Best Personalized Poems


Premium Member Quo Vadis Poetry, a Damsel In Distress-W

Captive damsel of creative-writing programs,   
Personalized, eulogized job of small groups,  
The frenetic activities handy to very few,  
Poetry now belongs to a subculture hew. 

We have accredited professional poets,   
Creative writing teachers at all levels,  
Composing computer- created poetry, 
Creating illusion of the Golden Age artistry. 

These professional poets have secured
Their own niches in the academic world, 
They cry over the spilt milk like jackals
Snarling over a dried-up well with no aims.

Quantitative work is guaranteed success,
Accuracy, meaning, technique matters less. 

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Fourth place winner
Contest: Poetry for poetry's sake of Paula Swanson
Quo Vadis is a Latin phrase meaning "Where going"

Premium Member Perpetual Gift

You have given me a gift
It is always wrapped
I perpetually open it with a smile
It is a never empty tin of freshly baked cookies 
It is an elixir to fill my empty cup
     even when it is not my birthday.

You have given me a gift
I have not earned it, but I can cash it in anytime I need it
You have dug deep and found 
The very thing that touches my soul.
It is the perfectly personalized present
It tells me you know me and you care
It is both old and new 
     like us.

I have often come with shoulders slumped
To drink from this well
And have walked away with a song in my heart
When I look at this gift I see your face
When I ponder its rhythms I hear your voice
I have drunk briefly from the spring of eternal youth
I have been fed manna that does not spoil
My heart is refreshed over and over
For you have written me 
a poem.
© John Watt  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Faved Poems In My Favorites a Treasure Trove of Joy

Faved PoetrySoup poems, I've many a favorite
                            Are such a treasure trove of Joy
                                    Each one so exquisite
                            
                 I've many, but imagine, I'll have many, many more
                        I wish they could be bound in books
                            Purchased through a PS store!

                   Leaves of golden artistry of poets that I love 
                              A little bit of heaven on earth
                                 Like sunshine from above

                I thought to name these poets, that have written
                          On my heart, but that would take
                                Me quite some time,
                          I don't know where to start!

              Suffice to say, I'm blessed, I love this precious group
                         What treasure troves of blessings
                             These poems on PoetrySoup   

              Keep shining, keep on writing, your voices like a song
                           The aroma of sweet fragrance
                              Gently stirring all day long

             For each new poem that's written, a gem within the sea
                             A gift of golden treasure is your
                                        Precious poetry


                   

             
                My image shared is just a 'dream' book of sorts, an
              idea of how it may be easy for PS to create a personalized
              book of our favorite file poems from our dear PS poets.
              My mother had an old empty scrapbook I inherited, 
              I applied the gold lettering just for an example. 
              Maybe Team Poetry could brainstorm an idea of this
              sort, I think it would be wonderful. Anyway, just a thought.
                                                   <3


Opinion

Every one’s got an opinion
We are entitled to our views
But, we won’t all agree the 
Difference often times are 
Huge
Somehow the simpler the 
Problem harder the 
Moot
Layering instead of issues 
Open wounds
And personalized attacks 
Are used
A point of contention is
The deliberate disguising of
The truth 
Distorting facts
Figures assembled by rote
Really there are a lot to be
Desired
Having regards to the distance
Between what had first prompt 
The opinion
And the reasoning that led
To this irrational tirade and suit
A stuck in a bog like situation
Ensue 
Like the dreaded dream state 
Being awake and can’t speak 
Move or do what you want to
While the root rot
The debates rambles on 
Unable to; save quip,
Get a grip on solid ground
Consensus pursuit

Summers Everlasting

Sand in sheets
scuffing skin and reminding 
last nights attire reaks like bonfire
 a hundred days like this 
   a sea of endless laughs rolling 
     like filmreels infinitely looped fantastic

Their cars rolled in, shiney and pretentious
  personalized plates waxed clever wit
crowding this small town to gloat in sand-side castles
Yacht club yucks shelling bucks like bayou crayfish
  condescending, fun loving, brash Chicago touristas
    
Bless their daughters who filed in sassy
  chin up, chest out trustafarians
scents of coconut lotion and clinique perfume
  wafting through our warm lake breeze reality
Giddy and loving our rough edged style
  intending to slum with townies, like we minded...
  smiles glowing in those bonfire nights
     mischievious and promising...
Every action thereafter defied catholic school education
   ...benificiaries of repression rebellion...like we minded!

Lake Michigan was paces from my bedroom window
 These sparrow serenaded mornings..
  ...morphing into something amphibious 
when the alewives were raked, we lay lazy 
Bodies melted into sand~~ sated with sun
 splashing back to cool off in sandbars
   coolers anchored in those cool waters
     taking long pulls off a perspiring Heineken

Beach days concluded with seagulls off to hunt
  Squaking as they ascended into pink and orangecicle skies
The water shimmered like a million illuminated snakes
 ...side winding-mirrored the suns final say
Couples pulled up to Harbor landing to see the show
  heads melted into one mass in windshields all around
    lovers seeing nature's beauty more vibrant as lovers do...

The sunset brings a new purple backdrop
  squaks are replaced with crickets chirps 
Bright-then-fading green...BRIGHT-then fading green
  Children gathered fireflies in jars laughing
Ice cream stained faces aglow with captive glee
 
Then to black and star filled, became the sky
  we returned to cooler sand pushing between our toes
scurrying through dunegrass seeking driftwood and brush
 creating a structure to take to flame...a science for proud boyscouts
There we gathered with newfound gals from cross lake 'burbs
  sunrise would end our night tonight...awaking to lifeguards scolding.
    
 

Inspired by John Heck's Summer Contest!!

Computerized Life

Whenever you feel lost
Or when you feel to reset
To look back and feel refreshed
Click the “Home” key
It’ll open the door to inner prosperity
A heart filled with joy
For there’s no place like home

When you feel like something is missing
Or you are missing something
You look through the woods and see a forest
You finally decide to run away, don’t!
Click the “insert” key
It’ll make space for a missing heart
A missing soul
Or a missing leter
Then the letter makes a word whole
No need to panic, insert!

Each time you feel you wronged someone
Or there’s something making you look or feel terrible
There’s a key called “backspace”
You can hit it way back to fix all the wrongs
All the mistakes that find you mistaken
Forgiveness is such a key, no, backspace
A sure way to fix things

Anytime you foresee danger
Trouble lingering ahead, impatiently waiting for you
You know you’ll lose it
You’ll lose her, him, them
Click on “delete”
It’s there to save you from the bad
It’s not gonna happen
It’s never gonna happen
Then you know you are safe

When you feel squashed and need to make way...
When things are compressed and you need to breathe
Take a walk and visit “space”
Bet you’ll need this guy as often
Might become great friends 
Don’t be afraid, you need air
And space is there to give it to you

Sometimes, in order to go forward
One needs to reflect
See what you have, or have had
Some highlights or flashbacks
Can go a long way
You need “PrtSc”, print screen in full
To observe for you what you cannot 
Through the naked eye of ignorance
Reflect, it’s a good part of moving on

One wouldn’t argue that
Now and again you could use a “tab”
From one place to another
Hop forward, this is a slow train
Why not adjust and keep the format most suitable for you
This is your life, take a tab!

Whatever life throws at you
You know you are the only one 
Who is in possession of this special key
It’s a key to happiness
It’ll transport you to any place you ever want to go
It’ll give you anything you need, and want
This key has a name, like no other
“Ctrl” is the only key you can ever use whenever you want to
It’s never far from you
It’s on both your right and your left hand side
Always reachable, always available
You should try it sometimes

Life can be computerized
But what if a computer is personalized?


Mapping My Final Ride To the Other Side

Mapping my final ride to the other side
Oh how I want to feel like I have arrived
Seeing so many good reasons why I have survived
Like I have climbed the highest mountain totally revived
Believing in myself knowing I will not be denied
Dreaming of my God that makes me so satisfied

Doing what I had to do so I didn't collide
With the love waiting on the other side
Only God gets to decide
Who gets to go on this amazing ride
Enjoying going to heaven where God resides
Feeling like I belong rested very much alive

Applying myself being careful not to divide
My faith that makes it all so personalized
With his wisdom and understanding he provides
His truth in the bible makes us unified
Oh how I want to make sure I realize
Jesus was tried and crucified
Giving up his life so we would be supplied

With a way, we can be revived
When Satan only promises genocide
Disguised as some better kind of high
That leaves us completely horrified 
Making Gods plan justified
Mankind needs to open his eyes to unwind
How much he needs to live in our minds
Only God knows what happens when we die

Bringing his divine harmony 
So when Jesus returns to rectify  
What Satan tried so hard to nullify 
Knowing that I won't be left behind
Believing I didn't live my life blind
To the truth that gives us passage to heaven
Where my soul can reign on high
Knowing or lord and master would never lie
About what will happen if we except him eye to eye

Unflinching Soul

I am worried 
I am in despair 
I am tensed
I am in low spirits

My song sounded melancholic 
My thought turned pessimistic 
My emotion became lifeless
My life seemed purposeless 

My heart lost its rhythm
Cold shivers rippled my blood 
My pulse missed its beat
Vacuum nested every nerve of my head. 

I started my journey from somewhere to reach nowhere 
I found myself toiling in the sands of dreary nightmare
I continued my cruise on the shoreless ocean
Searching for a home in an unknown destination 

Life seemed to be a battlefield and I transformed into a weaponless warrior
Fighting with an unknown enemy for a mysterious reason

Tears were racing with the valley of blood
Anguish supplanted the graveness of a flash flood
Having fed with very little hope of survival 
I gravely waited for the life's arrival. 

Sailing unchaperoned in the gigantic world, 
I realised that life is a personalized game and the triumph embosoms the unflinching souls.

Premium Member Your Love Is Actually Boring To Outsiders

If you look deeply and madly in the soup
You'll find the Love Poem Generator.
Just insert your loved one's name,
Flowers, colors, nouns and verbs.
Up will pop your own love poem
Personalized and made just for you.

Actually, love as a topic is done to death.
Who really wants to hear about your intimate love story?
Surely that is private and personal.
OK we want to share our thoughts and notes on love
Which is the greatest human feeling and emotion,
But what more can be said?

BoneTone Music Box

Introducing... BoneTone™ Music Box!
Tired of basic playlists?
Want music with soul -- and possibly a few spirits?

Crank open your ancestral vault
with the BoneTone™ Music Box--
the only music box infused with
generational trauma and hauntingly beautiful harmony. 

One gentle twist and you'll hear:

A waltz from your great-great-great aunt
(who may or may not have been a pirate).
A lullaby from a forgotten land
sung by someone whose name your bones remember.
A choir of regrets with a tambourine solo.

Whether it’s cryptic whispers, eerie hums,
or a drumbeat made from ancient sighs--
every note is personalized.
Because your lineage has a soundtrack, 
and it slaps.

Warning:
May summon chills, lost relatives, or spectral dance partners.
Not responsible for accidental séances.

BoneTone™ -- For when the past needs a remix.

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Premium Member His Lonely Guitar

He was dealt a harsh life 

But he tuned it into something beautiful 

He’s electric, like the body of his lonely guitar 

He holds a soft heart, yet remains inscrutable 

 

He’s swayed by music, his swift fingers hitting each note 

He frets, then he avoids, scanning for escape 

He holds onto his pain, like the neck of his lonely guitar 

Taking space when vulnerability takes shape 

 

He won’t feel safe if you get too close 

His magnetic shield attracts only sound 

Strumming vibrations, like the pick-up of his lonely guitar 

His gift to us is his music, so profound  

 

He’ll dismiss you, then feel remorse when you’re gone 

A self-fulfilling prophecy from personalized neglect 

Pushing and pulling, like the whammy on his lonely guitar 

His tension alters the pitch in his need to protect 

 

He doesn’t want to lose you, but he won’t choose you 

He gauges his emotional regulation through every tune 

As he plucks at your heart, like the strings of his lonely guitar 

In his authentic tone that causes my soul to swoon 

 

He keeps himself busy to evade any reflection 

He’s only secure on the stage hearing fan’s cheers 

He’s divided his pitch, like the fret of his lonely guitar 

He’ll scale you back while he’s hiding his fears 

 

His riff is survival while suppressing his demons 

Yet he maintains perfect control set by the saddle 

Where he’s safely anchored, like the bridge of his lonely guitar 

His wall of silence is more deafening in his battle

Premium Member Quo Vadis Poetry, a Damsel In Distress

Captive damsel of creative-writing programs,  
Personalized, eulogized job of small groups,     
Quo Vadis poetry, a damsel in distress?

The frenetic activities handy to very few,  
Poetry now belongs to a subculture hew. 

We have accredited professional poets,   
Creative writing teachers at all levels,  
Composing computer- created poetry, 
Creating illusion of the Golden Age artistry. 

These professional poets have secured
Their own niches in the academic world, 
They cry over the spilt milk like jackals
Snarling over a dried-up well with no aims.

Quantitative work is guaranteed success,
Accuracy, meaning, technique matters less. 

                        +++
December 16, 2014
Form: (Contemporary Sonnet)

Premium Member I'D Rather Write About

a flustered tango of Gypsy moths 
drumming the porchlight; chalk artists; 
the endemic disappearance of farms—silos lost 
in unkempt fields;  space stations; the sunlit-scent of lemon 
oil on cherry wood; birth; the chasm between cultural 
appropriation & cultural appreciation; the history in our dust; 
loneliness & heartbreak; trivia; funky funerals;  
climate change, hurricanes, earthquakes & neglected 
victims;  heirloom charm bracelets, homemade 
wind chimes & the homing sound made by a singing bowl; 
masquerade balls; cityscapes hidden in ant hills; fly 
fishing; serendipitous skinny dipping; missing children, 
teddy bear memorials, forensic identification, monsters 
never found in sleepy towns;  the horrors of zoos—
elephants gone mad, lions robbed of their pride;
book reviews;  civil unrest, bad cops & good cops & young men 
gunned down; brand new fire stations; cancer survivors who wear 
baldness so beautifully; my favourite pair of jeans; river rocks 
found by dearest hands; a letter that can never be 
received; joyful celebrations;  incandescent dragonfly 
dreams; twenty million at risk of starving to death; 
wildflowers shaking pretty little heads; 
misogyny disguised as religion; forgotten veterans who die 
a bit more inside every day; the rainforest, shrinking; 
saintly stoners & postulant prostitutes; toxic smog; 
madmen with warheads; cheese cake & ice wine; 
every personalized Kama sutra move & the God-given 
ecstasy of body on body language; holding hands;  
why one giggle can change everything; Thanksgiving 
prayers; abandoned minefields, boy soldiers & devastating 
amputations;  the songs of the working poor; lightning 
over the lake; his timely phone calls; brotherhood & sisterhood; 
love in its every form;  old maps; twenty-one gun salutes;  
the extinction of the Galapagos Giant Tortoise; being 
five, being twenty five, being ninety-five; kites; dogs chawing 
on ragged rawhide; church-like museums on a Sunday 
afternoon; make-shift picnics; deja vu; thrift store
wedding dresses; long drives with comfortable silences;
fading freedoms; censorship;  seamless moonlight;  
introspective dalliances with self-acceptance;  the power 
of purpose; how to be the bigger person;  how to go 
in a new direction; how to rise above . . .

Premium Member Continuation

I gave you the tale of my computer
Last month 
All is working....... 
Well sort of.

And again it came down to me to put in a network card.
It put up a stubborn  fight 
But two days later I MADE IT WORK! 
It really wasn't that hard

But there were other things 
Like licenses for the vehicles and me
Mine was the problem
My birth certificate name was different you see.

I had had it changed
But who knows in what state
The lawyer said "shoot
The one on your birth certificate will do.".

The Kansas license was personalized
And a beautiful thing
I decided I'd  keep it 
And one day put it out for all to see.

When I removed it 
I brought it inside
Washed and dried it 
And set it aside.

One evening Shirlee and Fred came by
On their way home from work
I wasn't here but they left some no, no's
For my dessert.

The next day they came by to give me a ride
It was off to garage sales we would go
Shirlee looked at me and said
"Mom is that your idea of a joke?"


I didn't pick up on what she meant
And she pointed toward the stove.
" I mean ," she said "Do you intend to leave your 
License plate up there?"

I told you it was special,
I didn't want it to get hurt
So I placed it on the vent
Above the cook stove to make sure.

It was tan 
And a buffalo stood with pride
The letters C I L E
Were printed on it's side.

I still didn't get the drift
Until she pointed to the four little words
And Read 
"HOME ON THE RANGE."

I had to sit down 
I was laughing so hard 
And when I think back
I still get a charge.

I haven't yet found my home on the range 
But I'll tell you this my friends
Following the next four lines 
You can add the word, AMEN

No more cooking 
I am through
If you can't use the micro wave
BOO HOO!

                              Cile Beer

Premium Member Spring

I waited... I surmised
I know I agonized
Of course... I never realized
Springtime was disguised

I pondered... I personalized
I know I criticized
Of course... I never recognized
Spring had improvised

I questioned... I vocalized
I know I dramatized
Of course... I verbalized
Spring had not arrived

I charted... I analyzed
I know I hypothesized
Of course... I never was more surprised
A third Nor'easter materialized

I remember... I fantasized
I know I rationalized
Of course... I never romanticized
That spring would be winterized

April 4, 2018


For Michael Vacek's Spring Monorhyme Contest

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