When Doves Cry

Cooling off in falling months, approaching dusk.
Coordinated chill and quilting of snow, brusque.
Cooking lots of soup, beating down dough,
as the wind whoops on a weeping willow.

The sky blue sheets aired out on the clothesline.
Coordinates of beauty in her decline.
Cooties shots on the medical menu…sigh.
Cooperation of dirge, the woe-filled cry.

Co-occurence of life and absence of fog
on the handheld mirror, down by the bog.
Cookout of fried boughs and its vestment.
This particular parish was not a good investment.

Autumn’s turning down the soil - leaves
storm in turmoil, slowing down what it believes.
The coos of despair…her ring rolls off finger.
Her dreams of love no longer linger.

Cool when Autumn clashes with Winter
and the clash of letters are placed by printer.
The clouds are snow white, they get the scoop.
Doves cry and hover - eyes droop.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Horn Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 4:41 PM
Tears drop up and spring comes back again to refresh us and enjoy. Had forgotten about your greatness.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 5:31 PM
You are so sweet, James! I appreciate you!
Hind Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 4:11 PM
WOW!!! This is quite amazing work, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 7:07 PM
Thank you so much, Paige!
Tor Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 12:22 PM
Kim how did I miss this great Poem of yours. A big Congratulations on a well deserved POTD. Love this one...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 1:49 PM
Thank you so much, Mike! :)
Kauffman Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Kim, congratulations on your POTD! It is a rich feast of fresh images and striking metaphor! So delighted to see it as the POTD. Blessings my friend!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 3:03 PM
Thank you so much!
Meadows Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 12:11 AM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 7:15 AM
Thank you, Jeanette!
M  Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 11:15 PM
So lovely to see you get POTD Kim for your beautiful poem! Congratulations….Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Thank you, Deb!
Daniel Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 10:32 PM
Awe-inspiring poetry, Kim, congratulations on POTD:)
Roper Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 9:26 PM
Beautiful poem, Kim. Congratulations on POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 6:01 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 6:43 PM
"When doves cry..." sounds sad, but your insightful poem with magical images, has made me emotional. Congratulations on a great write, Dear Kim, and receiving recognition of POTD. Warm wishes ~ Mala
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 7:11 PM
Thank you, Mala! I appreciate your comment!
Nicole Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 5:50 PM
"When doves cry, dreams of love no longer linger." So tender and emotional, all at the same time. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 7:10 PM
So glad you enjoyed, Brandy! :)
Buehler Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 2:52 PM
Heartfelt congratulations on your POTD honors, Kim. A magnificent creation! ;)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 4:07 PM
Thank you, Evelyn! xx
Anaya Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 1:01 PM
Gazpacho, the perfect soup for these summer days, accompanied by no-knead bread, garlic herb or Asiago! "The coos of despair" depths of despair. Hearty Congratulations on a scenic and intriguing POTD Kim Rodrigues "with an s"! Hugs~Prince
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Hugs and thanks, sweet Anaya!
Baker Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 10:25 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem receiving the POTD! A wonderful blend of emotions and imagery, Kim. A FAV for my list. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Thank you so much, Bill!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful write. Love It. Have a blessed day/week with your win..............
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 10:18 AM
Thank you so much xxoo
Lane Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 9:21 AM
The mournful cry of doves is one of the saddest I've ever heard. Love the line, "...Autumn clashes with Winter." Sometimes I wish Autumn would linger longer. Great write, and congratulations on POTD, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 10:18 AM
Thank you, Lin, for a wonderful comment!
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July 30, 2023 at 9:12 AM
Cootie shots alone are enough to make my eyes droop, but with so much imagery going on here they never got a chance, brilliant and deserving POTD, congratulations Kim, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Thank you so very much! Glad you liked the “cootie shots” Hugs ~
Kitchin Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Kim, a beautiful poem, congratulations on POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Thank you, Tania! We sharpen each other on PS xx
Lindley Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Vivid imagery my friend. A poem that clearly shows your very fine talent. Congratulations on POTD with this one. God bless..
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 10:20 AM
I appreciate you so, Robert! Happy Sunday!
Elless Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 7:38 AM
Wow, what a beautiful poem. Kim, Congratulations on Your POTD. NEVER give up on love. Stay Creative.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 10:20 AM
Thank you so much for your encouragement! Hugs
Wolf Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 7:07 AM
The P.S. leadership has asked me to edit the penultimate line of your POTD. Here's what I came up with: 'Snow White, get the scoop!' Notice the delightful ambiguity in the word 'scoop:' could be ice cream scoop; could be doggie y-k-w scoop. lol. Happy to help in any way I can. ~ Editor-at-large (obese?!), gw... Oh, yes: Congrats on POTD, Kim!!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 10:23 AM
More so, dear Gershon, did anyone notice the subtlety of “coo” in this poem! I love what you see! You have your wizened eyes open! Happy Weekend!
Cunningham Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 5:27 AM
Stunning poetry Kim, a well deserved honour of POTD. Big congratulations. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Thank you so much, Tom!
Pandit Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 5:09 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Kim. Enjoy your special day today.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 5:53 AM
Thank you so much! :)
Gentile Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 4:54 AM
Kim, congratulations on your POTD honors for this wonderfully heartfelt write!! Enjoy your day xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 5:07 AM
Thank you, Mike!
Mcintosh Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 4:03 AM
Wonderful poetry. I just love this. Congrats on the POTD. God bless you, Kim. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 5:08 AM
Thank you, Gina! I know we sharpen each other on PS!
Read Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 3:31 AM
Congratulations Kim on your poem of the day,enjoyable read.xx
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 5:08 AM
Thank you, John! :)
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