Hazy Tears Burst

Midnight hangs in  deepened revelation
as the  cry of elegy  flows within its waiting,
hazy tears burst to deny sleep’s interval
when baby - lullabies end  all pleasant leisure;
and a mother sighs from vague acceptance
enacting the  glee that cradles her child’s form.

Dusk engulfs  in soft hue of  threadbare beam
while the weary world  rests  in  peace
that  droopy stars bow to a grief, an ache
lingering: O  her words  break like shattered glass…
where that shift between hesitation and mourning,
pale moonlight releases its role of night guardian.

The birds become her voice of parting
for  their coos recall  a babe ‘s  laughter,  g o n e,
D.o.n.e … how  silence welcomes again
the requiem of another night coming.



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Words Drowned In Tears Contest
Sponsor: Broken Wings   10/21/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/24/2016 7:55:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in my contest, as always a beautiful poem full of grief-stricken words
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Date: 10/24/2016 1:31:00 AM
A very beautiful poem for a horrible event in life. And how it resonates in everything, and every day.
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Date: 10/24/2016 12:05:00 AM
Dear Nette, very emotional write this is.....loss of baby.....very very sad... congratulations on your win//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/23/2016 7:04:00 PM
Beautiful write like always that last stanza was very heartfelt... Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/23/2016 8:35:00 AM
Nette this is beyond great poetry. You treat my ears with this beauty. An absolute fav.
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Date: 10/22/2016 1:50:00 AM
Oh, wow.. Very nicely written. I felt this in my heart, the last segment is just quite sorrowful. You are very much talented writing about sorrows. Best of luck. 7
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Date: 10/21/2016 7:56:00 PM
A very sad write Nette...well penned
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Date: 10/21/2016 7:02:00 PM
I'm pulling my entry..you win...nette you never cease to amaze..such a skill
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Date: 10/21/2016 3:56:00 PM
Nette, this was so sad, this one reach right inside my chest and grabbed me by the heart. I could feel the deep emotions flowing silently as I read this. Beautifully done.
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Date: 10/21/2016 12:41:00 PM
What commanding poetry, you've got me all choked up Nette. As a mom, it took grasp of my heart and wouldn't let go. 'pale moonlight releases its role of night guardian' I love that line, I love them all!
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Date: 10/21/2016 12:14:00 PM
So beautifully sad, nette. Your poetic prowess never ceases to amaze!
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Date: 10/21/2016 12:13:00 PM
This is gripping poetry. Mothers expect to pass on before their children, thus I am especially reminded of all innocent babies perishing in war-torn countries. Quality at its best!
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