Best Mental Poems


Premium Member OCD Overdrive collaboration with Ink Empress


Life is not as sweet as a bowl of golden glace cherries,
nor is there a golden illuminated future for a fruitless mind.
Trembling hands and gritted teeth disguise my disorderly brain, 
feeling lost in the mist, 
surrounded by drowned out voices.

Deceptive chanting charms plant everyday confusion,
with stalking emotions running through my mind's corridors,
carrying a voice that gives birth to eerie echoing funnels,
pumping frustrating thoughts deep into the depths of phobias.

My demeanour hides behind a canvass of mysteries.
a pure transfiguration, where compulsive obsession
takes possession of stalking my vulnerable affections.
There's too much repetition in the fluidity of periods and seasons,
as I lose this battle to control my will's strength of life.

I constantly wonder if the only place of victory, 
to find peace,
is to slay silent intoxicating depths, 
which desire to explore me. 
But in reality despise me with conflicting contradictions unable
to stop my puzzled conscious suffocating  from over analysing,
enslaving excessive dwellings from every aspect of my existence. 

Life is not a jigsaw, 
I do not have the energy to find every piece. 
My soul's fine heaven is rimming with untold tales of nature, 
but misjudged precious intentions result in distracted actions. 
An angst which has no remedy as all scars remains unseen.
 
But my Fears are made into gems, 
when alone with my nemesis, 
an unwanted life long partner 
feeding upon deranged dilemmas,
which keep my mind, 
spiralling in circles of uncertainties.
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Counting Seconds-The Rewrite

i sit lonely. 

the crowded restaurant is thick with sound 

i pick away at it 

moving back into the stagnant silence 
of my own comfort

the air is nasty here 
it telepathically abuses my thought patterns

still 
a far cry better 
the loud hum of food 
marching to the vacant crowd 
suffocates me

a decorated plate joins my table  
strikes a conversation with the cutlery 
there is no call from the governor 
as i attack my food
fork knife teeth

bites later 
a paper plane flies in 
a swipe of my plastic 
makes quick work of the bill

i exit 
seemingly quicker 
than human eyes can catch

i hate this part
i parley my way through 
too many bodies
all the while staring 
at a concrete maze 
never making eye contact 
with a single soul

i do that
i always do that
keep the entrances of my being 
away from those who would stare me down 
attempt to engage me in conversation 
with a desire to lock eyes

if they looked in they would burn 
i’d be held responsible

FINALLY

 home
the only environment i feel safe in

my therapist will be proud
almost an hour today
assuming i see her again

i am covered in my own dew
my breathing sporadic

i line up an array of pills like good soldiers 
as i continue my attempt 
survive another day

it will take hours to regain my sanity 
all the while questioning the purpose

 why must i assimilate
back into the dungeons 
they call society 

it behooves me 
find one reason
join the rank and file 
plug back into a horrendous grid 
i had escaped 

i 
grow 
weary 
of 
my 
own 
thoughts

ignore my voice

slowly regain my footing

plant roots 
hope they’ll take hold
attempt to return 
into the vacuum of my existence

i sit lonely.
Form: Prose

Premium Member Cruel Compassion, Collaboration With the Silent One

My mind is a puzzle of cryptic metaphors.
whilst searching for my sanity,
I've become my own worst enemy.
In this cauldron of despair,
time is like sand in my hand -
an oxymoron poetic 
paradox of cruel compassion. 

Sadistic green eyes bring my demise,
as my sighs are captured by the wind,
slowly morphed into madness and travesty.
I sit alone on the throne of midnight illusions,
cursed by dark imaginations 
lingering like mouldy air,
as vivid flashing images 
engrave inkstained imprints.
Dripping lament from a 
palette of black and white,
colouring in the emptiness of my sensitive soul.
In echoing whispers of weeping violins,
whimsical vibratos from wooden wind-chimes,
steadily orchestrate instrumental sonatas, 
ringing through my strained metallic heart,
whilst I try to strum strangled strings,
harmonizing an inconsistent symphony of a tragedy.

Fate has me stranded within a monotonous loop of uncertainties,
for when twilight’s last breath piercingly eclipsed over 
lyrical edges of my insomniac shadow,

it awoke restless beasts of nocturnal nights -
in nightmares I wondered does no one hear my screams?
i can see dazzling dusts of black diamonds,
drizzle manuscripts of maniac irony 
translating dialects hidden behind unshed tears 
that gleam like shooting stars,
as i sing mystical moonbeams,
sewn with silver sequins of euphonious memories on refrain,
chorused from nameless tunes of timeless tomorrows,
as the magic of the maestro,
residing in the highest bridge of sanguine skies,
guides these electric fears, trapped between 
synchronized layers of my unsettled skin.

I'm tired from intangible tears in the mirror,
slowly sinking me in swirls of sorrow,
like a bruised creature 
seeking shelter in a silk cocoon,
so this aurora's smile is no longer a masquerade.
I hunger for rays of sunlight to paint my skin
in a plethora of pastels,
 so this golden bronze queen,
can once again glitter 
in a crown of illuminating heartbeats.


Premium Member Mary Rogers

*Had to bring this one back. Like my Poe poem, this one follows me wherever I go. It is my favorite lyric that I've written thus far. It is loosely based on a real person and deals with the issues of mental illness and homelessness. To bring it up to date, a fresh audio was recorded this evening by none other than Thomas Woodward, who will readily admit that he can't bloody sing, though he takes a stab at it during the last stanza.

Couldn't pay the rent, could you Mary? 
Back out on the street, dearest Mary.
Winter's in the air/once a girl with pretty hair, 
And the days are shorter now, my sweet Mary. 

Where will you go, Mary Rogers?
Parks can be so cold, Mary Rogers. 
Out into the night/shadows everywhere a fright, 
(Tell me) where will you go, Mary Rogers?

Store clerk turned her head, will you Mary?
Run fast as you can, dearest Mary. 
Cops are on the way/daddy's calling you to play, 
And the gun you dropped they found, my sweet Mary. 

What will you do, Mary Rogers? 
Jail can be so cold, Mary Rogers. 
Throw away the key/pray to God on bended knee, 
(Tell me) what will you do Mary Rogers? 

Stranger took you in, did he Mary? 
Promised you the moon, dearest Mary.
Black eyes gave away/what an awful price to pay, 
And nobody held your hand, my sweet Mary. 

When will it end, Mary Rogers? 
Men can be so cold, Mary Rogers. 
Needles always lie/mommy's back home baking pie, 
(Tell me) when will it end, Mary Rogers? 

Slept under the bridge, did you Mary? 
Zero Fahrenheit, dearest Mary.
Peaceful dreams hold sway/fly across the Milky Way,
No more worries for the pain, my sweet Mary. 

When will we learn, Mary Rogers? 
People can be cold, Mary Rogers. 
Turn our heads away/it may be our child someday, 
(Tell me) when will we learn, Mary Rogers? 


Time to wake up now, won't you Mary? 
Paradise is here, dearest Mary. 
Old world passed away/it's a bright and lovely day, 
And the sun shines just for you, my sweet Mary.
© Tom Woody  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Lyric

Premium Member The Narcissist Who Saved Himself - Cynthia Howard - collaboration with Dilly Dally

nothing spoils this surface view ~ see me
crave attention, gift empty touch  
tonal mask veils flaws and vices  
face alter ego and kneel

to feed the shallow shadow that circles 
~ around gossamer tears of the grieving moon,  
as silenced streaks of tongue-twisted lines,  
undress a puddle of poisoned stars

pull force imperceptible, attraction
lost in blissful contemplation  
comatose until that last equation  
gravitational persuasion creating longing 

but will the lake that flows with fears  
thaw words tangled in golden chains?  
for I’ve drowned in liquified lies,  
drawing perfection from imperfect reflections

delve to the depths of my spun world  
peripheral interference dissipates in darkness  
only requirement is carved version of self
that steadies my hand and drags me in

sinking beneath Narcissus's polluted undertow
tainted oxygen leaves my expanding lungs 
hitting jagged rocks, spoiled skin shreds,
exposing a forgotten empath ~ salvation rises
Form: Ekphrasis

Premium Member Silence Felled

Silence Felled

Lurking in dark corners
The swamp stirs in the night
As the deceiver rises
Begging to share his illusions might

Only behind the veil
Does he let his murky words sail
Deceiving the lady of the house
While he runs like a little mouse

He drinks a mans ale
Then double crosses once stale
Armies can’t fight the silent one
He hides in the corners of your mind

Draw blood with your pen
Let him flow towards the hither end
The skeleton can’t do much with his quill
Stabbed of his devious will


Premium Member Poetry Thief

Mara loves to steal from others
A skill well learned with no druthers
Paraphrase one word or two,
Hoping no one has a clue
Her poems formed from another's

Mara cannot hide behind her word crime
And pretending to, is a waste of time
Poems and words can be traced,
to a new plagiarism case
She needs to stop and find a new pastime
Form: Limerick

Premium Member Insanity Music

Last year, her imagination went double
so she ignored her previous schedule.
She put all her dreams inside of clear jars,
decorated with different, assorted stars.

She believed if she always kept things rounded
she would also succeed in keeping life grounded,
So, she would circle every found square
believing it demonstrated her constant care.

Plastic, colored eggs hung from her ceiling
to keep her floor from creaking and reeling.
Pale pink and bold gold stripes on her wall
recorded every received telephone call.

She worshiped and loved both the sun and moon,
but only from inside her living room.
She feared really being observed outside,
a place where stray cats were known to hide.

She always loved to dance, but during this year
she’s been dancing to music only she can hear.
All these things bring her secure nuances near,
but make her sanity less and less clear.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member My Mental Health

My mental health is complicated
Now euphoric, next sedated
Nightmares daily duplicated
All my friends are alienated 
Happy times? They're confiscated
Mental health is complicated 

My mental health is temperamental
One day strong, the next I tremble 
Demon thoughts in turn assemble
Scars you see? Not accidental!
Happy/sad so incidental
Mental health is temperamental 

My mental health is so unstable
Able battles with Unable
Joy is nothing but a fable
Traumas each a different label
Hide then dance up on the table
Mental health is so unstable 

My mental health is oscillating
Praising now, then deprecating
Morbid days turn scintillating
Love now, hate now: aggravating
Soothing words are non-placating
Mental health is oscillating 

My mental health is so confusing
Flattering and then accusing
Comforting when not abusing
All my sanity consuming
"End it now" my life pursuing
Mental health is so confusing
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Marionette of Flesh in a Borrowed Dress

"Marionette of Flesh in a Borrowed Dress"
- Daniel Henry Rodgers

The hourglass, 
a skeletal jester 
mocks in the tomb's chill
Each falling grain an emaciated sigh, 
"Soon you'll cease to be."
The mirror's cold reflection, 
a Gorgon's ghastly guise
A marionette of flesh with vacant... 
hollow...
colorless eyes.

The worms, like pallid mourners 
watch me shrink
A marionette of organs,
cold and pale, pink.
This flesh, a borrowed dress 
once sprightly
Now stained and thin
Holds tight the secrets only
death can win.

This borrowed dress, 
a shroud where my story's writ
In laughter's faded stitch 
and tear's accusing slit.
A map of life etched deep 
with scars that mar the grain.
A raven of fleeting triumphs 
a pendulum of ceaseless pain.

In the shadowed hollows 
where sorrow resides
I languish.
marionettes of fate's cruel designs!
Each scratch and cut a lament. 
each tear a bitter sea!
Bound by the chains of my...
limited mortality.

In this borrowed dress,
I mourn what could have been...
Lost in the convulsion of my own... sin.
I am transformed 
but not redeemed.
I am drifting into the void
My spirits are shattered 
and my dreams destroyed.
So in the silence of eternity 
I find my rest
Lost in this body of my own... 
detest.

And though this shell 
a chrysalis 
soon withers 
and decays
I cast aside the shroud 
no longer bound or worn.
Accept the endless night,
where a new self-forlorn is bourne.

Transformed 
a residual relic 
through the void 
I fly

Suture with stardust catgut, 
a worn scroll in the sky.

Premium Member Vibrations of heart - Blitz with Ink Empress


Can't stop flashbacks
Can't stop vibrations
Vibrations like echoes
Vibrations irritating wounds
Wounds that bleed
Wounds that torment
Torment the mind
Torment emotions
Emotions of guilt
Emotions full of anger
Anger from the past
Anger from shame
Shame that's distressing
Shame that's intrusive
Intrusive images haunt
Intrusive like storms
Storms striking like lightning
Storms louder than thunder
Thunder that's frightening
Thunder causing self-destruction
Self-destruction of the heart
Self-destruction of the mind
Mind acts recklessly
Mind reacts resentful
Resentful with regret
Resentful outbursts
Outbursts misunderstood
Outbursts they generalised
Generalised anxiety
Generalised questions
Questions of sanity
Questions of ability
Ability to stand
Ability to walk
Walk in fear
Walk through a hellish reality
Reality discarded
Reality unseen
Unseen persecution
Unseen war
War with life
War with time
Time is too intense
Time to surrender
Surrender to uncontrollable stuttering
Surrender to my misleading heart
Heart palpitations
Heart is numb flatline
Flatline
Palpitations...
© Silent One  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Blitz

Premium Member Mental Hospital Bills

dadgum doctors, heads up their butts
poking, prodding, pricking skin
neurologist a psychopath
gets pleasure as electric volts pass through my body

family doctor showed little concern
made me paranoid about irregular heartbeat
EKG failed to determine cause
left me more in doubt than at ease

dentist like a character from Dustin Hoffman’s “Marathon Man”
the more pain inflicted
the more he rejoiced
deep root cleaning caused severe infection

bloodwork done by Vampira clones
labs filled with tubes and needles
results not shared with me
yet I footed the bill

optometrist an Oriental who moved so fast
didn’t care if the prescribed glasses worked
boo on you, dang aristocrats
waving your credentials

nurses so slow to respond
MRI promised on CD, but couldn’t be obtained
just like the blood tests, needed a “report”
doctors driving me insane

each should share my mental hospital bills


*Based on ongoing health tests and written for PD’s contest.  Assignment Free Verse, 25 lines, category slam, sad and educational, title: Mental Hospital Bills

Sarah's Story - Mental Illness

Sarah’s Story - Mental Illness

Sarah, the “Crazy Lady,” was a familiar sight,
roaming the streets any time of day or night.
Her foul body odor announced her presence,
as she paraded around in her filthy, smelly garments. 
Walking barefoot regardless of the weather,
in her state of mind, she couldn’t do better. 
Children teased and made fun of Sarah,
reciting ridiculing ditties, adding to the drama.
Behind her a lively entourage would follow, 
taunting and calling her names creating a sideshow.
They howled with childish laughter,  
as Sarah hurled angry profanities after.
An avid collector of all kinds of trash,
she transformed her abode into a garbage stash.
Sarah’s odd behavior made her fair game,
to unkind people who had no mercy or shame.
While many folks turned a blind eye, 
young boys threw rocks and other missile,
at the roof and windows of the shack she occupied.
Behind bushes, they would scamper away to hide,
as Sarah furiously dashed outside, 
brandishing a machete, cudgel, or broom, 
screaming out curses, damnation, and doom.  
Like a cancer, her mental illness had devoured her brain,
and before long, she was officially "certified insane."
Most agreed it was for her own benefit,
and for the good of society to be rid of this "misfit." 
But even though she was locked away in an institution,
no psychiatric treatment could cure her mental condition.
When Sarah finally died, she was unloved and alone; 
her passing was hardly noticed, and she was mourned by none.



Note: This piece was inspired by a true account. While we have made great strides in the study of mental illness and understanding it, unfortunately negative attitudes and beliefs toward people who have mental health conditions are still common. Thus, as a society, we still have a long way to go to improve our attitudes and to show more caring and compassion for those who suffer from various types of mental illness. 

08-06-2015

Contest:      Mental Illness
Sponsor:     Nathan D.
Placement:  7th
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member You Cry Alone

"laugh and the world laughs with you,
cry and you cry alone"

how true and sad these words once penned
for this I've learned, yet learn again
that when I bloom and smile with glee
the world and life will laugh with me
I'm not alone....never alone
the joy is not for me alone!

Yet when the demons heart possess
and come to steal my happiness
when all around is darkest gloom
and none to rescue from the tomb
I am alone.....I cry alone
the grief I bear....I bear alone!

I know your heart is bleeding too
for some have been unkind to you
and none can see the bitter tear
nor chase the goblin of your fear
You feel alone....you cry alone
but that pain you bear, don't bear alone!

Now turn to me; remember this
I know this pain, this poisoned kiss
depression has a hold of me
and this I say with certainty
though other hearts are made of stone
you're not alone....NEVER alone!

Eileen Manassian

This poem got 1265 views. You can find it here on Poetry Soup if you want to read the comments and pics I've posted with it. There's one of Robin Williams...to man who made everyone smile but cried alone. I hope you enjoy the video. I haven't been able to write in some time, so I'm posting some videos of Rhymes of the Times that I recorded some time ago. :) Enjoy
Form: Rhyme

Third Person

He speaks metaphorically to avoid dealing direct, 
shows the unknown hand he’s against too much respect, 
writes about his bravery though it’s no where to detect
or talks in the third person like this I'd expect.

Going on about himself like it’s happening to someone else,
distanced from reality his distracted mind plays stealth, 
deflecting the desperation straying from his fails, 
because being himself is hell with his fractured mental health. 

You’d think he would try to save it but instead he stays away,
doesn’t acknowledge the slaying, writing on as if okay,
creates a situation where he has the final say,
when really just a coward putting himself on display. 

He must have found comfort writing this because it's structured, 
a new angle on the old tale nothing more than a distraction,
because as soon as it finishes he's back to a spineless buster,
hiding from conflict comforting another poor reaction. 

How long will he go on paving this path of pathetic,
in a dangerous direction purposely neglected, 
there’s the renegade he speaks of, self elected, 
walking towards death being naturally selected.

But deep in this metaphor he doesn’t change a thing,
in his head it’s someone else or a tale of some thing.
To know what happens next go back where this poem begins,
now knowing what life is when your name is Nick Trim.
© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

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