Enmeshed Heart

Transfixed Exasperated Unsure Motives, dreams changing, slipping controlled passion over whelming desires; Intricate heart schemes Thrown like a dice Turn up love buds growing obstinately amidst thorns Delicate and alluring colours white, pink, blue Thrilling the soul.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/29/2024 11:11:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/9/2016 12:38:00 AM

Priscilla, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/10/2016 5:08:00 PM

Priscilla, I enjoyed reading your excellent poem today. Thanks for sharing '''' Skat

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 9/6/2013 10:27:00 AM

There is something about the way you write I find compelling.

Ginger Amee Terdue

Date: 4/23/2013 6:50:00 AM

Morning Sis. Nice meeting you here. What a poet!! I love your simple choice of meaningful emotional words that painted the picture of thrilling soul. Keep writing. I will one day learn something from you. Stay encouraged.