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My Family

No dove coos, the sun sleeps below morn's horizon.... family rises animals still sleep old man gets upon his feet.... scent of bacon floats coffee's aroma wafts upon darkened cold room.... computer alive buttered toast awaits time to lie in the warm sun.... breakfast eaten soon dogs stand by her chair begging for some bites of food.... bacon entices day's chores soon tackled with much enthusiasm.... farmer plants those seeds fatigue calls out rest a nap is caught in his chair.... work some more outdoors whip-poor-wills calls come night has slipped in the front door.... two dogs, old man rest
Inspired by Marvin Celestial Haiku about my family Written: May 6, 2016
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Makama Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 6:50 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Oh I loved your entry Sara! I feel like I just bathed in the warm sun. Congratulations on your well deserved win! #7 ; )
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by with congrats..I am honored that you liked what I penned..Thanks for your continued support..Sara
Haight Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 8:11 AM
Lovely images of a day in your family life, and such well-written Haikus. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest, Sara. Hugs, Sandra
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by with congrats..I appreciate your continued support of my work by reading and commenting..Sara
Celestial Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Congratz for the win!
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 3:29 PM
I appreciate you letting me know that I placed in your contest..Sara
Raven Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 4:00 PM
Hi Sara, i do Love Haiku and you do them so well, here i am again, another Haiku, a set this time to join my faves. The scenes flow so easily through your set pf my family Haiku. Each scene you paint with such gentle colour. Your Haiku ever sing Sara. Inspiration drips from the pen and your words always sing. Excellent work. This is a seven and a fave Sara. Hugs....Mike. XX
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 3:28 PM
I am so honored to be placed in your favs..I appreciate you dropping by..Thanks for your continued support in taking time to comment..Sara
Sathasivam Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Excellent. A lovely family Haiku. Enjoyed reading it.
Kendrick Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Ravi, Thanks for the continued visits to my page..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..Sara
Chalise Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Nice to read,enjoyed Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 4:43 PM
Glad that you enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 7:40 AM
the scenes of harmony enhance family ties.. so wonderfully worded, sara... wow!..huggs
Kendrick Avatar
May 11, 2016 at 4:43 PM
Harmonious living is a good way to go..Thanks for dropping by.Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 8:01 PM
I really like this, Sara. The line Night has slipped in the front door" is so awesome!!!
Horne Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 3:32 PM
this is lovely, my friend x
Horsman Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 3:56 PM
These are excellent Sara.
Callus Avatar
May 8, 2016 at 5:53 AM
You have done well with this topic, Sara. I'm still looking for inspiration; it's not easy writing a string of haiku without falling foul of expectations. ~ Regards // paul
Andresen Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 3:40 PM
- Lovely family poem, Sara - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 6:07 PM
Thanks for dropping by..I like the sunflower smile picture..Sara
Aniagyei Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 5:42 AM
I like this, Sara!! paints a mental picture
Kendrick Avatar
May 7, 2016 at 6:04 PM
Thanks for stopping by..I hope that was a good mental picture..Sara
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