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Raw moon Lips swoon Rooms locked Shirts dropped Flesh beams Love steams • • Kids cry Hots...bye! ~ Make Me Laugh Contest For Heather Ober 3 July 2013
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Jerden Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 6:16 AM
Loved it! Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Roy
Smith Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 4:25 PM
Congrats on your fine winning entry
Manassian Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 6:17 AM
Congrats, Nette.....Steamy...I agree with Suzette...those dots leave lots to the imagination! :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 2:51 AM
Nette congrats on win Shadow x smiles
Dietrich Avatar
July 21, 2013 at 1:24 AM
Nette, yours is outstanding for this contest. Love how you made it based on a theme. BIG congrats.
Anglesey Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 9:09 PM
Very cute scenario with vivid imagery. Chuckling out loud at the title, congratulations on your win :)
Ryerson Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 8:20 PM
Hmmm...Seems I recall you saying you couldn't make the little ditty work?...WRONG!...Congrats - Tim
A  Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 8:18 PM
Nette, A good one. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~
Martin Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 7:28 PM
Nicely done Nette!! Congrats on your win....Jim
Ober Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 7:12 PM
Nette, you rocked this! That last footle is priceless! You are just as fabulous at writing humour as you are at writing profoundly descriptive scenes. Big congrats on your win in my contest, my lovely friend! :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 6:09 PM
GOOD ONES!! good and hot.
Anish Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 5:42 PM
Cute poem here! Quite enjoyable read! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Devnath  Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 11:09 AM
Hi! my friend, you have captured the interesting one. Superb imagination. Lovely done. Always, bl
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:59 AM
Good morning Nette
Ryerson Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:39 AM
More mail, don't fail (to check your mail that is)
Mannan Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 10:38 PM
Haha Loved it. I'm fine luv. How are you. Was real busy with work and travel. Thanks for liking the poem Nette.
Sivey Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 9:00 PM
This is a perfect set of Footles her my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening, such a glorious piece, Great Work!!
Poet Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 8:26 PM
Ooh whoo!!Love these footles!I have sent u a soupmail.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 2:19 PM
Life in a glimpse! Masterpiece!
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 2:10 PM
Been there many years ago..Enjoyed your very expressive and creative work stating how life can be sometimes..Thanks for your visits ..It is good here but very cloudy with the change of some heavy rain..We could use that heavy rain..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 11:21 AM
A clever one you are. This made me smile!
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