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MAPPING MY FINAL RIDE TO THE OTHER SIDE

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We don't want to be left behind so we need to quit going through life so blind and make up our minds.

Mapping my final ride to the other side
Oh how I want to feel like I have arrived
Seeing so many good reasons why I have survived
Like I have climbed the highest mountain totally revived
Believing in myself knowing I will not be denied
Dreaming of my God that makes me so satisfied

Doing what I had to do so I didn't collide
With the love waiting on the other side
Only God gets to decide
Who gets to go on this amazing ride
Enjoying going to heaven where God resides
Feeling like I belong rested very much alive

Applying myself being careful not to divide
My faith that makes it all so personalized
With his wisdom and understanding he provides
His truth in the bible makes us unified
Oh how I want to make sure I realize
Jesus was tried and crucified
Giving up his life so we would be supplied

With a way, we can be revived
When Satan only promises genocide
Disguised as some better kind of high
That leaves us completely horrified 
Making Gods plan justified
Mankind needs to open his eyes to unwind
How much he needs to live in our minds
Only God knows what happens when we die

Bringing his divine harmony 
So when Jesus returns to rectify  
What Satan tried so hard to nullify 
Knowing that I won't be left behind
Believing I didn't live my life blind
To the truth that gives us passage to heaven
Where my soul can reign on high
Knowing or lord and master would never lie
About what will happen if we except him eye to eye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/13/2018 11:46:00 PM
Congratulations Jack for POTD honors, well done...
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Date: 7/14/2018 12:26:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie, I appreciate you taking the time to read it Jack2.
Date: 7/13/2018 9:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! A wonderful poem and great message too. Enjoyed.
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Date: 7/14/2018 12:28:00 AM
Thank you for your sincere compliment Susan have a great evening Jack2.
Date: 7/13/2018 5:13:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. So beautifully written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/13/2018 5:42:00 PM
Thank you so much for your compliment eve and taking the time to share it with me. Have a nice evening and hugs right back at ya.Jack2
Date: 7/13/2018 10:08:00 AM
Magnificent - sounds like a grand oratorio. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/13/2018 11:03:00 AM
Thank you very much for such a big compliment. I have to admit I had to look the word up and I was shocked that you thought my poem reads like a concert piece for an orchestra have a great day Sunlite Jack2.
Date: 7/13/2018 9:01:00 AM
Ahh, such a lovely poem this is, a masterpiece and a fav for me. Many congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/13/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thank you, Faraz that is very kind of you to say all the wonderful things about this poem that speaks the truth from my heart have a wonderful day as well friend.Jack2
Date: 7/13/2018 8:52:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, Jack. Well done.
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Date: 7/13/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thank you Warren for the review I appreciate you taking the time to read it have a good day Jack2.
Date: 7/13/2018 8:05:00 AM
Congrats!!! Jack...on your journey of POTD! and the other side...an epic ride it shall be...but not just yet...you have more great poetry to write lol...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 7/13/2018 9:04:00 AM
Thank you for your sincere compliments and all those great things you mentioned. I agree i'm not done just yet.
Date: 7/13/2018 8:03:00 AM
I can see the next twenty five has already started good...Congrats my friend...All the best to you
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Date: 7/13/2018 7:19:00 PM
You are a good friend Arturo with genuine remarks about my work have a great evening Thank you for your support.Jack2
Date: 7/13/2018 5:14:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Jack - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/13/2018 7:28:00 AM
Thank you, Anne, this is the first I heard about it I appreciate the good news always a plus to have one noticed Jack2.
Date: 7/13/2018 5:12:00 AM
A wonderful poem full of meaning, so deserving of POTD. Congratulations Jack....Maria
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Date: 7/13/2018 7:31:00 AM
Thank you, Maria, for your compliment and for taking the time to share it with me have a great day Jack2
Date: 7/11/2018 5:35:00 PM
A nice write...with message and rhythm...Amen...may your next 25 be the best...
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Date: 7/11/2018 5:51:00 PM
Thank you, Micheal, I appreciate the review and your good wishes for me in my next 25 have a great day.