Milton Creek - the New Sign

Leading his horse in the heat of the day
Been gone a long time but he still knows the way
Just a few shacks when he went for the gold
He’d found a few nuggets but now he’s too old

So, home to the town that he’s heard has expanded
He’s also aware that the town’s been rebranded
He knows he’s too late to catch up with the guy
Who’d bid him farewell but now lives in the sky 

He stops on the trail by the boundary sign
He don’t read-n-write but he knows the design
He knows that the words on the board aren’t the same
Must’ve been changed to display the new name

“Howdy, Old timer,” a passerby said
“The hotel’s just yonder for resting your head.”
The prospector said, with a big toothless grin,
“What’s the new name of this town that we’re in?”

“It’s now ‘Milton Creek’, as it says on the sign
It’s new name remembers a good friend of mine.”
The old fella, grinning and shaking his head
Said, “Milt said he’d live on long after he’s dead.

“I used to tell him he was being absurd 
but he always was just as good as his word.
To be sure that fella deserved the ovation
But can we just rename the towns in this nation?”

The passerby said, “There are them that makes rules
And then there’s the ones that behave like their mules
But sooner or later things get a bit rich 
And the mules all rear up and scratch at that itch

“Soup Creek fell prey to the powers that scheme
With lynchings and lashings an ongoing theme.
There’s cells in the jailhouse where innocents dwell
Soup Creek’s reputation had heard its death knell.

“You see ‘Soup’ emerged as a four letter word,
And good folk would tremble when e’er ‘Soup’ was heard.
So we ditched the mouldy old cheese for best stilton
And renamed our town to remember our Milton.”

The prospector slapped on the passerby’s arm,
“You think I just ran from the old funny farm?
When you said ‘Stilton’ twas just for the rhyme.”
The passerby grinned, “Fella… got it first time.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/7/2023 2:45:00 PM
Terry, a wonderful poem, well done!
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Date: 1/6/2023 10:26:00 AM
Brilliant,Terry! As close to perfect as a poem on this topic could get. Bravo!
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Terry Flood
Date: 1/6/2023 11:09:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene. When Tom renamed Soup Creek I thought, “YIKES!… What on Earth rhymes with Milton Creek (Which, it’s just occurred to me, sounds like a detective)? I couldn’t resist slipping in the ‘injustice’ references but ‘Stilton’ was pure rhyming indulgence. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 1/6/2023 9:08:00 AM
Quite a delightful read, Mr. Flood. Milton Creek is flourishing with ingenious poetic rhetoric each and every day. ;o]
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Terry Flood
Date: 1/6/2023 11:01:00 AM
Thanks, Arlo. It’s fun seeing the different angles from which we approach our Milton Creek tales. Shame Milt’s not here to enjoy. But then… is he? Thanks again. Terry
Date: 1/6/2023 7:33:00 AM
Milt deserved an ovation for many reasons, and so do you for writing this one, Terry. Great sign, great poem, great to be back in Milton Creek. Thank you for being so thoughtful and supportive over the last two weeks. Hugs.
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Date: 1/6/2023 10:56:00 AM
I can just imagine the time Tom spent on that sign, Jenna. Must have been a man on a mission. Glad they finally freed the ‘Soup one’. Expect you’ll be back on that leader board soon. Welcome home. Terry
Date: 1/6/2023 12:12:00 AM
Haha, absolutely brilliant Terry, faving this one, wasn't sure if folks would accept the name change. Took me ages to make the new sign with photo trickery, would have been quicker to make a real one out of wood. Lol I'm sure Milt would have approved and that's all that matters. Tom
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Date: 1/6/2023 2:31:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. ‘Stilton’ was such an obvious and dreadful rhyme that I couldn’t help myself. Hmm… what can I do with. ‘kilt on’. An American poet called ‘Milton’, Went for a hike with a kilt on, A sudden up draft, Exposed Milton’s aft, Those volcanic vents should be built on….. maybe not!
Date: 1/5/2023 8:25:00 PM
Milton Creek is a wonderful name, Terry, he would be mighty pleased:)
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Date: 1/6/2023 2:12:00 AM
I’m sure he’d be well chuffed, Jo. Sounds as though Tom’s rebranding is gonna be a popular move. Terry
Date: 1/5/2023 7:12:00 PM
Wonderful Terry, such a good write, Milt would love it too, the new name for the Creek would please Milt to the hilt… Belle
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Date: 1/6/2023 2:11:00 AM
All Tom’s idea, Belle. Glad you enjoyed this. Throwing in a deliberate appalling rhyme (Stilton) just tickled my funny bone. Terry
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