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Interrupted

Raw moon
Lips swoon

Rooms locked
Shirts dropped

Flesh beams
Love steams

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Kids cry
Hots...bye!


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Make Me Laugh Contest
For Heather Ober
3 July 2013

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2013

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Roy Jerden Date: 7/22/2013 6:16:00 AM Loved it! Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Roy Login to Reply

Russell Smith Date: 7/21/2013 4:25:00 PM Congrats on your fine winning entry Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 7/21/2013 6:17:00 AM Congrats, Nette.....Steamy...I agree with Suzette...those dots leave lots to the imagination! :) Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/21/2013 2:51:00 AM Nette congrats on win Shadow x smiles Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/21/2013 1:24:00 AM Nette, yours is outstanding for this contest. Love how you made it based on a theme. BIG congrats. Login to Reply

Karen Anglesey Date: 7/20/2013 9:09:00 PM Very cute scenario with vivid imagery. Chuckling out loud at the title, congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 7/20/2013 8:20:00 PM Hmmm...Seems I recall you saying you couldn't make the little ditty work?...WRONG!...Congrats - Tim Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/20/2013 8:18:00 PM Nette, A good one. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Drjim Martin Date: 7/20/2013 7:28:00 PM Nicely done Nette!! Congrats on your win....Jim Login to Reply

Heather Ober Date: 7/20/2013 7:12:00 PM Nette, you rocked this! That last footle is priceless! You are just as fabulous at writing humour as you are at writing profoundly descriptive scenes. Big congrats on your win in my contest, my lovely friend! :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/4/2013 6:09:00 PM GOOD ONES!! good and hot. Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 7/4/2013 5:42:00 PM Cute poem here! Quite enjoyable read! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 7/4/2013 11:09:00 AM Hi! my friend, you have captured the interesting one. Superb imagination. Lovely done. Always, bl Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/4/2013 8:59:00 AM Good morning Nette Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 7/4/2013 8:39:00 AM More mail, don't fail (to check your mail that is) Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 7/3/2013 10:38:00 PM Haha Loved it. I'm fine luv. How are you. Was real busy with work and travel. Thanks for liking the poem Nette. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 7/3/2013 9:00:00 PM This is a perfect set of Footles her my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening, such a glorious piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 7/3/2013 8:26:00 PM Ooh whoo!!Love these footles!I have sent u a soupmail. Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/3/2013 2:19:00 PM Life in a glimpse! Masterpiece! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/3/2013 2:10:00 PM Been there many years ago..Enjoyed your very expressive and creative work stating how life can be sometimes..Thanks for your visits ..It is good here but very cloudy with the change of some heavy rain..We could use that heavy rain..Sara Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/3/2013 11:21:00 AM A clever one you are. This made me smile! Login to Reply