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No dove coos, the sun sleeps below morn's horizon.... family rises animals still sleep old man gets upon his feet.... scent of bacon floats coffee's aroma wafts upon darkened cold room.... computer alive buttered toast awaits time to lie in the warm sun.... breakfast eaten soon dogs stand by her chair begging for some bites of food.... bacon entices day's chores soon tackled with much enthusiasm.... farmer plants those seeds fatigue calls out rest a nap is caught in his chair.... work some more outdoors whip-poor-wills calls come night has slipped in the front door.... two dogs, old man rest Inspired by Marvin Celestial Haiku about my family Written: May 6, 2016

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Funom Makama

Date: 5/20/2016 6:50:00 AM

Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/19/2016 10:53:00 AM

Oh I loved your entry Sara! I feel like I just bathed in the warm sun. Congratulations on your well deserved win! #7 ; )

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2016 4:00:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by with congrats..I am honored that you liked what I penned..Thanks for your continued support..Sara

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/19/2016 8:11:00 AM

Lovely images of a day in your family life, and such well-written Haikus. Congratulations on your nice placement in the contest, Sara. Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2016 3:30:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by with congrats..I appreciate your continued support of my work by reading and commenting..Sara

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 5/19/2016 6:56:00 AM

Congratz for the win!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2016 3:29:00 PM

I appreciate you letting me know that I placed in your contest..Sara

Vladislav Raven

Date: 5/18/2016 4:00:00 PM

Hi Sara, i do Love Haiku and you do them so well, here i am again, another Haiku, a set this time to join my faves. The scenes flow so easily through your set pf my family Haiku. Each scene you paint with such gentle colour. Your Haiku ever sing Sara. Inspiration drips from the pen and your words always sing. Excellent work. This is a seven and a fave Sara. Hugs....Mike. XX

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2016 3:28:00 PM

I am so honored to be placed in your favs..I appreciate you dropping by..Thanks for your continued support in taking time to comment..Sara

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/12/2016 6:26:00 AM

Excellent. A lovely family Haiku. Enjoyed reading it.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/19/2016 3:26:00 PM

Ravi, Thanks for the continued visits to my page..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment..Sara

Deepak Chalise

Date: 5/11/2016 3:59:00 PM

Nice to read,enjoyed Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/11/2016 4:43:00 PM

Glad that you enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/11/2016 7:40:00 AM

the scenes of harmony enhance family ties.. so wonderfully worded, sara... wow!..huggs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/11/2016 4:43:00 PM

Harmonious living is a good way to go..Thanks for dropping by.Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2016 8:01:00 PM

I really like this, Sara. The line Night has slipped in the front door" is so awesome!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 5/10/2016 3:32:00 PM

this is lovely, my friend x

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/9/2016 3:56:00 PM

These are excellent Sara.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/8/2016 5:53:00 AM

You have done well with this topic, Sara. I'm still looking for inspiration; it's not easy writing a string of haiku without falling foul of expectations. ~ Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/7/2016 3:40:00 PM

- Lovely family poem, Sara - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/7/2016 6:07:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by..I like the sunflower smile picture..Sara

Wilfred Aniagyei

Date: 5/7/2016 5:42:00 AM

I like this, Sara!! paints a mental picture

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/7/2016 6:04:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by..I hope that was a good mental picture..Sara