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I grew up in Middletown, where everything was pretty much average. Every house, every car, every mom, dad and every kid were all just about the same. Except for Paul Locke. Paul was the only Jewish kid on the block. But that wasn't what made him different. Paul could eat dirt and seemed to enjoy doing so. Someone would say, "show'em Paul", and he would. Sand, red clay, loam, dust, it didn't seem to matter. Paul would reach down and grab a handful, choke it down and then laugh uncontrollably at his accomplishment. He was at his best in those hot July and August days when we hadn't seen rain all summer. Thinking back on it, I don't believe I ever saw him do mud. I suppose even being different must have its limits. Give Me Your Best James Tate-Poetry Contest Sponsored by Space Cadet 11/03/2016

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Date: 8/4/2021 11:44:00 PM
I enjoyed this one Charlie. It took me back a few years. It was good to drop in on you again. I appreciate your wisdom.
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Date: 8/31/2021 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Curtis...
Date: 8/15/2017 12:42:00 PM
This poem was so funny w/nostalgic love, Charlie. It had me laughing so much.This is a happy poem of childhood remembrance. Nice write. Love and peace.
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Date: 8/15/2017 10:26:00 PM
Thank you Freddie, I hope it made you smile...
Date: 3/16/2017 10:28:00 PM
...oh the quirks people have.:-) a zany piece...with a great last line! ...one of your most imaginative poems that I've read Charlie... with meaning that just makes me smile :-) blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/15/2017 10:27:00 PM
Thank you Lynn...
Date: 12/16/2016 6:14:00 AM
Outstanding write, Charlie. I just loved the way you made your point at the end. Congrats on your deserving win.
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Date: 12/16/2016 12:03:00 PM
Thank you Afzal...
Date: 12/3/2016 8:30:00 AM
Great write, Charlie! Congrats!
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Date: 12/3/2016 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Kim...
Date: 12/2/2016 9:37:00 PM
Congratulations on the top spot, Charlie. This is an outstanding piece of work!.........."even being different must have its limits"..pretty deep stuff actually!!..Larry
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Date: 12/3/2016 7:00:00 AM
Thanks Larry, this really is a first for me...
Date: 12/2/2016 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Strange guy, Paul.
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Date: 12/2/2016 8:10:00 PM
Thank you Janis...
Date: 12/2/2016 12:06:00 AM
Weird and absurd and surreal. Great work Charlie, and congratulations!
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Date: 12/2/2016 8:59:00 AM
Just a bit different Tamal, thanks...
Date: 12/1/2016 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Mr. Charlie Smith, for participating. Congratulations, too! -- Wesley C.
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Date: 12/1/2016 11:50:00 PM
Thank you Wesley for sponsoring and your award, it's a first for me. I tried to write it in my best James Tate imitation, I hope you enjoyed it...
Date: 11/12/2016 3:14:00 PM
You're a great story teller Charlie - this made me smile but it also made me think of people who suffer from pica ... so it could be true!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/12/2016 9:46:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I hope you enjoyed the read...
Date: 11/12/2016 9:54:00 AM
An entertaining write, Charlie! This might well be fiction, but I would not be surprised...I've seen people do the most crazy things, for as little as a cigarette! // paul
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Date: 11/12/2016 9:47:00 PM
Thank you Paul...
Date: 11/7/2016 11:48:00 AM
interesting take on the theme, charlie... your friend should be in the Guinness book of records!..huggs
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Date: 11/7/2016 12:15:00 PM
Just a fictitious write Nette, not that I didn't have friends that were capable of crazier things...Thanks for the visit.
Date: 11/7/2016 8:48:00 AM
He was different alright! Haha! I do not know anyone who could top him dear, Charlie! Good luck!
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Date: 11/7/2016 11:07:00 AM
Thanks for the visit Demetrios...
Date: 11/6/2016 6:39:00 PM
hahaha, I don't know diddly squat about James Tate, but I sure like this!!!
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Date: 11/6/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Date: 11/6/2016 6:39:00 PM
hahaha, I don't know diddly squat about James Tate, but I sure like this!!!
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Date: 11/5/2016 11:23:00 AM
Great visual - so interesting to read about what a child might do. LOL ...rg
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Date: 11/5/2016 3:57:00 PM
The only restriction is one's imagination, thanks Rhoda...
Date: 11/5/2016 7:10:00 AM
I love the imagery in this piece. You really captivated it well. Excellent.........A.M.
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Afolabi...
Date: 11/4/2016 2:01:00 PM
intriguing write that way different in theme.. greeeat stuff, charlie..huggs
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Nette...
Date: 11/4/2016 1:01:00 PM
A dusty tale, we all have our quirks. Intriguing story, bad case of Pica I suppose.
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Date: 11/5/2016 8:38:00 AM
Could be. Thank you Paloma...
Date: 11/3/2016 9:15:00 PM
Sure got me do an equal amount of smiling and thinking, great write!
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Date: 11/3/2016 10:52:00 PM
Thanks Arthur, if anyone could see more from this than just the humor, I've no doubt it would be you...
Date: 11/3/2016 4:05:00 PM
You're a great poet, Charlie, and now I discern how talented you are at storytelling.
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Date: 11/3/2016 10:25:00 PM
Oh so good to hear from you again Lin, you are too kind...
Date: 11/3/2016 2:26:00 PM
This was great, so real and common for an uncommon action. I love the way you did this. I could picture it in my mind. Another funny thought came to mind as well, but I think I'll keep it to myself.
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Date: 11/3/2016 10:24:00 PM
Like to hear it Chris, thank you...
Date: 11/3/2016 2:14:00 PM
He must have thrived on the attention trying to fit in.
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Date: 11/3/2016 10:23:00 PM
Probably so. Thanks for the visit Mr. Tim...

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