Star Struck

Many nights you’ve graced my sight
fair Orion, hunter and groom to the abyss,
and yet it would seem an eternity
before we would meet and kiss.

Bought you’d be, and brought to me
by the grace of He who waits.
So, when I die my heart can rise
upon your valor’s brace.

He’d rename Hatsya’s famed
so my soul could light the way.
Dearbhla true poetess of love
‘pon Orion’s sword held sway.

And up I’d rise at my demise
to crest the sky and space.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/21/2010 2:46:00 PM
very well said. its very creative and unique. thank u for the comment earlier on my poems. hope u can catch more of mine as i wil fo urs.
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Date: 4/20/2010 9:32:00 PM
Oh, I like how you did YOURs, Deb. Unique and interesting to read. Luv, andrea congrats!!
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Date: 4/20/2010 8:15:00 PM
Wow, I really love this one Deb and so glad I didn't miss reading it. Congratulations on being in the winner's circle with this gem. It is going into my fav's. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 4/19/2010 5:36:00 AM
So nice Congrats Deborah, poetess
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Shining Star poetry contest Deb. Love,Carol
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Date: 4/17/2010 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations for the win, dear Deborah. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 4/17/2010 5:12:00 PM
U lost me with your comeback .. explain about the title please? luv. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:32:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on your success in my "Shining Star" contest... excellent and intriguing write and thankxxx for supporting my contests... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/16/2010 10:32:00 AM
I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Deb. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2010 3:52:00 AM
Interesting write...Not familiar of the name of the stars and sky signs so kinda lost ...You made it sound so romantic...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem "Washed Away Hillslope"...You saw what others didn't...Sara
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Date: 4/15/2010 8:48:00 PM
Well penned poem of Faith
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Date: 4/15/2010 6:06:00 PM
flows well, enjoyed
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Date: 4/15/2010 5:32:00 PM
Well written verses about the Gods. Nice job.
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