An Old and Trusted Friend

Tree branches bowed under the weight of the snow, 
like penitents kneeling, as Christmas shoppers reveled 
in the joy of the season. I left the house and struggled 
through the snow-clogged streets to meet a man 
I hadn't seen in years. He was the model of discretion, 
a confidant. I could always count on his fidelity and trust. 

I shivered, pulled the scarf more tightly round my neck, 
and pushed my way through the milling crowds to await 
his arrival. And there he was. The old familiar shambling gait, 
the oft-worn brown fedora perched upon his head, 
and suddenly I felt better. 

I chose a dimly lighted tavern. We ordered drinks and dinner;
linguini and shrimp, a dish for which we shared a common relish. 
Our conversation was tentative at first, until the effects 
of the alcohol loosened our tongues, and we talked of Oxford, 
days full of happy memories. 

But later, as the evening wore on and the tavern's customers
left with errands of their own, we were left alone. 
Silence descended. Thoughts of earlier in the day came crashing 
down upon me. He sensed something was wrong, as he always did. 

"She left me," I blurted out, sobbing uncontrollably. 

He said nothing, and gently squeezed my hand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mika-Stevens Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Emotional piece....and for the fortunate ones - at least someone you can share your thought and hurt with....for those less fortunate, even more trauma.....nice prose- and I think you sir for having stopped by to read some of my writings - though they are far less talented their yours.....
Bickerstaffe Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:46 AM
You sell yourself short my dear... Your pieces are most enjoyable. I love to read your work. Thanks for another delightful review! Best wishes, Keith
Lindley Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 10:09 PM
This, such as this, is EXACTLY why I still like to read Prose. I read it but I do not write it. Excellent prose, message and delivery my friend! A7
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 12:07 PM
Many thanks Robert... your kind remarks are greatly appreciated. Best wishes, Keith
Buhain-Baello Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 7:03 PM
An excellent prose on true friendship, lines portrayed the scene so magically and conveyed deep emotions in the last lines. I felt the impact, very strongly.~~~Cynthia
Bickerstaffe Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Bless you Cynthia! Your delightful remarks are so appreciated. Keith
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