Spring

I waited... I surmised I know I agonized Of course... I never realized Springtime was disguised I pondered... I personalized I know I criticized Of course... I never recognized Spring had improvised I questioned... I vocalized I know I dramatized Of course... I verbalized Spring had not arrived I charted... I analyzed I know I hypothesized Of course... I never was more surprised A third Nor'easter materialized I remember... I fantasized I know I rationalized Of course... I never romanticized That spring would be winterized April 4, 2018 For Michael Vacek's Spring Monorhyme Contest

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/8/2018 9:25:00 PM

Creative, innovative---and spot-on capture of Spring this year. Best of luck in the contest! :) Gershon

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/9/2018 9:23:00 PM

Thank you! Glad you read and appreciate your comment.

Carole Duet

Date: 4/7/2018 9:58:00 PM

What an entertaining mono-rhyme! I really enjoyed this one, Susan, and good luck in the contest.

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/9/2018 9:22:00 PM

Thanks Carole for reading and commenting.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/7/2018 8:13:00 AM

This is very creative, Susan. Love it! Janice

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/9/2018 9:20:00 PM

Thanks so much!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/7/2018 6:56:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem and your unique creative style, Susan.

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/9/2018 9:19:00 PM

Thank you! I appreciate your comment and reading.

Joseph May

Date: 4/7/2018 5:27:00 AM

A very wintry disguise..Very nicely penned Susan

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/9/2018 9:18:00 PM

Thank you, appreciate your input.

Niall Fulham

Date: 4/7/2018 4:17:00 AM

Hi Susan, nice to meet, beautifully done and I love the use of the letter 'Z' ,:) good luck in the contest::)))Hugs~~~Niall

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/9/2018 9:17:00 PM

Yes, you too. Thanks for the input.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/6/2018 11:20:00 AM

Nice monorhyme, Susan - good luck in the contest.

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/7/2018 1:15:00 AM

Thank you!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/5/2018 2:35:00 PM

A fun monorhyme! A remembrance of this year’s weather!

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/7/2018 1:14:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. Yes, it just keeps on going in and on lol.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/5/2018 4:38:00 AM

- A great poem, Susan :) - I always find it hard to wait for spring ... winter is too long and dark - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/7/2018 1:13:00 AM

Thank you! Especially this year... sleet and snow here tonight. Appreciate your comments.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2018 7:33:00 PM

Another contest I seem to have forgotten about. WEll done, Susan. Maybe I entered this one too. I can barely keep up with comments these days let alone the contests. It is so difficult. How do people find the time??

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/7/2018 1:11:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea! I don't participate like I should because of time. Appreciate your comments always.