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Premium Member Broken

I wonder about her
as I shave suet and place thistle seed down -

once again

she reveals herself to the corner of my eye
a slight movement caught in the slant of a sunray
just enough to separate her shy form 
from leaf litter camouflage

I turn to look at her
demure and just out of reach - yet
she seems to know I feel for her..
I regard her presence for a handful of heartbeats
before she hastens away in a certain way 
head moving forward first then feet catching up 
  ..rustling the earthy rust of gold;
     fallen maple stars strewn beneath an arborvitae row..
a wing hanging down by her side
like a gate with a broken hinge

her gateway to freedom gone
she’s become a body bound to soft soil -
flesh and bones destined to feed the trees of life
soon her feathers - like thistle down - will animate aloft 
weightless in soulful breaths of a swirled November wind..
pearls of muted beauty lost in innocence 
given back to the skies

I wonder about the tender fragility of a tomorrow 
in an air where mourning coos 
are watered down by whimsical tears of gods

and stirred by a mortal’s yearn for return to natural flight
I commiserate with her silently —

for I am broken too


Susan Ashley
November 17, 2020


~ First Place ~
Premiere Contest: Brian Strand No 1175
Sponsor: Brian Strand


~ Second Place ~
Premiere Contest: 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 17
Sponsor: Mark Toney

Premium Member The Empty Room

Alone  the bones of the room 
bear no weight of responsibility 
nor does it bare its breast of secrets

a broken pane 
provides a breath with a pang of lavender
a wistful inhale 
inhabits the lungs of this space
as the room tries to embrace...   
oh embrace the breathing breeze
to squeeze a semblance of life into this place

but the breeze—  a gypsy whisper-warm  
needs freedom  to come in and sweep 
sun-dust into swirls of pinprick-stars... 
then to go    not beholden to bones 
stoic and standing still
not beholden to dust   stranded midair  
only to fall in despair—  abandoned 
with less a good-bye   
as bygone laughter and lullabies
are held on lath-tongues 
behind horsehair plaster walls

but mute memories 
mingle in dust like fireflies in dusk;
her suckling coos  
the woe of rocking chair nights   
hot plashes of mud-puddle tears
—a colored canvas that minions of time 
would rather gesso white 

in its bones the room 
remembers its worth as a womb 
nurturing a baby’s breath 
beneath blue-skin-skies 
where rows of purple spires grow
till Mistral winds blew hard and cold 
and flew her lavender soul 
far from home

oh  the loss of life 
wind-crashing-seas-onto-rocks— 
loss of life 

skeleton-ribs-of-the-crib 
stripped-of-her-lavender-sprig—    
loss of life

The Humble Abode

Mama says this is where 
  I was born on a stormy night
    the benignant horn was where
      she'd paused to breathe and reside

         The bounteous hollow took her in
            and echoed my cries and coos
              spiralling down the springs
                 to protect me as if I were Zeus

                     I slide along the spirals 
                       to quench my itching thirst 
                          a joyous melody in the hollow
                            and palatable unceasing food 
  
                               When it rains we glide to be dry
                                  it shields us from the biting frost
                                    when it snows and humans sing 
                                       of the ballads of festive days

                                         At nights I crawl and climb
                                          to the window of that horn
                                         and watch the lavender starry sky
                                      she recites stories of distant worlds

                                     Sweet symphonies of chirping birds
                                    wake me up on fragrant mornings
                                   at times I step outside the door 
                                  to wander in some nearby forest

                             "Do you stay inside that cornucopia?"
                            A giant cub questioned me one day
                         I looked at Mama with my little black eyes
                       and wished to know the same

                  "Honey, this is our humble dwelling
                 that nurtures us, protects us, loves us
              as if this was the great destiny
            of a humble horn of spirals

        This is our door to a beautiful heaven
     with aromatic clouds and winged doors
   this will be the blissful abode of tiny beetles
who lived happily in a divine cornucopia"

9th May 2020
For Cornucopia Poetry Contest
Sponsored By: Kai Michael Neumann
Premiere Contest Winner: First Place

BRIAN'S CHOICE 10,any form,any theme Contest
Winner: Honorable Mention


Premium Member Hazy Tears Burst

Midnight hangs in  deepened revelation
as the  cry of elegy  flows within its waiting,
hazy tears burst to deny sleep’s interval
when baby - lullabies end  all pleasant leisure;
and a mother sighs from vague acceptance
enacting the  glee that cradles her child’s form.

Dusk engulfs  in soft hue of  threadbare beam
while the weary world  rests  in  peace
that  droopy stars bow to a grief, an ache
lingering: O  her words  break like shattered glass…
where that shift between hesitation and mourning,
pale moonlight releases its role of night guardian.

The birds become her voice of parting
for  their coos recall  a babe ‘s  laughter,  g o n e,
D.o.n.e … how  silence welcomes again
the requiem of another night coming.



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Words Drowned In Tears Contest
Sponsor: Broken Wings   10/21/2016

Premium Member Surround Sound

As the sun tinges the horizon
A pale shade of rose
Beauty touches the slate gray sky
White canvas painted exposed

Surround sound of Dove's voices
Coos echo on all sides
Roosters' fill in the deep bass sound
Mockingbirds' tone abides

All song birds in chorus sing out
on this still quiet morn
Melodies lift above trials
As the Doves' song is born  

There's that stillness saying wait
Rest before one of life's storms
The Holy Spirit does comfort
In my heart there's His form

No matter what life's trials present
The Comforter is there
Like the assurance of a daily
Sunrise no need to despair

As the orange sun glows like embers
Through the silhouetted trees
Thoughts run to the Savior's anguish
Who did so much for me

He made this awesome provision
The gift of the Comforter
Just reach out and touch the Savior
He's the great Affirmer

Premium Member Babies Unborn

I raise my voice and rage a fight
for little children trashed and thrown.
Sweet little coos and burps never heard,
the printed mittens never sewn.  

These tiny children wanted to play,
and be held and cradled so near.
To hear Mommy say,” I cherish you”,
and lullabies  to wipe dark night’s fear.

Their marble eyes never touched the sun,
never touched a  rubber ducky in soapy arms.
Never had a chance to shriek those circus smiles,
or  twiddle Grandpa’s  warm violin thumbs .

Their tiny breaths chopped in a moment,
with pierce of the sharp metal  they expired.
Were they able to shout silent screams?
Or trapped in a cocoon where they can’t hide.

Their pink little fingers stopped squirming, 
Heart beats blocked fading black and blue,
The luster of many decades of unlived joy gone.
Is this the most convenient thing to do?

And there go more of abrupt conceptions,
Unborn babies are gifts from God to behold.
The love for children has no need for shame, for guilt
As news of birth is the greatest wonder ever told.


......    ........ .
Contest of Scribe Marlon: Unborn Babies Dream
By nette onclaud


Premium Member When Doves Cry

Cooling off in falling months, approaching dusk.
Coordinated chill and quilting of snow, brusque.
Cooking lots of soup, beating down dough,
as the wind whoops on a weeping willow.

The sky blue sheets aired out on the clothesline.
Coordinates of beauty in her decline.
Cooties shots on the medical menu…sigh.
Cooperation of dirge, the woe-filled cry.

Co-occurence of life and absence of fog
on the handheld mirror, down by the bog.
Cookout of fried boughs and its vestment.
This particular parish was not a good investment.

Autumn’s turning down the soil - leaves
storm in turmoil, slowing down what it believes.
The coos of despair…her ring rolls off finger.
Her dreams of love no longer linger.

Cool when Autumn clashes with Winter
and the clash of letters are placed by printer.
The clouds are snow white, they get the scoop.
Doves cry and hover - eyes droop.

Premium Member In Every Garden

Suzette Prime/Free Verse



undulating yowls 
both sides of my hemispheres
reverberates through the ears
sadness
rejection
continuously play
the mind longs for its most melodious display
nature sings in sweet harmony with every raindrop
amidst the howl of the gale
whimpering of leaves 
drives all the cicadas into their unpleasant sleep
sweetest warbles of the wrens
coos of other birds
flapping wings of butterflies 
the enticing smiles of every colorful flower
I can’t hear
sounds trampled by the laughter of the rolling thunder 
through monstrous work load
wreathed my freedom and hope
yet, I snuggle in the silence of my heart
listening
winnowing the throbs 
clearing head to dross
swotting
disregard the trifling thud
with the viewing of sunrise
reaching out the synchronizer of nature
it’s a comforting feeling
trickling and flowing like dew
from tributary down to the threshold of sweetest mellowed treble
tasting the most scrumptious spiritual beauty 
just within
in every garden
always
there is a beautiful music to be heard
but the heart has to be kept deep in silence
enough to hear it
and find joy
in life
in this world.



April 12,2014  2.20pm 



-sharing an old poem. this poem didn't earn any dollars or cents :))) It was just asked by one of our dear great poets and authors to publish it and it was also an honor for me.



Second Place
Contest: A Million Dollar Poem Contest #1
Judged: 6/12/2015
Sponsors: My dearest fave poet sisters PD and Skat
© Len Gasun  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Fiery Horse

Down where the wisteria's leafed
Blossoms gone but not forgotten
The magnolia buds are poppin'
And clouds cover morn's risin' sun 

The distant dove coos at daybreak
And I've never seen a fiery horse
What were Elisha's thoughts right then
Or this an everyday sight of course 

From Gilgal to Bethel and to 
Jericho the two did depart
On down to the Jordan where
Waters Elijah's mantel did part

On the other side of Jordan
Elijah asked Elisha his desire
Elisha wanted a double
Portion of Elijah's spiritual fire

Elijah could not promise this
Only God could be the giver
If you see me when I'm taken
Then this gift too will occur

As the chariots of fire and 
horses pulled them asunder
Elisha saw Elijah taken
Quickly in a whirlwind's dust stir

As the thick clouds and fog drip mist
And roosters crow in the hollow
Will this wet day be the day
When lifted up all Christians hallo

Finis'
Based roughly on 2 Kings 2: 1-22
Verse 12 is very important

Hallo_to cry with a loud shout or voice

Lonely Streets

City streets spew fire on sunburnt July day.
Dabbing sweat from brow, I meld into paved sea. 
Mick cries out "Angie" from quaint corner café;
slowing steps, I search his stripped-bare poignancy.

Strangers strut in sync with street’s allegro beat.
Pigeons peck concrete, hungry coos offbeat.
Sullen faces fall, diverting weary eyes.
Souls emit loneliness lost in sad goodbyes.

Exhaust squeezes my chest with each poisoned breath;
choking on my tears, I smell acrid deceit.  
Amid spinning wheels, a stranger till my death.
On wide city streets, crowds rush by in defeat.  

A restless, hazy sun sinks to moonless night.
Senses become keen with city’s fading light.
Midnight hour comes to call, taunting my dark heart.
Angel wings span streets as nameless child departs.

Premium Member Tender Loving Touch

TENDER LOVING TOUCH

don't fear
she's dear

tight clutch
soft touch

wears white
polite

too sick
she's quick

your ache
she breaks

your ill
she feels

one pill
you still

preserve
your nerve

correct
inject

your shock
she blocks

you scared
she cares

through sleeps
she peeps

recharged
discharge

"thank you"
she coos
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Sponsor	Judy Konos
Contest Name	YOUR FOOTLE POEM 
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O.E. Guillermo
8:41 pm, April 04, 2015

What Do the Stars Tell a Lover's Heart

Profound silence
felt and revered,
stirring an awesome emotion
which stillness repeals
whenever brightness shines;
and the primroses' scent spreads the delight
of the mild season.

What do the stars 
tell a lover's heart...palpitating
in tranquility, amid shadows
that advance with the pretty fireflies?
Dream, and reprieve from the loss...
hoping that love doesn't lay at rest,
but chooses to celebrate
'till after the evening and tell romantic tales.

The invisible crickets chirp, 
somewhat awkward to the ears,
I'd rather hear the coos of the owls,
which are richer and more harmonious in sound,
but where are they in this darkness, unless
they are mating in the willows of the lake?

Our blanket is spread on the wide Sheep Meadow,
with the superb view of the Manhattan's skycrapers,
towering over us as sentinels in castle's towers.
Juliet wanted to taste this freedom,
embracing and kissing her handsome Romeo,
not fearing anyone intruding in her paradise,
unwilling to leave anytime soon;
and unruffled, she would continue to love him.  

What do the stars tell a lover's heart?
Accept the lovely rose that he offers you, and adore it,
because it has no thorns, to make you bleed in despair;
sing with him a beautiful sonnet that Shakespeare wrote
for his lover who crossed the huge Atlantic ocean,
when ships took months to reach America's shore!

Written on 2/19/2010

Premium Member My Family

No dove coos, the sun
sleeps below morn's horizon....
family rises

animals still sleep
old man gets upon his feet....
scent of bacon floats

coffee's aroma 
wafts upon darkened cold room....
computer alive 

buttered toast awaits
time to lie in the warm sun....
breakfast eaten soon

dogs stand by her chair
begging for some bites of food....
bacon entices 

day's chores soon tackled
with much enthusiasm.... 
farmer plants those seeds

fatigue calls out rest
a nap is caught in his chair....
work some more outdoors

whip-poor-wills calls come
night has slipped in the front door....
two dogs, old man rest

Inspired by Marvin Celestial
Haiku about my family
Written: May 6, 2016

Premium Member The Fairies of Motherhood

I bet you didn’t know about the fairies
assigned to all the infants that are born.
At night beside her precious charge each tarries
while softly crooning lullabies till morn.

An extra special fairy will be sent
to first-time mothers of a girl or boy, 
for when the harried fretting mom is spent,
she only has to look upon her joy.

As magic dust releases from above,
the mother sighs and holds her baby near.
Then particles illuminate the love
of one who coos while cradling her dear.

As fairies go, there simply is no other
as blessed as she who serves the child and mother.

When a Daughter Loses Her Father

When I was just just a little girl I thought I knew it all 
But as the years passed by I have never felt so small 
I never knew what life would be like without you teaching me 
But now I'm lost and am scared but there's no way to flee 
Dad I know you'd want me to be happy and I know you'd want me to smile 
But losing you has confused my soul and set me back awhile 
We were just becoming closer, becoming the best of friends 
I know we had many disagreements but in the end we made amends 
I miss you everyday and cry when I'm alone 
I'm lost inside with nowhere to hide I wish that I had known 
Life is different now I feel guilty to laugh and sing 
I know it shouldn't be that way but you were my everything 
I looked up to you for guidance, for strength, for love, for hope 
But in the end you'll always be my best friend and in time I'll learn to cope 
It's almost been three years dad and life has knocked me down 
It's beaten me up, bruised my heart, and tossed me all around 
But life has also brought a brand new meaning 
From diaper changes, little coos, and the occasional screaming 
From I love you's, to bedtime kisses, all the way to morning messes 
From pacifiers, to baby swings, and little tiny frilly things 
Baby baths, little naps, apple juice, and diaper bags 
Cuddles, tantrums, spills, and cuts 
So much sass it's driving me nuts 
The stress, the love, this life that I chose 
Could only get better the more that they grow 
My heart is so full, this much is true 
The only thing my life could ever need now is you.

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