Best Rename Poems


Premium Member It Is Not Happening By Chance

Rip down the statues
Rename the streets
Police the language
Label it hate speech

Burn down the cities
In peaceful protest
Justice is racist
Thus, civil unrest

No longer about 
Seats on the bus
A bus itself
Is labeled unjust

Envy a sin
Yet the very basis
Of a pernicious movement
Mislabeled social justice



True justice is blind
Social justice sees
Skin tone blamed
For all disparity

Media propogandist
Mix up the facts
Left is right
Right is wrong

Gaslighting Americans 
With their fake news
Giving demonic takes
Editing out truth

Hate your enemy
Get up in their face
Resist reality
Let ideology replace

Tragedy in the schools
Fools blame it on tools
Deceived bunch of souls 
Who forget man reaps what he sows 

How it all ends
Is known in advance
Simply have faith
Knowing it doesn’t happen by chance

Premium Member New Poetry Form

Infinite Dot Universe: A Spoof

This rhyming poem was inspired by Arthur Vaso.
It's about a poetic form, and just so you know...
these lines are being written just as a silly spoof
because some of my poems can be called a goof!

There's a new form called, "Infinite Dot Universe"
No, there really is not. Writing this, I feel perverse
because you see, I'd never tout my own poetry.
That would expose a definite lack of my humility.

The gist is that a person's favorite poet should be
him or herself. A bit like the haughty, Vivien Leigh
who thought, "Everything should be all about me."
If things didn't go her way, she'd say, "Fiddle dee dee!"

I digress and must confess this notion of Infinite Dot.
Perhaps instead of dot, let's rename it what it's not.
I think a narcissist would consider it more of a dote
claiming a masterpiece with each poem he/she wrote.

I have favorite poets, and one among them is not ME!
I wouldn't choose those I'd think special in PS. No siree!
That would be like saying who is worthy and who is not,
like the flawed Universe poetry form called Infinite Dot.

I know the first verses are nonsensical to say the least,
but they serve as a sword to slay an insensitive beast.
It's all "Much Ado About Nothing," I would tell a troll
who thinks he's of some importance. Ha!  I took a poll.
© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Star Struck

Many nights you’ve graced my sight
fair Orion, hunter and groom to the abyss,
and yet it would seem an eternity
before we would meet and kiss.

Bought you’d be, and brought to me
by the grace of He who waits.
So, when I die my heart can rise
upon your valor’s brace.

He’d rename Hatsya’s famed
so my soul could light the way.
Dearbhla true poetess of love
‘pon Orion’s sword held sway.

And up I’d rise at my demise
to crest the sky and space.


Stars In Time

If I could go back in time;
I would rename the stars that shine.

Hercules and Perseus would be replaced;
Elijah and Moses would take their place.

The Ten Commandments would shine brightly in the sky;
Reminding us that the zodiac signs were but a lie.

God's promises would be seen above,
As a wonderful sign of his love.

When the time has passed and gone by;
Just remember God never lied.

Premium Member Milton Creek - the New Sign

Leading his horse in the heat of the day
Been gone a long time but he still knows the way
Just a few shacks when he went for the gold
He’d found a few nuggets but now he’s too old

So, home to the town that he’s heard has expanded
He’s also aware that the town’s been rebranded
He knows he’s too late to catch up with the guy
Who’d bid him farewell but now lives in the sky 

He stops on the trail by the boundary sign
He don’t read-n-write but he knows the design
He knows that the words on the board aren’t the same
Must’ve been changed to display the new name

“Howdy, Old timer,” a passerby said
“The hotel’s just yonder for resting your head.”
The prospector said, with a big toothless grin,
“What’s the new name of this town that we’re in?”

“It’s now ‘Milton Creek’, as it says on the sign
It’s new name remembers a good friend of mine.”
The old fella, grinning and shaking his head
Said, “Milt said he’d live on long after he’s dead.

“I used to tell him he was being absurd 
but he always was just as good as his word.
To be sure that fella deserved the ovation
But can we just rename the towns in this nation?”

The passerby said, “There are them that makes rules
And then there’s the ones that behave like their mules
But sooner or later things get a bit rich 
And the mules all rear up and scratch at that itch

“Soup Creek fell prey to the powers that scheme
With lynchings and lashings an ongoing theme.
There’s cells in the jailhouse where innocents dwell
Soup Creek’s reputation had heard its death knell.

“You see ‘Soup’ emerged as a four letter word,
And good folk would tremble when e’er ‘Soup’ was heard.
So we ditched the mouldy old cheese for best stilton
And renamed our town to remember our Milton.”

The prospector slapped on the passerby’s arm,
“You think I just ran from the old funny farm?
When you said ‘Stilton’ twas just for the rhyme.”
The passerby grinned, “Fella… got it first time.”

Premium Member A Trio of Styles

A Rhyme on a Free Verse Poet

Her poetry has brevity and also clarity.
I really like her free verse done that way.
Like miniature free verse too are her haiku.
Often so amazing are they!
From “Kisses” to “Wishes” to “One Serene Morning;”
From “New Year” to “Afternoon Fun,”
The poems of this poet from Canada flow. . .
May Line’s work here never be done!

A Limerick for a Humorist

A fun gal from the Isle of Man
writes “naughty” whenever she can.
For her limerick fame
I should like to rename
her small country the Isle of Jan!

Me

I
write in
many forms -
from classic to
newer invented
one like this: etheree.
Preferring rhythm and rhymes, 
I don’t write free verse as often.
But I’ll try my hand at anything
at least once! I’d call my style eclectic.


Jan. 14, 2020 for Line Gauthier's You've Got Style contest


Premium Member Friendships Do Flourish


Well cross my eyes and call me Lucy
Met the sweetest lady of the group
She turns my crank, gets my motor a-racing
For poetry I don't give a poop

Should rename the site “Meet A Sweetie”
More appropriate don't ya think
This real cutie's on my mind the whole day
From her cup of nectar I drink

Age doesn't matter when it's a fantasy affair
Thirty years don't mean a thing
As long as our cravings are satisfied each day
The world continues to sing

Met a great big bunch of sweet ladies here
Not enough digits to count 'em
All I can say is my whole life's enriched
Each of these darlings is a gem

So this is my way of thanking youse guys
Where our creativity is nourished
Making all our lives a lot more worth living
Allowing friendships to flourish

Poetry Or Prose

Is it poetry or prose 
Who really knows 
Must it be in a shelf 
To rename itself.

This is a conundrum which has appeared here, in various guises over the many years I have enjoyed the talented 'writes' of the talented scribes who contribute their thoughts/feelings/desires and offerings in many forms.
However, the famous Irish playwright and wit, Brendan Behan was invited many years ago to Oxford University, to participate in a debate on this topic.
His opponent spoke eloquently for almost two hours on the important distinctions and the quality of prose.
Behan then rose to his feet and promised to be brief . He recited an old Dublin rhyme .

" THERE WAS A YOUNG FELLA NAMED ROLLOCKS
  WHO WORKED FOR FERRIER POLLOCKS
  AS HE WALKED ON THE STRAND
  WITH A GIRL, BY THE HAND
  THE WATER CAME UP TO HIS  .... ANKLES"

"That" declared Behan "is prose. But if the tide had been in , it would have been poetry".
© Sean Kelly  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Multicultural Britain - An Unapologetic Statement

Multicultural Britain
(An Unapologetic Statement)

Two “Festivals of Light” there are
Each and every year
The Jewish have their Hanukah
And Hindus their Diwali cheer

The end of Ramadan brings Eid il Fitr
The Muslim fasting's passed
The Welsh National Eisteddford
Culture, craft, songs not surpassed

There is the pagan Betain
That Celtic Festival of Fire
And the famous summer Solstice
Stonehenge, druids and sun inspire

Halloween crosses boundaries
Between Christian and Heathen
Leading on into November
Honouring death and ghosts of men

But amid all this Britain is
A bastion of Christianity
While accepting all religions
They too should be made to see

That in our tolerance still we stand
With our ceremonies and feasts in tact
Our Lent, Easter and Christmas
This is a simple statement of fact

Please don’t tread upon these rights
Which we’ve defended for years
Don’t rename our traditions
And cause confusion or trite fear

The Godless in society
Can rant and claim new ground
But faith is our foundation
And that foundation is very sound

So it IS a Merry Christmas
And a Happy New Year too
The Scots can call is Hogmanay
Because they have and always do

It is a happy holiday
To all despite their creed
To each give them utmost respect
In thought and word and deed

But let us all remember
Respect is a two way street
Do not dictate our policies
Among people that you meet

This country was here before you came
And settled on these shores
This is the British way of life
That you’ve chosen, now, as yours

So let the religions flourish
And none to those who’ve none
And live in total harmony
Until our time is done

A Satire To the Famous Politician

Politics! Politics! 
What a deadly 
game,making 
her victim early 
lame.Dear 
memories i 
recall there 
was but once 
an election,but 
present tell us 
of selection.
With eyes as a 
night owl ,we 
see men with 
ill mind as 
ancient saul, it 
would have 
been a 
pleasure to pay 
them the visit 
of christ and 
rename them 
paul, they think 
the game is 
neat yet it 
leads them to 
early pit,the 
whole thing 
digs a trench 
when they 
think its a 
fence.
 They believe 
they are 
players yet all 
they need is 
prayers,they 
are v.i.p at 
night 
clubs,when 
they need to 
prepare their 
cross,they 
think they 
have alot of 
fans but soon 
they will be 
taken away in 
vans.
Your form of 
revenue is 
easy,while 
workers at 
your avenue 
are busy, they 
went rubbing 
the poor to fill 
their abyss 
accounts,while 
their purses 
were opened 
by INEC leaches.
 Their wealthy 
company are 
now crumbling 
before a fall, 
and their once 
healthy skin 
are growing 
wrinkled,at the 
right time, the 
bile of death 
they 
tasted,the 
throbbing 
sensation of a 
last breath 
they 
experienced,and 
their life cud 
was cut, to 6 
feet he 
became 
reduced.

Premium Member Limerick Soup

Seems like this dude has got all youse guys going
Limericks runneth over and it's growing and growing
We'll rename the group
Call it Limerick Soup
I'm so thankful, my pride is literally overflowing

© Jack Ellison 2015

Premium Member Fi

Fi is my name 
Short for a title I can't rename

Fi is not a note
Two letters shorter than a mote

A fiddler from Finland
First son of a worker in hinterland

I travel near and far
With or without money in my jar

I am not broke
Just a funny bloke

I once sailed like a sailor bee
Zipping on a summer sea

I landed with my feet
One bended and one splinted with slit

I walked a million steps
From the shore spoke and loved a thousand veps

I trekked a flat icy nest
And climbed the trees of ivory crest

One day I found a coconut tree
A sacred palm from Thee

One name given to me
A connection of wireless canopy

Fi you can call me
Can't tell more about me

Read my name in reverse
Many things I say in verse

Ask me what my dream is?
Simple life I wish and kiss

I'll never drive you like a nut
Just stay true without a but

I'll keep you warm and safe
Stripping you out of troubles that chafe.

I am walking again...
This time on waters that drain

Temperature's so high that ire 
Dipping on a basin of fire

Soaking up to knee-level
Skimping, not revel

Then I dropped in a hole
Bigger than a man hole

I was flushed in a long tunnel
Sliding through a funnel

At the end of the hole I cram
I dropped myself in a dam

I was like a rolling stone
Tumbling and landing on a cone...

The story continues
An epic of giggling ensues

Next time I'll write a story about swan
When you acknowledge my greeting, not ban

Fi is my name with continuity
Fi of fidelity and infinity

See you next time
Be merry and smile all the time!

Slammed Slam

You say Trim Shady come out and play
but Shady aint around no not today
that alter ego went away away to stay
I'm crazy maybe taking on a lady
but here now so hip hip lets slay.

Now Brenda remember 
you're just a tender member of the opposite gender
a ghetto gangsta pretender 
that I can slam and mash and rename Blenda
and then drink to remain Trim and slender
you'd think I'd stop the slander but
you created a demand for banter
and I'm a year round Santa
present with presents that when I present
generate laughter like America
flying your Tard Spangled Banner with your hand on your heart
your anthem is British and your flag looks like childrens art.

And though we're a pond apart
you will only ever be as lethal as a leaf in free fall
leaving a tree that is leaning deceased and peaceful.

There's a horrendous fungal flap with a flammable feaces in all your pieces
it never ceases while my skill only increases 
you smell like cheeses off one of Jesus's pizzas
a pizza that's old, Jesus does that have to be told
you asked and I came and beat ya burned and lol'd at ya,
you wanted to play, well hip hip hooray, I played today!
© Nick Trim  Create an image from this poem.

Thana

Thana 


“Do not be afraid you don’t know what storm I’ve asked her to walk through”- God

She was in a bad state of mind 

Not realizing she was affecting mine

My eyes pressed tightly together 

While she reaches for anything she can find

Every beating remain as memories

That affected my life daily


I wish I can say I could look up to you 

I wish you looked me in the eye and said I love you too

But I’m just a disappointment, so you beat me

You’ll tell me to close my mouth and watch me as bruises form on my body


All I asked was for attention but only received rejection

We remained so distant that there was really no connection

Feeling like a lost child with nobody to love

I had no Guidance 

My fears hidden behind my silence


You weren’t a mother so I had to rename you

So I called you Thana which means death

And at one point I wished that upon you

Because of you, every night I have nightmares

But I was afraid to speak so everyone was unaware


But now I found my voice

I  finally decided to make a choice

Not to follow your habits

But to follow my dreams and use my own talents


Its funny how everyone thinks you’re so sweet

But each night you remind me of how my dad left me

Thana, I will always remember what you taught me

To be better than you

And to fight for me

A Mermaid's Tale

Trump's newly-appointed EPA Chief
Found himself buried in EPA grief

To prove he was no party-pooper
He likened Trump to a Giant Grouper

Swimming against an almighty current
Where even the sharks were no deterrent

"Forget the  'U' and immigrant no-hoper!
I'll rename that fish, "The Slippery Groper"!

Well,  Congress agreed to just let it pass
That's God's honest truth, you bet your wrasse!

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