Best Diminution Poems


Premium Member Eclipse

If only the moon's diminution of the Sun

Could eclipse the hate humanity has spun

What a miracle of Nature THAT would be

One that wouldn't cause any harm to see

So maybe it's a warning, the corona of red

That we may see much darker times ahead

Or perhaps a revelation that wisdom brings

That ALL life hangs on diaphanous strings

It is rare, indeed, with the sun in its shroud

But rarer, still, this grand life we're endowed.

Premium Member Fifty Years Ago This July

Fifty years ago this July
  Three American astronauts put the lie to 'Why'
On the surface of the Moon they made a pinpoint landing
  Primitive technological devices notwithstanding

We thought the era of space exploration had started
  But after only six more missions, the Moon we departed
      For 47 years now we haven't been back
      It is raw courage, or determination, that we lack?

Sad to say, it's a fundamental distortion of human vision
  No longer do we look outside ourselves for challenges to meet and surpass
    We've become self-absorbed narcissists, content to sit on our arses

This diminution of our vision comes at a steep price
  When the going gets rough, be it at home or abroad
    Our instinct is to give up, not to make sacrifices

No More This Time

The eyes of mild dawn on the body of sky
No nose to smell
No ear to hear
No tongue to speak and taste
No hand to touch
No leg to walk away
Just has open breast where heart is playing
A divine ancient game

White rose water on the field
Fertile land in contented embracing
Watering, planting; Watering, planting
No fertilizer comes to interfere
No locust comes to deter far
Yet, swindled all in the imperishable air 
Luster of eyes in diminution fair,
In blind, deaf and dumb gyre 

No more this time-
Within the blink of eye
Sleeping is wrecked into smile
World finds the sweet child


©Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
31/10/2022


New Year Resolutions 1

New Year resolutions

They are back. Yesteryears’  resolutions
That  evaporated ere execution.
My first one this time around
Is that resolves shouldn’t get drowned
Or  suffer the slightest diminution.

This one sure was fairly easy enough
But the do’s and don’ts looming large look tough
It’s better for me to wait
Than decide and then debate
Those tricky  easier-said-than-done-stuff. 

Sorry, I have no habits to kick
Though there are a good many for the pick
I’ve no weight to lose or gain
Or fitness goals that are  pain
Save a crick in neck to get rid of quick  .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              

@ 31/ Dec/ 12
 
For Gwendolen's 'Limerick in the pocket'

Wheat Cronicles

The first person who grew wheat
would have been called “wheat”
and hence the local chieftain and village folks
would have given a nomenclature
to his discovery,
honoring it with his name
it would have been his name
or something rhyming with it
like “cheat”, “heat” or “eat”
or perhaps “treat”
there was probably someone called “gehu”
in India, who grew this grain
and there is a resembling treatise of words
“gay hun” (I am gay) proclaiming sexual choice
giving it a contemporary feel
of an alternative orientation 
were they different people who grew it
at the same time, in the different parts of the world?
was it really Mr. Wheat
Or el trigo, blé or weizen
Spanish, French or German
was the wandering original Mr. Wheat
or cheat or heat or the Russian pshenitsy
who propagated this and we missed his chronicles?
and we missed his chronicle of travels
and basic grassroots experiences
of the genesis of rotis and cakes
of flavor stimulants, of bakes
and of the grass of wheat
for a figure conscious succulent lass
wheat and all its ontology
and the first one’s ecstasy
whosoever it was
had a higher calling
than the current day diminution

' the Script '


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wreathing this life's mind's eye - wrenched, gnarled, hit, burked
neurons in diminution - clashed, rammed, slayed
futility tops up canvass of murk
phonemes, words, phrases now frolicly played
heart's lyrical requiem overlaid
poesy - penned, written in woe death's crypt
shrieking the LIMITLESS lines of my SCRIPT.

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*-*  jun-jun villanueva

*-*  " RHYME ROYAL " contest


Solstice Moon

Once upon a solstice night
thou moon in perfect glory
hung an effervescent light
to tell a lonely story

A silhouette of pure white cotton
danced on the rain laden ground
her rhythm remembered of passion forgotten  
as beauty seductively moved without sound 

Fullest moon ah cricket symphonies 
floating droves of firefly light 
they found their muse by her solitary mystery 
'twas a grandest moment in life

What good reason would an olive skinned maiden
In bare feet dance under solstice moon?
her feelings were larger than her life's narration
such grand imagination needs room

The only eyes that saw her that night
were the nocturnal creatures that prey
like men riding high upon entitlements right
fierce as time... as it's 
                                    slipping 
                                                  away

She danced a wingless flutter
her hair like petals in the wind
like dreams laced with summer
her eyes were full of fire for the flint

To know the riddle of her soul
one must know the poets tune
examine her language without diminution
to know the ghost in the dance which she holds

Yes, once upon a solstice night
mesmerized by the lure of the moon
she left her tears upon her bed
and choose instead though alone... her dance with fate to resume

The Roman Government and the Resurrection

On the day after Jesus’ death, on Preparation Day, 
Which was when the Jews removed yeast from bread, 
That was to be eaten like clockwork on the Saturday, 
When the Jews were ruminating on if the events lead, 
To their extinction and diminution, their downfall, 
In Israel’s land so advanced for its time and place, 
By their argument with the government categorical, 
Over whether to redirect taxation onto Jesus’ face. 

So the chief priests and the pharisees’ political party, 
Got together then and discussed with great thought, 
What policy to suggest to Pilate and with what clarity, 
To maintain the normal state, to keep what they’d got; 
They said, When Jesus was living he claimed he’d arise, 
From the dead, so his disciples will engineer this fate, 
They will steal his body but report to the people his eyes, 
Are alive, and that he is awake. Please tell us how to wait?

So Pilate ordered these upholders of the government realm, 
To put their soldiers on guard duty and secure the tomb, 
As best they could, and they obeyed and took the helm:
So they sealed the stone and posted a guard, so no womb. 
But they didn’t count on a massive big terrifying earthquake, 
Whilst the two Mary’s were gazing upon the tomb, cold, 
Which they took advantage of by the movement horrific, 
Of the stone being shaken, deserting its grounded hold. 

The two Mary’s faces alit, they smiled broadly with hope, 
And jumped up, using the force of the quake to stand, 
And pushed with all their strength the stone and could cope, 
Because the quake at one point favoured their hand. 
The soldier guard was humiliated and didn’t was to admit, 
To his failure to prohibit anyone from removing the stone, 
Allowing the body to be made into nothing, cremated, lit, 
So he said nothing happened to Pilate in a very serious tone.

Paranoia Strikes Deep

I have dug this one out of the poetry attic; composed when a teen, hence the dated references. Fellow Soupers of my age-group (60 in a few weeks- Yikes!) might enjoy it:

Friend, watch out! They're talking.
Have you heard what they're talking about?
They're not talking about revolution
Nor of mystical ablution,
Not of meaningful discussions
Nor of drastic repercussions.
Not of drugs and their results
Nor of wars and satanic cults.
Not of full-blooded,Medal-studded,Octo-Olympians
Nor of the tragedy of fading Ethiopians.
Not of whether the weather will hold out.

Will I tell you what they're talking about?

They're not talking about extinction
Nor about energy diminution.
Not about the bludging bureaucracy
Nor of stifling plutocracy.
Not about student-Left activity
Nor of the signs of cultural declivity.
Not about aspects of phallic domination
Nor of real genuine insemination.
Not about who is sure and who in doubt.

Should I tell you who they're talking about?

They're not talking about  Nixonfrancocastroamin
Nor of that handydandy, non-returnable
Devastatingly non-biodegradable container
Their fingerfriedlickinchicken lunch was served in.
Not of astronautical penetrations
Nor of the psycho-sexual implications
Of the demise of Chairman Mao.
Not of matters affecting us right here and now!
Nor of suicide, VD, rape, fraud, famine and disease.
Not of all the things like these
Which make this world the wonderful place that it
Most certainly is (and
All divinely-ordained to wit!)

No! They're talking about subversion,
Of unabashed, unwashed perversion!
In short ( and I hear all this is true)
Those bastards are talking about ME & YOU!

Highlights From Highland Manor

since becoming housed here since this year
july first two thousand and seventeen, 
   tubby more precise where
with thee missus, amidst bucolic environs, 
   (one could don underwear

Schwenksville, Pennsylvania   
   trees abundant with leaves of grass spare
zip cone: one nine four seven three, 
   this resident doth not find *****

disproportionate amount of time, 
   he spends never to overhear
the mostly soundproof walls 
   inside apartment b44 assigned midyear, 

one bedroom living social space 
   gives ample opportunity to assess linear
ratcheting asper elderly folks inch along 
   chronological space/time continuum 
   fragile as jasperware  

many experience diminution 
   of vital sensory organs, and oft time cannot hear
even without television blasting away, 
   no doubt harboring anticipatory anxiey sans, 

   grim reaper's unannounced visit they fear
their non verbal body language 
   (when aye espy and stride-rite past, 
   an old lady or man riding shot gun 
   securely strapped in wheel chair, 
   shuffling back where buffalo used to roam, 
   or trudging to common all purpose gathering place)
 
   speaks volumes analogous to a frightened deer
when caught blindsided 
   within bright lights of an automobile 'ere
unsure which way to go, and dashing out in the thick 
   of evening rush hour traffic, 

   lacking notion, the figurative coast not clear
subsequently doe ting bucks killed, where birds of prey 
   thence loftily circle gracefully   
   gliding within upper atmospheric air
page number two:

upon scrutinizing what doth appear
as a hollowed out existence induces me to de clear
to maximize utilizing each precious moment 'ere
before each major metaphorical cog and gear
frankly zaps, this dude looks like a lady, 
   cuz ah ma longish bedraggled hydrogen peroxide tinted hair
me haint give a rats ass 
   what rumor mongers relish, and behind me back jeer

Since old people lack for purposefulness tis unlike to leer
that one day (fast as snap of fingers), lack of being ambulatory t'will be near
and upon limitation in physical functionality, aye aim to app pear
motivated to partake of mental exercises just sitting on me rear.

Pent Sills

These graphite singularities
contain universes
unconceived,
awaiting
the Big Bang
of inspiration, but
narrative particles
escape like
Hawking radiation --
gravity’s diminution
evaporatively slow,
nearly virtual,
and random.

Take Me Back To the Tryst

Take me back to the tryst
Love of ages is not my taste
Does stale love toast or fondle? 
But toast is the soul of love:
When words summon words
Mirrorring the pumping heart.


Take me back to the tryst
Age is wear and tear of love,
Gravity on the wings of amity
Just back to the tryst
Where love floats on bouyancy of fond.


Love: youngest fruit on okoro tree
Easy shred , easy grate
The younger the sweeter
No , the soup of love sours not
The very minute it is cooked.


I say back to the tryst
There is no diminution in tenderness
But love decays with years and age
When earlier charm becomes stale or fade.


Take me back to tryst
Love of ages is not my taste.

Premium Member Being A Witness

Concerns sit out there
on the periphery,
the suffering and misery of wars, 
deaths by disasters be it 
by natural or human causes,
the reckless diminution 
of forests - 
all creep like shadows
across the face of the earth.
What can I do 
but be a witness

and add a frail voice
to a powerless chorus
calling out from under the heel
of wealth and might -
to be labelled 
a soft centered dreamer 
of dreams long abandoned 
in favor of the more 
popular cult of the self's 
omniscience.

I find a place somewhere
in the stillness of an evening
and thought by thought, try
to dismantle the pretenses
of who I am 
and in that cleared arena
invite the good to speak
and make room for the cries
of the afflicted to rise up 
from out of the earth.
I do not know whether
their voices will be heard
or, like sounds carried
on the winds, 
slowly exhaust and disperse 
into the distances
of an evening
and the greater universe

Disappointed Devil Hood Das Fume and Fret

Disappointed Devil - Hood Das Fume And Fret

'Curse darned demon
     of that thar
     underworld nudged me abet
as a permanent solution
     to a temporary problem
     i.e. principally no money
     and rising debt
not for a long time didst

     I feel so distressed didst,
     where no amount of
     optimism could get
back joie de vivre ebullient elan,
     that oft times fines me jet
ting hither and yon, to and fro,
     until spent energy met
fatigue, whence sand

     man gave his pet
tickle yore sleep inducing
     sprinkling granular set
tat heave, albeit
     non off fence sieve tet
deep slumber didst
     hone like a whet
stone, less drastic alternative versus

     welcoming grim reaper, yet
eventually, aye reckon
     this human machine
     moost give up the ghost
boot not now,
     cuz this moment hike ken boast...,
an immediate diminution
     of anguish, viz unlike as told

yesterday, the monthly doled
social security automatic direct
     electronic deposit extolled
joyus relief, viz checking account
     death rattle didst sense a gold
din shimmer and em bold
qua slight monetary profusion
     lowering destitution,

     asper dearth of monies
     allowing ease to un fold,
which severe dire straits rolled
forward respite 
     with money for nothing
     oppressive full (rick kitty)
     full Nelson neck
     i.e. near choke hold

rejuvenated brittle psyche mold
during self feeling auld
also attendant temp
     purred critical pull
away woe decreased yielding
     (all "talk" and no action),
     following thru with desperate,
sans destructive (irreversible)

     actions unable to hold,
metaphorical tiger of despair
     by the figurative tail,
     where soul of mine
     almost got "sold"
for a pittance (NOT penitence)
     to the Prada devil
     (or similar facsimile thereof)

     rational self didst scold
     spewing idle "FAKE" 
     hollw we ning suicidal threats,
     not necessarily bold
cuz, this scribe did not write

     his last (nor first,
     second, third...) will
     and testament before death,
     would hove found 
    me stiff and cold.

Misdemeanour

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       Wreathing this encephalon - wrenched, gnarled, murdered
                   Neurons in diminution - de-escalated, clashing, ramming now lethargic
             Canvass of verse and poesy - lacking, still vacuous and comic
                       But language and fervour is penned, tedium and ennui clobbered.

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