Best Obstinately Poems


Inharmonious Worlds

We are two inharmonious worlds as a cry.
As if we like sins, deliberately happened,
As if we were obstinately juggling
The calmness of water and moment 

Two divergent epochs we are 
Between wilderness and return,
So especial and so distinguished 
In the width of text and amazement 

Listening as if we heard our voices
Runaway from our mouths and burn 
Crying, as if their comebacks like lightning!

So miserable this life will be- 
If it's not "gathering two separated person"
Misled by echo, not longing!


Written by © Fatima Nusairat

Rubik Cube

Yours is a horrendous bother
I decode one side, you obfuscate another!
I twist and turn, twist and turn again
Fingers engrossed around your parts, another twist
extirpates the other side! My enthusiasm refuses to wane.
I warp your shifting visage, weave the obliterated wrist,
Only succeeding to dislodge several faces,
I continue defacing your six surfaces…

In my euphoric endeavors to somehow unwind,
The unfathomable thoughts in your wavering mind,
I take manifold cyclical turns, like a brisk walk in fog,
Your complex anonymity refuses to unclog!
My flirtatious advances, don’t inveigle your resolve?
Chances to demystify you, in vain I solve,
I stare at your complacent maze,
you’re smug, with a mystic gaze!

Still in downright disarray
my curiosity, undone by dismay,
You’re unfazed, as you obliviously recline
Further inquests, but you obstinately decline!
I scrupulously ingest your manual again,
And brace for another futile try,
Why am I so smitten, as if to ascertain
If afterward, you’ll still be awry!?

© Maverick Nyambu
Form: Rhyme

A Blimmin' Cold Day, Even For Grandad

All avenues are amphibious arenas
Bubbles belch-burst, bitter Bacchanalian bombs
Clouds' cast-iron crescendo creates cold cantankerous caricatures
Drenched - darkness descending, daylight dying, disappearing duskwards
Every eye echoing every eye, emotional evidence enveloped
Fake furs, fashionable fools, firm friends fleeing flowing firmament
Garrulous girls giggle, grizzled gangsters get going, gravity gyroscopes - ginormous gloomy grey gusts!
Hapless Harry's hairpiece hovers, hesitates, hovers higher, hurriedly he hopes he has his hat,
Intimate iciness infiltrates irrepressibly inside, 
Jaunty Jack's japery, just jaded January jokes - jigsaw justice
Kilted killers, kleptomaniac kangaroos...
Lame laughs, low lamplight, laser liquid lines lash lustfully
Mercurial miasma mercilessly merging, mournful men mutter miserably
Nobody needs niceties, navigating newspapers, nothing new now
Ordered out over oof owed, obstinately offering old objections
Pavement pool-puddles pose problems, precautions probable, prayers perhaps...
Quintessential questing queens querulously quarrel,
Rain rushes relentlessly, rudely, rapaciously
Sizzling, steaming, slip-sliding silhouettes, soaked saturnine suits seething
Terry the tiger-tamer, tastefully tattooed, taking time talking tactfully to trembling tramps
Undernourished underpass underclass, underwhelmed under useless ubiquitous umbrellas
Vulgar victors, vim-vigour-verve, voraciously vanquished, vanity virulently violated,
Waistless waifs, wasted wastrels, wrestle with wicked westerly winds
X-rayed, X-rated 
Yesterday's youngsters yellowing, yawning, yearning
Zero zest. Zilch.
© Joe Buddha  Create an image from this poem.


Obstinate Leaves, Haiku

A november storm 
leaves hang on obstinately 
the chagrined autumn
Form: Haiku

Premium Member A Silent Prayer

PRAYER FOR MY HEART

With evil motives provoking me
Hardening my will obstinately…
My God, I entrust my heart to Your control
For You indeed know that out of it are the issues of life.*

With negative reactions causing my faithlessness
Drowning my soul into doubtfulness’ depths...
My God, I submit my heart to Your grace
For You alone can thwart its deceitful schemes.

With foolish counsels pulling me down to frustration
Leading my spirit to wallow in despair...
My God, I yield my heart to Your authority
For You surely are my Master and Lord.

With haughtiness keeping me unyielding
Weakening my moral-spiritual fortitude…
My God, I subject my heart to Your discipline
For You can smite my stubbornness of arrogance-origin.

By faith in You, through Jesus Christ's name,
I entreat for Your answer, believing...
Thanking and praising You...
...Assured that You hearken to my silent prayer.


*Proverbs 4:23 “Keep thy heart with all diligence; for out of it are the issues of life.”

February 2, 2019
Edited on February 26, 2019
10th place, "Pick A Title - Free Verse" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh; judged on 3/9/2019.

You Say Tom-Aaa-To

YOU SAY TOM-AAA-TO

Never ever say sorry.
No matter how put,
a meagre sorry tastes

like yesterday’s curled sandwich,
obstinately irrelevant
to any serious discourse.

Instead, play for effect;
make your mark
with the equivalent

of a six course lunch,
a gourmet spread
of words, allusions

and classical reference;
then profusely apologise
with discipline and skill.

When sitting down
on completing this task,
you may append, quite silently,

the word *******, if American,
or the much more redolent British word
arsehole, even if American !

(Challenge words : sorry taste obstinate relevant serious play lunch gourmet apologise)
Form:


Premium Member Conversation With My Heart

My heart*, God wants you to be under His control surely
For out of you come issues of my life tremendously;
Your evil motives provoke me consciously
Enabling my will to harden obstinately.

My heart, to God do I entrust you with earnestness
For you must be changed from your deceitfulness;
Your negative reactions lead me toward faithlessness
Drowning my soul into depths of doubtfulness.

My heart, I give you to God for His direction
For you ought to follow biblical instruction;
Your foolish counsels pull me down to frustration
Causing my spirit to wallow in desperation.

My heart, you need God’s discipline for your molding
For you become so stubborn and unbending;	
Your proud perversions keep me unyielding
Weakening my convictions’ from their firm standing.

My heart, your confidence in God must always be constant
For you easily waver that makes me futile and dormant;
Your unstable ways confuse me in every instant
Robbing me of His joy, peace and blessings so abundant.

My heart, keep submitting to God’s commandments
For you, by His power, can help me reach heavenly attainments 
Your willing attributes propel me to comply to godly agreements
Driving my persistence to pursue after eternal achievements.
 
My heart, victory in God awaits you in your humility
For you can be perfectly wholly for Him in His working ability;
Your unselfish desires push me to seek His kingdom’s priority
Moving me to serve Him with truth and sincerity.

*Proverbs 4:23 "Keep thy heart with all diligence; 
for out of it are the issues of life."

April 11, 2018

Edited on February 4, 2019
Dramatic Monologue with Rhyme

10th place, "2019 Poetry Marathon Mile 16" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Mark Toney; judged on 2/6/2019.
Featured poem of the week, May 23-29, 2021

Premium Member Dandelions Oh My

We big, tough, well-thinking male bearberries blew and we snarled and we spouted and we blew.

But those danged dandelions obstinately kept their tops on, no matter how much we did fuss.

Come on fellas, I said to my fellow bearberries. Here is just what we’ll do…

 “I’m not taking them!” I screamed at B.B.2, our leader, a passive little cuss.

		I was talking about those damned tiger lilies, our groupies.

I am so sorry Tiger Lilies, he told them. It’s just us bear berries today.  He shot an apologetic look to T.L. 1 and T.L. 402.

I am sick and tired of my whole life being video- recorded by those selfie-taking nut-buckets, I told him, indignant, and with an angry face.

They will clean your house, wash your floors, pay your bills, wax your car, and do your laundry, said B.B. 2.

I don’t care if my house implodes on its dirtiness, I retorted. Just keep them in their place.
		I was talking about those damned tiger lilies, our groupies.

Tiger Lily 58 sneaked back into the Bearberry Lodge, where Tiger Lilies are never supposed to be.

We did not see her at first as she used her invisibility tablet to reach us; I felt her heat on the back of my neck, before I saw her.

She began to give me a really nice, warm, massage and sweet backrub which  was the best I had had times three.

Wow! What is that? I asked myself, as I began getting tingly and happy all over, and down under.	

		I guess I was talking about these wonderful tiger lilies, our allies.

My dad had told me a long time ago that the best pairings in the meadow was always a BB and a T.L.

Who are you? I whispered to Tiger Q. Lily 58.  I am your soul mate, she responded, can you please meet me at 2?

Where? I wondered, and she immediately conveyed that she would be at northern rise of Bunny P. Hill.

I will be there with my matching rings, I told her. Are you ready? Yes, she agreed. No one else will do.		

	       I am now hitched to a wonderful tiger lily, and all my mean thoughts 
		toward T.L.'s seem pretty damned silly.
		(And I don’t care whether or not the dandelions ever lose their 
                 tops. They are of no use to me now.)

                               Dated:  May 12,2018

Premium Member The Ventriloquist's Heart-To-Heart Talk With the Heart

Oh, heart*, God wants you to be under His control surely
For out of you come issues of life tremendously;
Your evil motives provoke consciously
Enabling the will to harden obstinately.

Oh, heart, you must submit to God with earnestness
For you must be changed from your deceitfulness;
Your negative reactions lead toward faithlessness
Drowning the soul into depths of doubtfulness.

Oh, heart, obey God's direction
For you ought to follow biblical instruction;
Your foolish counsels can pull someone down to frustration
Causing the spirit to wallow in desperation.

Oh, heart, you need God’s discipline for your molding
For you become so stubborn and unbending;	
Your proud perversions keep many unyielding
Weakening convictions from their firm standing.

Oh, heart, your confidence in God must always be constant
For you easily waver making the anxious futile and dormant;
Your unstable ways confuse them in every instant
Robbing them of joy, peace and blessings so abundant.

Oh, heart, keep submitting to God’s commandments
For you, by His power, can help the brave reach heavenly attainments 
Your willing attributes propel them to comply to godly agreements
Driving their persistence to pursue after eternal achievements.
 
Oh, heart, victory in God awaits you in your humility
For you can be perfectly wholly for Him in His working ability;
Your unselfish desires push the meek to seek His kingdom’s priority
Moving them to serve the Lord with truth and sincerity.

*1Chronicles 22:19 Now set your heart and your soul to seek the LORD your God...

June 22, 2018
7th Place, "Ventriloquist" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Anthony Slausin; judged on 6/23/2018.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member A Sojourn Through Times


Mind often makes a circuitous pilgrimage
Sliding down and going up the banisters of time
As I hear the grating sound of worn stairs behind
Memories come darting in and out of shadows

From childhood’s flamboyant days
Mind scuttles between the past and the present
Skipping over the bliss of buoyant youth
To life’s present weary days and to the future
 
Life’s train has sadly changed its track
Years, like torn pages have flown away
But the frivolous inner child pines
Obstinately for all that once held dear
 
I remember having run over plains n’ paddy fields
Trying to cut across their widening margins
Brushing past brambles and thickets 
To chase butterflies that came to molest the lovely blooms

How I went on a search to meet the winged seraphs 
That I heard, sang in chorus in Heaven’s gilded halls
Looked for God, amid scurrying clouds,
To slay the ghosts, I believed, hidden in my closet

I remember my youth of squandered passions
When I scrawled love’s graffiti on my mind’s wall 
And carried my beloved’s picture in my mind
So flawless that no artist could ever conspire to alter.

Now I constantly wage a losing battle
Against forces that threaten to take away my calm
All I see is pain, death and human suffering
And life sadly getting lost in meaningless strife

Age has burdened me with a deadly weight
Fastening chains on my once supple feet
All I pray is – Don’t let me be a burden to anyone
And give me a mindset to accept all that comes my way

--------------------------------

April.13. 2023

Open Poetry. 6. Poetry Contest
Sponsor. Charlotte Puddifoot

Free Cee Refining and Mainlining Hyperbole

REFINING AND MAINLINING HYPERBOLE

Something reliable, desirable, easily obtainable and consistently good
So a junkie best know the right neighborhood
The right junkie to see who won’t stab you in the back
And who doesn’t have a deck of five aces to stack
Some junkies have held eights and aces and lived to tell the tale
When the “dead man hand’s” reputation came to fail
But tragically the guy with five aces came to die
It seems the number five was one digit too high
And that’s simply what happens when a junkie plays poker and bets too steep to boot
This, of course, is all hypothetical hyperbole for a hypodermic and the dope that some junkie wants to shoot
And a junkie who won’t shoot him in his attempt to shoot his way out of a showdown with death
While a junkie named, appropriately enough, “Junkie” on Eighty-Ninth Street and Lex takes his final breath
Because his old lady named, appropriately enough, Lady
As I always suspected, turned out to be Lady, a lady who was shady 
And I find it unspeakable that a junkie wouldn’t warn another about a hot shot
Which, in junkie parlance, means the shot is hot but his body will soon be not
Because one grows room temperature rapidly after a hot shot amidst the stench of rotting flesh and muscle melting into a putrid mess
But don’t expect Lady, the shady lady, to ever confess
****….that junkie named Junkie owed Lady’s ex-old man too much money for a junkie named Junkie to owe
And Lady knew where Junkie hid a kilo of blow……….
To this day Lady the shady lady will tell you that she had no choice
And of course blames it on a chick no one but Lady seems to have known named Joyce
Whose dad owned a Rolls Royce
And whose half-Asian half American Indian step brother had a beautiful soprano singing voice
But that’s neither here nor there
However, I will tell you what is obstinately and obviously clear
A junkie better know the right neighborhood
Because the acrid aroma and stagnating stench of rotting flesh don’t smell very good
© 2012……free cee!
Form: Monorhyme

We Better Off

How is it great to wakeup in the morning
Without thinking stressfully about you
How is it wonderful to go shopping
without telling you what you buying and where to go
How is it relaxing to laugh with people
Without you telling me not to do
How is it nice to wear my mini skirt
Without you telling me, you are wearing this to who?
How is it peaceful to say its white when it's white
Without you obstinately calling the white blue
How is it just fine to walk my road
Without your people stalking me through
How is it easy to walk my door
Without you stepping on my shoe
That was not love I don't know what is sick
Is it your love or you?!
we are better off separated
I'll sing Usher's song for you
You should listen to it over and over
Because everyword in that song is so true
You should just forget about me
Because love isn't for me and you
© Kaila B.A  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Rhyme

A World of Hate

creation commenced--Cain and Abel

jealousy

two brothers competing stalwartly

hatred

junction off- ramp taken blazing

violence

still cosmic warfare rages intense

unceasingly

assembled, standing as vengeance

persists

born protesting our fallen world

obstinately

strangely culture perceives tolerance

ignorantly

a Creator that keeps our friendship

unconditionally

no half-way house choice in His 

sovereignty



“Don’t be surprised my brothers if the world hates you” 1 JOHN 3:13





© October 2013—Kim van Breda

Enmeshed Heart

Transfixed
Exasperated
Unsure

Motives, dreams
changing, slipping
controlled passion
over whelming desires;

Intricate heart schemes
Thrown like a dice
Turn up love buds
growing obstinately
amidst thorns


Delicate and alluring colours
white, pink, blue
Thrilling the soul.
Form: Rhyme

Selfish Solitudes

Selfish Solitudes

Dragon demons once possessed
Lingering lullabies of earth’s obsessed
Fallen Angels in the great abyss
Fractured fallacies of love’s first kiss

Emerald eyes parasitic pose
Seductive sting of the red-ed rose
Thieving tears that steal your dreams
Selfish solitudes of sensual streams

Dormant doorways of the deep
Obstinately open when we weep
Scurrilous shadows of nestled night
Sagacious shades of blackest white.


Dec.16.2016
CONTEST 250 any form, any topic  - Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Form: Rhyme

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