Premiere Contest WinnerThe Humble Abode

Mama says this is where 
  I was born on a stormy night
    the benignant horn was where
      she'd paused to breathe and reside

         The bounteous hollow took her in
            and echoed my cries and coos
              spiralling down the springs
                 to protect me as if I were Zeus

                     I slide along the spirals 
                       to quench my itching thirst 
                          a joyous melody in the hollow
                            and palatable unceasing food 
  
                               When it rains we glide to be dry
                                  it shields us from the biting frost
                                    when it snows and humans sing 
                                       of the ballads of festive days

                                         At nights I crawl and climb
                                          to the window of that horn
                                         and watch the lavender starry sky
                                      she recites stories of distant worlds

                                     Sweet symphonies of chirping birds
                                    wake me up on fragrant mornings
                                   at times I step outside the door 
                                  to wander in some nearby forest

                             "Do you stay inside that cornucopia?"
                            A giant cub questioned me one day
                         I looked at Mama with my little black eyes
                       and wished to know the same

                  "Honey, this is our humble dwelling
                 that nurtures us, protects us, loves us
              as if this was the great destiny
            of a humble horn of spirals

        This is our door to a beautiful heaven
     with aromatic clouds and winged doors
   this will be the blissful abode of tiny beetles
who lived happily in a divine cornucopia"

9th May 2020
For Cornucopia Poetry Contest
Sponsored By: Kai Michael Neumann
Premiere Contest Winner: First Place

BRIAN'S CHOICE 10,any form,any theme Contest
Winner: Honorable Mention
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Sweatt Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Nice and well written poem. Congratulations on your first place win! God Bless you!
Mishra Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 11:28 AM
Thank you Daniel :)
Sikorski Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Lovely piece !
Mishra Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 9:43 PM
Thank you so much
Callus Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 3:05 PM
Congratulations on placing first, Aditi! I have no doubt that this was one of the very best in the contest. Enjoy your merited trophy! ~ Regards // paul
Mishra Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 3:09 PM
I am grateful that you visited my poem to convey your best wishes and encouragement. Thank you for appreciating Paul. God bless you :)
Inman Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 1:53 PM
A superb write, Aditi.
Mishra Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Thank you so much James :)
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May 16, 2020 at 6:54 AM
Helo Addi Mishra,A very nice story form poetry. I enjoyed it. Have a nice day my friend.
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May 16, 2020 at 6:11 PM
Hello Aditi Misha, you enjoy your evening to.
Mishra Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 8:32 AM
Thank you for your appreciation dear friend. Have a good day :)
Mitra Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 5:15 AM
A big congratulations..you indeed ..a talented poetess..keep it up
Mishra Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 5:59 AM
Thank you for your wishes and appreciation :)
Agustin Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 6:24 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for your comments. God bless you.
Mishra Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 6:46 AM
Thank you so much for your blessings and appreciation :)
Idudje Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 12:34 PM
Fecilitated Gratulated Celebrated Bravo! Creativity
Mishra Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 12:41 PM
Thanks so much Gideon! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 1:49 PM
This is outstanding Aditi. Very worthy of your First placement! Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Mishra Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 2:02 PM
Thank you so much Connie :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 4:11 PM
How sweet and creative this is, Aditi. Congrats on a wonderful win!
Mishra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Thank you for your encouragement Andrea :)
Watt Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 2:29 PM
Aditi, this imaginative write was creative and captivating; worthy of your podium win in the cornucopia contest. Well done and congratulations! ~ John
Mishra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Thank you for your generous appreciation John :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Creative layout. Sara
Mishra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Thank you for the appreciation Sara :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 9:57 AM
Great poem! Love the ‘ the bounteous hollow took her in and echoed my cries and coos! The shape of the horn is another special touch! Well done!
Mishra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 10:13 AM
Thank you for the appreciation Krish. I was trying to experiment with the emotions I would experience if I could ever step inside a cornucopia. :)
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May 12, 2020 at 8:40 AM
Wow. I love it. Awesome write and I can't wait to read more from you. Love and prayers and God bless you, Gina
Mishra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 8:47 AM
That's a really generous feedback Gina. Thanks for the love and appreciation.I hope I can contribute with my words. :)
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May 12, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Aditi, one's dwelling is definitely provided moments of abundance and life full of satisfaction. Congrats. Mohan
Mishra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 6:04 AM
That's true, and each living being holds on to the thread of simple joys. Thank you for the appreciation. :) Aditi
Gentile Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on your top placement,' This is an awesome write !!
Mishra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 5:59 AM
Thank you for the encouragement. :) Aditi
Neumann Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 5:36 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win in my contest. A cornucopia of joy. Take care, Kai
Mishra Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 5:58 AM
Indeed a cornucopia of joy with this placement! Thank you for the appreciation and encouragement in the contest. :) Aditi
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