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Fiery Horse

Down where the wisteria's leafed
Blossoms gone but not forgotten
The magnolia buds are poppin'
And clouds cover morn's risin' sun 

The distant dove coos at daybreak
And I've never seen a fiery horse
What were Elisha's thoughts right then
Or this an everyday sight of course 

From Gilgal to Bethel and to 
Jericho the two did depart
On down to the Jordan where
Waters Elijah's mantel did part

On the other side of Jordan
Elijah asked Elisha his desire
Elisha wanted a double
Portion of Elijah's spiritual fire

Elijah could not promise this
Only God could be the giver
If you see me when I'm taken
Then this gift too will occur

As the chariots of fire and 
horses pulled them asunder
Elisha saw Elijah taken
Quickly in a whirlwind's dust stir

As the thick clouds and fog drip mist
And roosters crow in the hollow
Will this wet day be the day
When lifted up all Christians hallo

Finis'
Based roughly on 2 Kings 2: 1-22
Verse 12 is very important

Hallo_to cry with a loud shout or voice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 10:24 AM
Beautiful imagery and consistent with the story in the Bible, SAra. A 7. Congrats on your POTD! :) KIM
Yvonne Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 8:40 PM
Congratulations Sara your excellent write being chosen poem of the day.
Taylor Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 6:32 PM
I love the imagery that you paint with your words. It all flowed so elegantly!! Brava! <3 Tash
Hamilton Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 5:56 PM
beautifully portrayed Sara hugs 7
Stoner Jr Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 2:56 PM
Congratulations Sara for your selection of this fine work as Poem of the Day.
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 11:39 AM
Oh, how beautiful and inspiring, Sara...congrats on TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda
Roper Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 10:19 AM
Congrats on poem of the day a7 on a wonderful write .bless you eve
Ryerson Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Congratulation Sara! I love reading the Bible and you have written this story with great eloquence...Your faith shines brightly through 'the thick clouds and fog'...My favorite OT books are Job and Ecclesiastes - Tim
Romaine Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 9:27 AM
Hey Sara, BIG congratulations on your poem being selected for POTD! What an amazing tribute not only for the powerful Horse, but even more so that it's wrapped around one of the greatest Prophets that our Heavenly Father gave us - and then to top it off: your excellent gift of honoring His Word in this powerful work of art. Well deserved! Be Blessed, Neva
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 7:30 AM
- So glad that I read the finished result, beautifully Sara - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nance Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 7:13 AM
Wonderful!! Perfect selection for poem of the day, Grats!
Lindley Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 9:05 PM
Title grabbed me and the write inspired me.. This one is a jewel I want to savor.. Adding to my fav list and thanks for it.. Filled with spiritual grace and golden treasure of truth..
Mcdaid Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 2:51 PM
truly beautifully penned piece sara
Goff Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 11:33 AM
i dig it, Sara! cool flow....spooky good....jim
De Paz Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 6:06 AM
Poetic and involving, my compliments
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 6:00 AM
- Sara, I read your poem yesterday ..... and I read it today ..... it was beautiful yesterday and it is beautiful today :) - I wish you a great Monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 4:57 AM
I can hardly wait for you to finish this one. I hear doves every morning; it's become a very precious part of my day.
Devonshire Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 1:49 PM
Dear Sara, how sad to see the wisteria losing its blossoms, but the magnolias are coming soon (I hope). I love the imagery in your poem and would like to read it when you finish writing it. It was wonderful to see you again. Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 1:39 PM
you hafta let me know when this is finalized,sara... superbly written... huggs
Allison Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 7:09 AM
oh Sara hurry and get it finished the imagery is delightful!!!! hugs jan xx
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