What Do the Stars Tell a Lover's Heart

Profound silence
felt and revered,
stirring an awesome emotion
which stillness repeals
whenever brightness shines;
and the primroses' scent spreads the delight
of the mild season.

What do the stars 
tell a lover's heart...palpitating
in tranquility, amid shadows
that advance with the pretty fireflies?
Dream, and reprieve from the loss...
hoping that love doesn't lay at rest,
but chooses to celebrate
'till after the evening and tell romantic tales.

The invisible crickets chirp, 
somewhat awkward to the ears,
I'd rather hear the coos of the owls,
which are richer and more harmonious in sound,
but where are they in this darkness, unless
they are mating in the willows of the lake?

Our blanket is spread on the wide Sheep Meadow,
with the superb view of the Manhattan's skycrapers,
towering over us as sentinels in castle's towers.
Juliet wanted to taste this freedom,
embracing and kissing her handsome Romeo,
not fearing anyone intruding in her paradise,
unwilling to leave anytime soon;
and unruffled, she would continue to love him.  

What do the stars tell a lover's heart?
Accept the lovely rose that he offers you, and adore it,
because it has no thorns, to make you bleed in despair;
sing with him a beautiful sonnet that Shakespeare wrote
for his lover who crossed the huge Atlantic ocean,
when ships took months to reach America's shore!

Written on 2/19/2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/19/2013 9:04:00 PM
this is another one that would sure be lovely in my current faves contest where every poem is a winner. HOw are you doing,Andrew? Long time no see!!
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Date: 3/9/2010 5:59:00 PM
congratulations Andrew, a worthy winner.....Margaret
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Date: 3/8/2010 4:45:00 PM
Congradulations Andrew!! A lovely poem for 1st Place!!! Jeralynn
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:31:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win! -Mike
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Date: 3/8/2010 11:30:00 AM
Many congratulations Andrew with this exceptional poem, well deserved if i may say so >> a terrific first place >> James
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Date: 3/8/2010 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Laura's Beyond Nightfall! contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2010 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on this beautiful poem, in first place!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/8/2010 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on first place ..Constance
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Date: 3/8/2010 6:48:00 AM
enjoyed, congrats on the win!!
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Date: 3/8/2010 5:19:00 AM
Superb! A man in his element excelling! Great win! #1 Light & Love
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:23:00 AM
Andrew my congratulations to you for winning on this contest, a poem that will be known forever, a truly deserving win. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/7/2010 10:04:00 PM
Awesome, Andrew, to favs! Congrats!
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Date: 3/7/2010 9:10:00 PM
What a lovey, precious poem. Very well done and worthy of the first place spot. Conatulations. Joyce
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Date: 3/7/2010 7:48:00 PM
Lovely poem that deserves the winners spot. Good for you! BG
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew, on your success in the Poetry Soup member contest: Beyond Nightfall! Sponsored by: Laura Mckenzie. I can see why you won first place! The words flow beautifully. Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win...enjoyed....Marty
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:04:00 PM
Andrew~ Congratulations on your first place win in my "Beyond Nightfall" contest! I will need your address to send you the gift you won. I am ordering your trophy tomorrow! So put a message in my soup mail box! Great job! Laura :)
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Date: 2/19/2010 7:14:00 PM
Beautiful poem...enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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