Sea Scars

There’s a story here,

embedded within 

a righteous reef

of broken silence,

where scars remain

engraved on sea stars,

entangled between sand 

in empty oyster shells, 

reminding me

to breathe until i reach

the surface, 

for hope still swims

through the barnacles

that bloom amidst the blues.

These tears mean nothing

and everything

as they define the demons

I disguise through violent dawns,

though my will to grasp

onto faith is slowly wearing out.
 
Life and its merciless ways

of enlightening

murky waters with reflections

of taunting tortures

endured across miles, 

Keep me unconsciously drowning,

uncontrollably,

unable to seize glowing planktons.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ricci Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 4:08 AM
Hello Ink Empress. Good Morning. This is gorgeous poetry with poetic expressions voice tone imagery and yes the ever popular emotive factor. This is an entry that should be read out loud with emphasis and feeling because it is poetry in the truest fashion. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent for your free verse shines. It was an honor turning to your page this morning. For those who do not read it must be a very dark world. Take Care (smile)
Empress Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 4:38 AM
This comment made me smile Awwn thats so kind of you to say, and i appreciate you feeling my words and liking my poems thank you so very much for your poetic presence , you’ve made my day
Fowler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 6:30 AM
Truly a journey of hope through a tangled web of sea grass. :) Very enjoyable read Inky (may I?). Thank you! :)
Empress Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 12:12 PM
Thank you for your kind words and support. Appreciate your support, and yes ofcourse you can :)
Hind Avatar
September 9, 2023 at 2:40 PM
Wow!! Your work is absolutely amazing! A fav for me! I added you too!
Empress Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 9:01 AM
Thank you sweet soul
Kaufman Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 3:00 AM
I love the metaphors in this powerful and wonderfully descriptive poem. The line, "hope still swims thru the barnicles" reassures the reader that although the writer is in a state of deep despair, he or she remains hopeful. I feel like I'm scuba diving here. I think it's deserving of a POTD for certain.
Kaufman Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 11:44 AM
It was snorkeling in Cancun. I don't know how to dive so I appreciate the you clarifying. I write so early in the am hours and it's amazing how my spelling has gone down the tubes these days also. I do love that term "word weaving", very whimsical Ms. Ink. You are quite a talented writer.
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Awn thank you so much you felt the underwater ambience in my word weaving. Have you ever been scuba diving? I love snorkeling, its really soothing to go snorkeling but diving ive never tried altho my son loves it. Thank u again
Sharma  Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 5:09 AM
Sigh, what an emotive and heart-aching write that can stir so many feelings within the soul. It mainly transpires the complex emotion, of being to weary to trust anymore in faith and hope.. The most important fundamentals that keep ourselves going.."scars remain engraved on sea stars", "hope still swims through barnacles that bloom amidst the blues", "the tears mean nothing and everything" Sigh, I can feel the vulnerability here, and I know where this comes from..truly painstaking and deep
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:50 AM
You are the best always so kind and sweet and you grasp every detail of my poems, which i truly am grateful for . Thank you so much angelic star
Sharma  Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 5:12 AM
"My will to grasp onto faith is slowly wearing out", "keep me unconsciously drowning.. Unable to seize glowing planktons" The way you've described this is a very yes, island-ish way as you say, this has truly held my heart spellbound.. Although being very poignant, it reads beautifully.. Another evocative write from your bleeding Ink.. Love this so much!
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 4:26 AM
Creative metaphors using the sea and sea creatures to express your feelings. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page because your comments added a special touch. Sara
Empress Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 6:49 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and generous support i truly appreciate you reading
Daisy Silk Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 9:39 PM
Embedded scars as deep as the sea, the amazing way you have characterised the ocean and the depth felt in your heart, the suffocation that; “ Keep me unconsciously drowning“ what a emotional coral scape of beauty you describe. Beautiful Daisy
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 2:30 AM
Thank you always for being so supportive and for coming on soup to show me your support, i appreciate you
Lindley Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 2:07 PM
Hope and destiny are within this excellently presented new creation my good friend. A true poet's thoughts grace the eager page. We all face life's travails but some seem to have it worse. Your poetry seems to flow from a master has seen and lived. A true gem and a clear fav for me. God bless you.
Empress Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 2:29 AM
Thank you always for not just reading but feeling my poems, you are so very generous. Appreciate your heartfelt response and thank you for the fave
Kauffman Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Inky, as always, I am left with a fullness of admiration unlike the "empty oyster shells" in your tidal sorrow. This poem has all of the elements of a beach in the pacific NW - "oyster shells, "barnacles," "glowing planktons" of August phosphorous. I, too, have scars from scrapes with barnacles. I love your sense that even though these things keep you "constantly drowning" you rise to the surface again and again still seeking life in sea stars. Thank you for this poetic gem. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:50 AM
You are so kind, thank you so very much for sprinkling such beautiful thoughts on my feed. Truly grateful. Have you seen planktons? They are gorgeous.. thank you again i appreciate your poetic presence
Baker Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 9:57 AM
A FAV for my list, Ink. Thank you for sharing your challenges in life through you unique and engaging poetry, my friend. I like the way you use colors in your poetry by enhancing them with descriptive adjectives. Creative and enjoyable poetry for me to read. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Empress Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:07 AM
You are always ever so generous thank you so much. So glad it is a fav for you. Appreciate your visit and your detailed feedback
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 9:09 AM
Hope is probably humanity’s biggest illusion IE, yet without it life becomes nihilistic, and the demons flood in to fill the void, nicely written with extremely deep metaphors, cheers David
Empress Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:06 AM
Right? I always feel so too, but somehow with faith, we must fight the demons. Thank you for reading . Grateful
Poet Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 7:13 AM
Your poem dear, INK is an exquisite work of art. It is evident that this piece carries a deeply personal sentiment, as opposed to being a mere creation of fiction. Hope, as a guiding light, is what breathes life into our souls. You have exposed the scars etched into your mind and heart, revealing a vulnerability that only a skilled poet could navigate. Venturing into the depths of your wounds, gracefully pouring your emotions onto the page while skillfully enduring the powerful waves of life.
Empress Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:05 AM
Your comments are as poetic and deep as your poems, i am grateful that you can read between lines. Thank you so much for being so supportive
Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 5:25 AM
- Wow...a story no one can tell ... engraved on the starfish...answers buried in the sand long ago...reflections...of demons...one becomes powerless...a poem of pain. .. great poetic writing, Ink - hugs
Empress Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Thank you always you are such a supportive soul here on soup. I appreciate you
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 3:30 AM
The diction of the sea.. its alluring image and scary mystery! You have chosen to bare your soul there with a story of scars engraved in your mind and heart.. Only an adept poet can walk on the edge of wound and pour her ink while surfing and weathering powerful waves! Great one! Dear Empress! God bless your amazing soul.
Empress Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 6:35 AM
Dear kind soul, you are truly a gem, how I’ve missed your sincere comments, thank you so very much always appreciate you
Mcintosh Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 3:10 AM
Wonderful writing. Enjoyed. God bless you always, and your ink, which is amazing. With love, Gina
Empress Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 6:35 AM
Dear sweet gina, i appreciate you always
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