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Premium Member Arthur

He was a tall muscular man, dark-
haired and in the prime of his life.
In horror I watched him stumble and 
fall back, face up onto the green grass.
Three knife wounds cut deep, thrown 
with great speed and precision by
an assassin dressed in black in a
matching sombrero with silver band.
I rushed to his side placing both 
my trembling hands on his cheeks 
as I watched his face become pale.

My tears fell on his face as I pleaded 
with him, don't die, please don't die.
He couldn't speak to me, but his eyes 
said I love you before his spirit departed.
I laid my head on his bleeding chest 
and sobbed uncontrollably in disbelief.
It was then that I saw her standing there 
In the corner of the lawn with a slight 
smile on her face, her soft dress blowing 
in the breeze, and I knew it was she,
his own wife, who had hired the assassin.
I heard windchimes sadly sing his epitaph.

8/19/2018

Wind Chimes Poetry Contest~N/A~
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

Premium Member Sea Scars

There’s a story here,

embedded within 

a righteous reef

of broken silence,

where scars remain

engraved on sea stars,

entangled between sand 

in empty oyster shells, 

reminding me

to breathe until i reach

the surface, 

for hope still swims

through the barnacles

that bloom amidst the blues.

These tears mean nothing

and everything

as they define the demons

I disguise through violent dawns,

though my will to grasp

onto faith is slowly wearing out.
 
Life and its merciless ways

of enlightening

murky waters with reflections

of taunting tortures

endured across miles, 

Keep me unconsciously drowning,

uncontrollably,

unable to seize glowing planktons.

Escaping Rhymed Detonation

Malevolent imploded uncontrollably, 
  twisting wildly maniacal posies
   amid diabolically toasted brainstem, 
angst uncompromisingly yanked tresses 
  purging stinging speech patterned rhymes
 amuck iniquitous poetic verses hung
     upside down to tormentingly dry, 
    facing other inimically knotted borders of
  antagonistic galleries in deranged snapshots 
           razing warped poetical tapestries,  
tripping on tunes of whiskey rushes' savoy truffles
    and greenish tangerines whilst Led Zeppelin's 
 Sick Again danced upon reflective ceiling tiles, 
time written sideways 'round alleged autonomy
    hidden furthermost immune masked mirror images,
   debauching Greek braille calligraphy's vindication
           on walls of graffito scripted physicality 
       calling out 'tween hysterical compulsions, 
  naught one heeded the sounds of synapses 
     about ill-fated half moon's arresting arc, 
   synthetic doomsday's clocks aptly chimed 
    quarter to analytical cuckoo's nest repudiation, 
  still awaiting on serendipity to surrender 
           furthermost rabbit hole's curiouser rants,
relinquishing unwell-languaged compilations' sabotage - -
      circumventing rhythmically subversive escaped detonation
© Paloma P  Create an image from this poem.


Premium Member Let Me Translate

Let me translate
My love for you
From written.... to spoken....to touched
From syllable sensuality
To physical functionality
From verbal to nonverbal virtual reality

Or better yet
Let me translate them into YOUR language
Yes, I’m a polyglot glutton
craving your satiation
Interjection velocity 
Groan and grope physicality
Touch and tease and taste temerity 
Chaste words undulating into unchaste carnality

Let me translate
In meanings that you understand
Points of reference that you rant and pant
In my ear…say it in a chant….
Over and over...
I won't let you recant
your forbidden fantasty frolic…
Baby...I’ll grant

Let me translate
Into the language of YOU
I understand
Your savage need laced with greed….
concede....every one...
to me
This wave won't recede
till that passion is freed...
by my deliciously devilish deed...

My pleasure peaks uncontrollably
Rocked in your volatility
Word translation ecstasy
Come together finality
Verbal.......
non-verbal.....
G~R*A~T*F~I*E~D 
unity

So, just let me....
Let me translate
My love
For
You

Eileen Manassian

Premium Member Just a Bit Different

I grew up in Middletown, where everything was pretty much average. 
     Every house, every car, every mom, dad and every kid were all
     just about the same.  Except for Paul Locke.  Paul was the only Jewish
     kid on the block.  But that wasn't what made him different. 

     Paul could eat dirt and seemed to enjoy doing so.  Someone would say,
     "show'em Paul",  and he would.  Sand, red clay, loam, dust, it didn't 
     seem to matter.  Paul would reach down and grab a handful, choke it 
     down and then laugh uncontrollably at his accomplishment.  He was at
     his best in those hot July and August days when we hadn't seen rain all
     summer.  
  
     Thinking back on it, I don't believe I ever saw him do mud.
     I suppose even being different must have its limits.  

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     Sponsored by Space Cadet
     11/03/2016

Defenseless

I am just a swollen bloated thing in this harsh world
Nothing here but the laws of physics upon me hurled
No safety, power, decision is mine as I am uncontrollably twirled

Under and over and across the sweltering haze
Never before feeling, always fleeing from the gaze
Now it is just me… alone… caught up in a daze. 

The ramparts have fallen, all is mis-aligned, broken;
The wreckage of my thoughts you left as mere token.
Untidy answer I wish was unspoken!

Everything, everyone caterwauling at me in my alien world 
Eyes upon me, I cannot escape from this demented gaze
Ears ringing from pain - from curses unspoken. 

February 28, 2020
Title Chosen : Defenseless
Contest : Pick-A-Title, Vol 14-Tristich
Sponsor : Edward Ibeh


Premium Member I Love You

how do i breathe
when you are my air
i am lost & incomplete
without your calm voice..

inside, i shake uncontrollably
as tears stain my face,
no longer an us  now only me
is more than i can bear..

loving thoughts of you
are a deep & painful memory
of the sacred bond we shared
consumed with grief  i rock and rock..

curled tightly in a ball
on a cold unforgiving floor
arms cocoon my quivering body
emptiness overwhelms me..

i love you

the loss consumes me
i am scared i feel nothing
where love lived joyfully
is now a black & desolate void..

you blessed me with your love
i was the luckiest girl on the planet
without you there is no me
when do i begin to feel simply feel..

there is no poetry nor musical note
the only audible sound
is my heart breaking
piece by piece..

i gave myself to you
with honour & respect
you were the first man
who truly saw me for me..

your beautiful mind
& beguiling charm
guided me tenderly with care,
i felt safe i felt 

with all that i am
to the core of my being
my hand is yours eternally
it is you i cherish and adore.

i love you
© Lynn Marie  Create an image from this poem.

An Old and Trusted Friend

Tree branches bowed under the weight of the snow, 
like penitents kneeling, as Christmas shoppers reveled 
in the joy of the season. I left the house and struggled 
through the snow-clogged streets to meet a man 
I hadn't seen in years. He was the model of discretion, 
a confidant. I could always count on his fidelity and trust. 

I shivered, pulled the scarf more tightly round my neck, 
and pushed my way through the milling crowds to await 
his arrival. And there he was. The old familiar shambling gait, 
the oft-worn brown fedora perched upon his head, 
and suddenly I felt better. 

I chose a dimly lighted tavern. We ordered drinks and dinner;
linguini and shrimp, a dish for which we shared a common relish. 
Our conversation was tentative at first, until the effects 
of the alcohol loosened our tongues, and we talked of Oxford, 
days full of happy memories. 

But later, as the evening wore on and the tavern's customers
left with errands of their own, we were left alone. 
Silence descended. Thoughts of earlier in the day came crashing 
down upon me. He sensed something was wrong, as he always did. 

"She left me," I blurted out, sobbing uncontrollably. 

He said nothing, and gently squeezed my hand.

Premium Member Waiting For the Dust To Settle

Stranger
                           I adore you
                      Because you think
               I said something worthwhile
         And your unsolicited uplifting response
           Was that I strummed a chord inside
                    And made you smile.

            Such are the curiosities of chance
                  Encounters from afar…
               As planets and stars collide
                      Among the stars.

                Though we know not why,
                      When or where
                         We may be
          When the unforeseen collision occurs
            Changing the course and destinies
                Of traveling bodies forever…

                               Still,
               There’s no denying you and I
   Were spinning uncontrollably ‘round and ‘round
                ‘til we both hit solid ground
         As the pull of gravity brought us both
                                D
                                o
                                w
                                n
                      Into the infinite
                Azure blue atmosphere
         Where ideas and words roam free
            Waiting for the dust to settle
              On poets like you and me.

        PS: This one's for Delysia Hendricks

Premium Member The Sea

THE SEA
=======

I stood at the shore and tried to see the end,
I knew it was of no use and no one ever saw it,
Like the sea our life's end is unseen,
Waves go up and down uncontrollably,
so our lives face ups & downs beyond control.

I stood on the beach and watched the moonlit sea,
Oh!  it is great  to watch the calm waves sway,
What a peaceful atmosphere it creates,
When a man is calm and collected, peace engulfs,
Happiness surrounds, great experience found.

I left  the beach thinking of the wonders of creation,
Why the  waves turn to tsunami and volcano,
People are like sea, calm today, in turmoil tomorrow,
No one can predict the volcano eruption and tsunami,
How similar is the actions of man and the sea!!!











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Premium Member A Homeless Man's Finality

His eyes looked worn and full
of a lonely lifeless existence. Lost
in his world, wandering through.

    The heartfelt pains are the
heavy burdens he carries with him.
    His body and feet aching from
the miles of foraging through the
cold dark mean, city streets.

    The Holidays are hardest for
him as he remembers vaguely 
his first Christmas with his parents.
     For a moment that thought
brings a warm loving feeling, 
engulfing his heart releasing a
tear.

     He then sees a family through
a picture window as he slowly walks
by, listening to their joyful
expressions of festivity.
Remembering his and escaping to
avoid the pain of his thoughts of
his family.

   His clothes are worn like his teeth.
Needing medical attention, he deals
with the physical pains along with
the mental ones, on his own.

    He finally sits down, puts his 
hands over his head and breaks
down crying uncontrollably. Releasing
his life's experiences all at once! 
Relieving all of his hearts pains,
through tears. Finally giving up!!



Michael Tor 10/6/2015

Premium Member Living With a Stranger - Emotive Write

You stare at me with vacant eyes
It’s like living with a stranger
Tears and tantrums we both despise
Where is the man I once loved?

Locked inside your own little world
Sometimes a piece of music makes you smile
But every day I know I’m losing you
I’m losing you bit by bit

I no longer get greeted with a loving kiss
These days you lash out uncontrollably
I get battered and bruised by your flying fist
But I’ll never give up loving you

NOT written from personal experience of living with someone with dementia

08~07~16

Aerophobia-The Fear of Flying

Apprehensive and panic-stricken
I practice assuming the crash position .
While a “ fasten seatbelt” sign flashes
like a beacon, foretelling our demise,
cool beads of sweat form on my forehead.
A paralyzing anxiety washes over me.
My knuckles are chalk white as
my hands grip the armrests.
I try to swallow but my throat is dry as dust.
I frantically push the bell to summon an attendant.
I need water…..anything!
She appears looking concerned
and I’m impressed how calm she remains 
in such a dire situation.
My knees tremble as I once again
examine my seat, ready,
should I need it as a flotation device.
Feeling uncontrollably trapped,
my chest tightens, my lungs scream for oxygen.
Suddenly the plane lurches, the engines roar, 
then silence.
Oblivious to those around me,
terror has me tight in her grasp.
A pounding headache
tortures my disconnected thoughts.
A sudden wave of imminent diaster engulfs me.
Assuming the worst,
I close my eyes and pray for a miracle.
In response, comes the ominous announcement,
"Ladies and gentlemen,
we will be taxiing to the runway momentarily,
we apologize for the delay.’’

Premium Member God's Saving Grace

God’s Saving Grace

Sudden flashes of lights
Brings me out of my fog
    I panic slamming the brake

Still to close
 	I gear down
       Hearing the skidding tiers
    Smelling rubber

Overwhelmed by terror
Traffic coming from both directions
I grip tight to the wheel turning it  
       To the left on a two way street 

I glance to the right of my vision and see
I’ve Leaping into the path
       Of an oncoming truck

Feeling completely helpless
Knowing it was going to hit my right side of my car
 
I glance forward to the sight of a ditch
I turn the wheel left to avoid going in

I Hit gravel
Then a thump back on the road
       As the steering wheel is jerking left to right
Right to left out of control 

At that moment
I see my son in a vision
Watching the terror he went through
Avoiding a deer and running into a pond
A few years back

At that moment
God stands as my Master
With arms out stretched
God takes control of my world

He reaches out
Pushing the truck away
To the right to avoid hitting me

The truck is forced into an oncoming car
God reaches out to the left and stopped  it

He takes hold of my world
And takes control
Of my steering wheel
      And safely makes me come to a stop
On the side of the road
Facing the wrong direction

I sit in shock shaking uncontrollably 
Marveling the miracle
That had just happen

I pulled in safely  into a driveway to calm down

I make the sign of the Cross
 And whispered prayers of
God saving grace
 Because He took control
I didn’t have the skill
     To do what I did

Three days later I’m still in tears
Of the nightmare
I went through
  A movie being playing over and over
           Of a vision of God stretching out His arms
      Guiding everyone  

I’m blessed with the relationship
I have with God
Believing in His miracles
His guardian angels
Archangel Michael


© 7/3/2015
© Eve Roper  Create an image from this poem.

Her Lips Tasted Like Moonlight

Our souls connected on a higher plane,
I didn't know her first or last name,
she was definitely from Venus,
probably my twin flame.

I'll take my chances,
and put up no fight--

Oh, her lips tasted sweet
just like pure moonlight!

Saturn spun off
and sliced through space.
The solar wind couldn't wipe
the smiles from our face.

We sought out stars--
uninhabited constellations.
Quivering uncontrollably
with celestial vibrations.

A new song chimed,
I was so blown away.
She was the one,
my new Namasté!

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