTS

INTELLECTUAL  CONTEXTS
encoded
anticipated 
      affinity
   emphasised 
with
tradition 
neutral 
collaborative  
         genres  
articular
ambivalent
   in isolation 
then
deepened 
  with
representational 
      certainities 
of
avaliable
choice  
 oscillating  
intensely 
    collaborative 
reclusive 
    concepts 

circulating
   sessions 
to
 celebrate
   .significant 
issues 
temporarily
transcending  
   the confrontational
discussed
yet
introverted 
    amorphous
 expatiations 
anticipate
 aspirations 
  in performance

Premium Member Springtime Mingle fest

At the grand old Springtime Mingle Fest,
Folks arrived all groomed and dressed their best.
One wore stripes with dots,
One brought fifteen pots,
And one came in pajamas for “comfort and rest.”

A banker discussed gourmet cheese
With a pirate who sneezed in the breeze.
A poet nearby
Recited to pie,
While bees chased a man through the trees.

A lady named Myrtle from Maine
Danced wildly like runaway rain.
She twirled with a mop,
Knocked over the punch pot,
Then blamed it entirely on Spain.

A shy little fellow named Clyde
Tried mingling but mostly just sighed.
He smiled at a chair,
Spilled soup in his hair,
Then proudly announced, “Socialized!”

Two cats crashed the gathering hall,
Ignoring good manners and all.
They stole half the fish,
Licked every dish,
Then napped on the mayor’s best shawl.

The music grew louder at nine;
An uncle attempted to shine.
He moonwalked too hard,
Fell straight in the yard,
And rose saying, “Just part of the line!”

By midnight the minglers agreed
That chaos was all they would need.
For though things went wrong,
They laughed loud and long—
And friendship grew faster than weed.

Premium Member Hospitality has been thrown into a ditch

young man with an employee badge sits in chair next to me
we are not two feet away from each other
I try to make eye contact, but he never looks up from his phone
There would have been a time when we would have made eye contact
Said “hi”
maybe smiled
those days are gone
Hospitality has been thrown into a ditch and buried
There would have been a time when we would have said “hi”
Gotten to know a bit about each other.
Discussed possible common neighbors, friends and relatives.
This is small town Iowa.
It used to be what small town Iowans did.
It was expected.
Not anymore.


Premium Member Pre-dating current chaos '

In forward thought John Duns Scotus 
taught, who still feared appears to be.?

(In a tiff..De-lete-ists proffered him a cap)
And rammed in your eye a monacle blurred
As blurred can be.!!!

Oh yes'  For He penned of a treatise true' And  in
The thirteenth century too..Mind you.' A
Foundational claim,its framework right and fair.'

We must invoke it.! For such; we have 
only to dare.! Let it be read, on small screens and large, be discussed in city plazas, and even hotel bars.'

This affermation of Gods good will.' 
To humans He created..With it start your minds to
Fill' marveling no longer at tawdry things.'
Yet walk in this power that sunbdjucates
kings.' kings with arthritis and all manner of i'lls not divine or omnipotent.' Just washed out shills.' Stand on Gods promise
And respect each other." What is shared
Equally cannot  be taken if, all humanity 
stand by it.' And each other' as eternal
sisters and brothers.!

Premium Member OBSERVED FIGURATIONS-:-

OBSERVED FIGURATIONS-:-
created
 tranquil 
contrasting

timeless 
emblems
so ENIGMATICALLY DIFFUSED
coincidentally 
 signified
quotas

discussed
details
with ABSENT-MINDEDNESS
eliminated 
  literary 
output

concentrated
creativity

Premium Member A long walk on a short beach

was just what I needed today.

I got my mom up
out of her chair,
vertical
and I said....
"we are walking!"

I found a big
shark's tooth
two miles into
our "little walk"

and we discussed
little things and big things

such as how many men
screwed us up in our lives
and how annoying children are
whom we love more than
ourselves.

We considered the shape
of water, the receding tide,
and broken shells,
the little lies we tell ourselves,

and the hardness of sand
beneath our warm,
sunburned feet.

I rediscovered
how much I love
my mom today,
on a whole other level.

Her first name is Barbara
and we share the same
middle name.

I was proud to walk
beside her today,
everyday.

Me and you, heavenly

Infinity, that's how many times I would of done it again with you,

Eternity, is how long I'd be happy with you,

Blessed, am I to have run into you,

I don't offer much as my hearts been chewed away,

But your eyes, like I told you, make me feel some sort of way,

The gaze that got me lost for a whole night,

I'm pretty sure the glasses can't hide such a sight,

I don't usually open up to girls, the pretty ones I'm quite wary, like we discussed before, love can be scary,

I felt connected to you, more then physically, I hope we can meet again, dear friend, me and you, heavenly

Premium Member If it lies with you'

Currently files are being surveyed..The ones that can be seen..Some will prove
To be ' anti-climatic ' i have no doubt on
That.' Some will have harmless content !
They will be discussed as the wars keep
Going, as the unrest bubbles and is reported on by.??? Well the same outlets
Letting us know there is not much that
Bad that happened.? Its helpfull that the
Sounds of rockets do not interrupt our
Train of thoughts..As we contemplate the
Fact that things may well be overhyped?
Like in twenty twenty btw.' I just cant seem
To remember? Who the culprits were.? Was that a war maybe? And if so upon whom.? Thank heavens we have a great information system..Is all I can think.? Oh
Yes another bill to sort out.' Must get busy
With the real imoortant stuff.'

Domestics

Every time I heard her cry
I would come barreling down the stairs
ready to square up to him,
both of us fuming on the edge of a fight.

As a child when you have yet to experience
the infinite pettiness of relationships,
right and wrong both have their pitfalls.
Parents had their cat and mouse games.

Father was a good man made weak,
worn out by doing the best he could.

Their battles were a joust,
their fighting had rules of engagement,
indistinct battle lines,
hard for a boy to figure out.

Boys and their mothers also have rules,
they agree to die for each other,
but how and when are never discussed.

Premium Member I Cried at Madama Butterfly, You Didn't

It makes me a better person
It's on my CV and I bring it up in conversation
It means I'm in tune with everything

I've discussed it in the kitchen,
Loading the dishwasher.
I cried in the basement thinking about it

I told a colleague at work that
I needed to talk to somebody
She asked if I needed to step outside

I stepped outside
I weeped on the steps of the building
I finished a can of sparkling water, then crushed it in my fist

The viewing platform for the harbour
The barren country road
I message my opera friends

They're out at an event hosted by DJ Anxiety 
We are all crushed

Out the Loop

Discussed the importance of 
using the image for 
self-gain. 

despite the fact these abject mouths
run to no end, mimic cracked 
pipes or leaking faucets. 

Pocket holes drift , shaking 
the gaseous currency watches. 
Money quick-dry quick enough without
the drought to help it out.


Drowsy and Half slept, 
put out long enough for me
to know how to hit and shuffle.

I been up and down and
all around this block and 
still have a good night.
This day takes wet coals 
across namesake. 

I’m not impressed with threats
unless they are held up.
Even worse they kept up.
I ceen't it.

How about you prove to me?
Prove to me in the asphalt that
it’s not your ass fault? 
Prove it? 
Do it. Can’t? 

Laughable, I couldn’t imagine
being a man to cultivate 
a trifle ingrate .

Premium Member Queen of Red Hearts

sheer confidence oozed out of the queen of red
her enemies cowered, some slunk off in dread
her super power abilities were known throughout the land
She could throw lightning bolts out of her right hand.

What is the deal? She asked the wizard of mean.
He scurried away like a rat, fleeing from this queen.
Two other villains discussed how to take her on.
I’ll distract her, said a gargoyle named Simple Don.

Simple Don got tossed sixty-two feet up in a tree.
He screeched and wailed, for she had torn up his knee.
The queen of red had skin that began developing red hearts.
Like symmetrical, tattoos, flashing about two inches apart.

What is she doing now? An evil ogre wondered, scared to death.
Before he could get away, she renamed him Dead Man Seth.
He wailed and screamed, getting away, with both of his ears.
As he left the forest, the good animals clapped with cheers.

Moral of this story is to always keep hope from the start.
For inside of you may reside a Queen of Hearts.

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