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Down where the wisteria's leafed Blossoms gone but not forgotten The magnolia buds are poppin' And clouds cover morn's risin' sun The distant dove coos at daybreak And I've never seen a fiery horse What were Elisha's thoughts right then Or this an everyday sight of course From Gilgal to Bethel and to Jericho the two did depart On down to the Jordan where Waters Elijah's mantel did part On the other side of Jordan Elijah asked Elisha his desire Elisha wanted a double Portion of Elijah's spiritual fire Elijah could not promise this Only God could be the giver If you see me when I'm taken Then this gift too will occur As the chariots of fire and horses pulled them asunder Elisha saw Elijah taken Quickly in a whirlwind's dust stir As the thick clouds and fog drip mist And roosters crow in the hollow Will this wet day be the day When lifted up all Christians hallo Finis' Based roughly on 2 Kings 2: 1-22 Verse 12 is very important Hallo_to cry with a loud shout or voice

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/15/2015 10:24:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and consistent with the story in the Bible, SAra. A 7. Congrats on your POTD! :) KIM
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Date: 4/14/2015 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations Sara your excellent write being chosen poem of the day.
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Date: 4/14/2015 6:32:00 PM
I love the imagery that you paint with your words. It all flowed so elegantly!! Brava! <3 Tash
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Date: 4/14/2015 5:56:00 PM
beautifully portrayed Sara hugs 7
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Date: 4/14/2015 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations Sara for your selection of this fine work as Poem of the Day.
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:39:00 AM
Oh, how beautiful and inspiring, Sara...congrats on TPOD!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 4/14/2015 10:19:00 AM
Congrats on poem of the day a7 on a wonderful write .bless you eve
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Date: 4/14/2015 9:30:00 AM
Congratulation Sara! I love reading the Bible and you have written this story with great eloquence...Your faith shines brightly through 'the thick clouds and fog'...My favorite OT books are Job and Ecclesiastes - Tim
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Date: 4/14/2015 9:27:00 AM
Hey Sara, BIG congratulations on your poem being selected for POTD! What an amazing tribute not only for the powerful Horse, but even more so that it's wrapped around one of the greatest Prophets that our Heavenly Father gave us - and then to top it off: your excellent gift of honoring His Word in this powerful work of art. Well deserved! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 4/14/2015 7:30:00 AM
- So glad that I read the finished result, beautifully Sara - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/14/2015 7:13:00 AM
Wonderful!! Perfect selection for poem of the day, Grats!
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Date: 4/13/2015 9:05:00 PM
Title grabbed me and the write inspired me.. This one is a jewel I want to savor.. Adding to my fav list and thanks for it.. Filled with spiritual grace and golden treasure of truth..
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Date: 4/13/2015 2:51:00 PM
truly beautifully penned piece sara
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Date: 4/13/2015 11:33:00 AM
i dig it, Sara! cool flow....spooky good....jim
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Date: 4/13/2015 6:06:00 AM
Poetic and involving, my compliments
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Date: 4/13/2015 6:00:00 AM
- Sara, I read your poem yesterday ..... and I read it today ..... it was beautiful yesterday and it is beautiful today :) - I wish you a great Monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/13/2015 4:57:00 AM
I can hardly wait for you to finish this one. I hear doves every morning; it's become a very precious part of my day.
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Date: 4/12/2015 1:49:00 PM
Dear Sara, how sad to see the wisteria losing its blossoms, but the magnolias are coming soon (I hope). I love the imagery in your poem and would like to read it when you finish writing it. It was wonderful to see you again. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/12/2015 1:39:00 PM
you hafta let me know when this is finalized,sara... superbly written... huggs
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Date: 4/12/2015 7:09:00 AM
oh Sara hurry and get it finished the imagery is delightful!!!! hugs jan xx
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