Best Interrupted Poems


Premium Member Girl, Interrupted

Girl, Interrupted-

Deep cuts from within.
She faced bravely the many hardships of womanly life
How did she end up like this?
Severe depression after her first mental breakdown
Sorrow oppressed what was willed
At present in the parallel universe, 
Never aware of the world left behind
She will catch a brief glimpse of this world
   ---where everything is different.

Losing the veil in which includes time, 
Aging without caring death awaits!
Her different personality replaces reality
Things appear normal in her eyes. 

Although captivate in her own mind,
She feels this is freedom.

Being heavily burdened--
Every day she stares into different mirrors,
Smiling in her bipolar face
Without knowing insanity put her mind at ease.

~*~
7/24/13
© Skat A   Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Spiritually Interrupted

SPIRITUALLY INTERRUPTED.

I CAME TO EARTH WITH 
EVERYTHING IN TACT.
I was happy curious and 
with rapid anxiety.
couldn't wait to bring the 
good news from the place
where I had just come from,
To my new home here on earth.

It was just an
overwhelming understanding.
that I had,Wanted badly
to share the joy as I arrived
I studied my mothers face.
She was beautiful !
I saw no father.

As I knew what a
mirror was immediately.
The science of images 
and reflections innate. 
many secrets held in my D.N.A..
and I was well pleased.
Delight and light 
surrounded me then.
Everything was good.

Somehow my
senses were acute;
Bees-Butterflies,dandelions.
praying mantis
even earthworms-
were my playmates.
Mud pies and the smell of dirt. 
Everything was intact 
when I came to earth.

Seemed like a lovely place.
Riding my tricycle-
was quite like the freedom
I had known in my other home.

Then hooverd a cloud over me.
a dreary cloud, 
Tears were streaming
I heard mommy crying.
She was only a child 
I tried to make her 
smile again. I wanted to know
but, she cried even more.
I tasted anguish for 
the first time that day.

I was spiritually interrupted
afraid, insecure, and confused
confounded by the blanks and the
sudden disconnection,  
I built up a wall;
The wall protected me 
from the cacophony
of loud ,big people shouting.
I retreated into my safe world.

Grown-ups they annoyed me
All of them ( The big People )
They were different,
I vowed to never forget my original self.
I vowed that I would always 
hold on to my Spiritual soul. 
Years passed and I gathered 
more of their distorted truth's 
I wanted to enjoy the
body I was placed in. 

The body I had 
before the distractions of curves..
Before the mind noise.
Before the blood that 
caused me distress
I could hardly hear 
my inner-voice.
I prayed to my inner God.
Too much to know-
Too much too soon.
My innocence melted 
like a snowball in a furnace.

The lust of the big people 
no longer allowed 
me the freedom childhood. 
Now jaded with the 
burden of womanhood
and my childhood was arrested..
My spirit was abruptly interrupted.

Premium Member The Sound of Silence Interrupted

The day was peaceful
Until the sound of thunder
Lightening is seen
Form: Haiku


Interrupted

Should I kill myself, 
or have a cup of coffee? 
-Albert Camus- 


Being dead is blunt, 
numbing and offensive. 
Yet it is life and not death 
that grips you 
so hard that pain 
is a plea for urgent departure 

The impromptu of suicide 
is interrupted 
by an intelligent question 

If a tree falls in a forest 
and no one is around to hear it, 
does it make a sound?" 

The Stoic moment 
of self destruction 
is momentarily lost 

The question deserves 
an answer.

Premium Member Innocence Interrupted

Sacred beginnings, but my end too soon
I lie helpless in false serenity
preparing for life, her womb is my tomb.

I am like a flower, ready to bloom
my small frame forms, unborn tranquility
sacred beginnings, but my end too soon.

Her voice, so familiar, screams in that room
my little heart pounds in futility
preparing for life, her womb is my tomb.

Pain, a new sensation, sharp, coursing through
my frail body, in death's reality
sacred beginnings, but my end too soon.

I cry out in silence, my parts are consumed
stricken and murdered so conveniently
preparing for life, her womb is my tomb.

My innocent blood spilled unwillingly
unprotected, unheard, why should this be?
sacred beginnings, but my end too soon
preparing for life, her womb is my tomb.




Written on 7/22/2015

Premium Member Interrupted Solitude

Interrupted Solitude

A sentence here, a comment there
Your ponderous thoughts you were forced to share
"Who is this man?" I'm sure you said
As words were drawn from within your head.

‘Twas on the flight, a normal one
Until your thoughts and reminiscences - gone!
Those abstract feelings within your mind
Temporarily suspended - did you really find

The puerile chatter of things like verse
From some pedant, sure to disperse
The many who really understand
The written word of our fair land?

A voluminous poem of no set school
Scrawled by one, who though no fool
Really tried - not to impress
But to get comment from the Bards' mistress.

Comment given, yet little criticism
Of the traveller's cynicism.
Relate you did - or so I thought
Or else these words would come to nought.

The serenity to the world you show
Scarcely hides the turmoil below.
For though your manner is no pretence
Your well thought words seem so intense.

There's something there inside of you;
A pain so deep it's like a screw
Turning deep into your heart
As you search your mind for the words to start.

Because of this these lines did I show
Because of this I felt you'd know
Just what it was I was trying to say
As you read them through, without dismay.

Was it this - a common ground,
That hidden pain without a sound,
Which made you talk, while instead
Your book of poems you could have read?

And so I thank you in my small way
For your time shared with me that day.
And I hope that soon you'll find 
That so elusive peace of mind!
Form: Verse


Peaceful Bookstore, Interrupted

Clay saucer
clay pot
potting soil
striped triangular stone
tiny green bud
tall bamboo stalk
fleshy green leaves
held in place by
patio umbrella crank
sits on latticed
black round wrought iron
table at Bart’s Books
Ojai, California,
quiet, peaceful,
so serene
till a bookstore-hating baby
screams.
Form: List

Life Interrupted By Song Lyrics

You are the Carolina in my 
mind
The place I have always longed 
to be
You are the sultry guitar licks
The rhythm and the melody. 

You are the compass of my life
My non stop carousel
My  longed for childhood dream
My Wall Street opening bell

You are my what a wonderful 
world
The dream I love to tell
I had a dream and you are it
My own private wishing well

You turn down the voices in 
my head
And make me do what's right
You know that part of me that 
I 
Protect from others sight. 

You are the single shining star 
for those with eyes to see
Of those who have loved you 
in this world 
You have chosen me. 

Something in the you that's 
you
Draws me like a moth to the 
light
But I have no fear of being 
burned
With you it just seems right.
© Joe Murphy  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Life Interrupted

When you can't relate any more
Your thoughts are out the door

No sympathy, no empathy
Stuck in a foreign embassy

Of a thought process strange
Clever shots are out of range

The drugs, the grog, the women
The warped sense of dominion

Are you stuck in my head
She said or are you dead?

She asked.
© Uwe Stroh  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Couplet

Girl Interrupted

My mind is constantly spinning in a 
24 hour torture chamber, featuring 
unsettling displays of erratic 
behavior.  Death at this point would 
be a reward, please do me this one 
favor.

Alone again to no surprise, 
restricted to a code of silence.  
Harboring a lifetime of regrets and 
grudges, now confined within the 
dark red walls of violence.

Masking the pain, hiding the truth 
with a painted on face.  I've buried  
the secrets so deep in the ground, 
only time can erase.

Pushed into uncontrollable 
situations, my soul consumed with 
rage.  Tangled in a web spun just 
for me and sentenced to a life 
locked inside a cage.

I enjoy playing the villain, the only 
roll that comes naturally.  Pressing 
every button I can, sit back to enjoy 
the show, why won't anyone set me 
free.

Rock bottom has finally come, I am 
damaged beyond repair.  Trapped 
in my own personal dungeon, to try 
an escape I won't even dare.

A constant stampede of jumbled 
thoughts are pounding in my head.  
Tripping over the hurdles searching 
for the right words, to all that 
needs to be said.

I can't finish a thought before a 
new one.begins, they are literally 
colliding on the track.  I have lost so 
much of myself inches.ruble and 
debris, non of which I'll ever get 
back.

My.theory on life to most don't 
make sense, is.to emotionally cut cut 
off all ties.  Its to hard to function 
in a world full of weakness, that 
was built upon a foundation of lies.

Im barracaded behind a wall of 
steel, my flaws are protected and 
secure.  I've locked myself away 
from traffic and the noise, Im a 
lifer, no recovery, no cure.

Ambivalence, Am I sane? Am I 
crazy? Will I stay or will I go? The 
one answer I would like to know.
Form:

Premium Member Interrupted

Raw moon
Lips swoon

Rooms locked
Shirts dropped

Flesh beams
Love steams

•	
•	

Kids cry
Hots...bye!


   ~

Make Me Laugh Contest
For Heather Ober
3 July 2013
Form: Footle

Jeffrey, Interrupted

You picked a path when met with fork
And trod it bare so oft you walked
Into a tunnel so wretched and corrupted 
You slipped away, Jeffrey interrupted

Wednesday’s child is full of woe
But my May child has far to go
A decade times two your sacrifice
Fool’s gold for that roll of dice

Your values anorexic, almost starved to death
In the winter of your soul I cannot see your breath
Countless earnest declarations to all that you are well
But still you keep on walking through the raging gates of hell

Mephistopheles offered you a bargain so appealing
It mattered not to you to know that he’d be double-dealing
His sly smile belied the fingers crossed behind his crooked tail
You’re at a losing table, out of chips, and you’re no whale

Your dreams were long forgotten, and sadly never stoked
If I hadn’t watched this happen I would have thought it a sick joke
Something else seduced you and it surely did beguile
Enough to make you believe that your life was not worthwhile

You saw yourself in visions, amber glass contained your poison
False idols tempt with silent gestures - like a sailor lured by sirens
You go through good intentions like a sieve, like sand through glass
Earnest promises, years gone by, crises survived, but more forecast

For years I have done so many things to save you from yourself, my Jeff
I’ve run out of ideas to keep you whole, I’ve really nothing left
Like any loving mother I do not wish to see you in a tomb
And if I could, I would place you back into the safety of my womb
Form: Quatrain

Premium Member Interrupted

Tabby watching birds;
Sharp-eyed, poufy-tailed, statue;
Until squirrel arrives.
Form: Haiku

Love Interrupted

The weeping willow mocks my tears,
as the fog torments my body.

Frozen fragments of imagination
brings condensation to my eyes.

At the beginning things were great,
until the day I betrayed.

My mind taunts my heart,
my spirit and soul;

Like a fire burning wildly
through a dry field.

Consequences get caught
with circumstance,

As it is time for
the forbidden dance,

   Love Interuppted.
Form:

Premium Member Interrupted Reverie

INTERRUPTED REVERIE

hanging droplets 
            sparkle
     threaten the lake
Form: Haiku

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