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Tender Loving Touch

TENDER LOVING TOUCH don't fear she's dear tight clutch soft touch wears white polite too sick she's quick your ache she breaks your ill she feels one pill you still preserve your nerve correct inject your shock she blocks you scared she cares through sleeps she peeps recharged discharge "thank you" she coos ___________________________ Sponsor Judy Konos Contest Name YOUR FOOTLE POEM ---Placed1st--- O.E. Guillermo 8:41 pm, April 04, 2015
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April 18, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Olive, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA
Makama Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 10:34 AM
Your message is vivid, clear and conspicuously imaginative. Good work and definitely a 7
Nunez Avatar
April 8, 2015 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Olive. Love your TLC! Hugs! Kim :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 8:32 AM
thank you Kim for your kind support.. :)!~olive eloisa
Roper Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 7:18 PM
Congrautlations on your win and a 7. Blessings Eve
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 8:38 AM
thank you so much EVe.. :)! Blessings too.. :)!
Dietrich Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 6:07 PM
sweetly done, Olive. big congrats for your win.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 8:34 AM
thank you ANdie I saw yours too,. :)!//olive eloisa :)
Allison Avatar
April 7, 2015 at 11:34 AM
dropping back with my congrats Olive:-) Hugs jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 8:18 AM
Thank you Jan.. :)! hugs back. :)!
Callus Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 9:24 AM
Lovely and caring string of Footles, Olive_eloi! I admire nurses, but I would never make a good one! Hugs // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 8:15 PM
Thanks much Paul.. :)! I so appreciate your comment.. :)! and thanks for the soupmail.. :)! hugs back!!!>. :)
Gasun Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 9:31 AM
Such a very beautiful and very inspiring footle poem & tribute to nurses this my dear amiga, Olive! In fact, this was my dream when I was young but my aunts said, teaching runs in our blood:(. I wished I didn't listen ;)) Well,You did it very well. Thank you so much once again for sharing! Stopping by to greet you as well a Blessed Lenten and Easter Season! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 6, 2015 at 5:52 AM
Thanks much Leonora amiga.. :)! WEeee a nurse can be a teacher too.. :)! I taught too before to aspiring nurses.. :)! Blessed Easter too.. :)! wow lobe those hugs.. :D!
Fraser Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 7:17 AM
Fine set of Footles Oliz. Nurses in my eyes are very underrated. When one looks at the wage increases MP's in the Parliament get compared to nurses, it makes my blood boil. Good luck in the contest with this lovely poetry little one, hugs//xx//DinoJamesxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 1:38 AM
Dino James,, :) weeeeeeeeeee you have a Dino in your pic.. :D hahaha thanks much for your generous comment as always but as for me ... hugs..olive eloisa
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2015 at 8:07 PM
My mum trained to be a nurse when she was 50 - truly angels in disguise and I have the utmost respect for those that undertake this vital job - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 9:12 AM
thank you so much Jan.. :)! I appreciate your drop by.. :)! hugs back xx
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