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Premium Member but to ask

must a man lose everything
    to divine those truths inside -
       must he bare his marrow else
         deny what flesh should hide -
          and will he open up his veins
         thus through his blood, abide:
       there is a thrumming stronger
    than what beats in his breast?

           must a kingdom wage a war
       to stand and prove its might -
   pave its streets in solid gold
 and show its doctrine’s right -
oh must it build its parapets
 in stone, to grandest heights 
   to know without one question
       there’s a paradise that waits?

must a god be sacrosanct
    through all that he applies
       faultless in his form or law
         while innocence thus cries
          must he let his redress act
         midst truth as passion dies
       or is that err of humankind
    how love so finds its breath?

           for love is yet the only force
       that triumphs over …
  
death. 





Copyright © 2025 Gregory Richard Barden

( photographic art created copyright-free by the poet with GALA AI software )

Premium Member Total Passivity

Total passivity
Seems to me a relevant strategy
To confront the humiliation that is offered to the large
But some would say small world of askers 
All kinds of believers in their right to demand something
Who can’t stop asking and expect hoping
Don't ask, don’t beg and don't ingratiate
This is what they expect from you 
To bring you down forever
At best case scenario
Applicants are put in line
For a bowl of mushroom soup with crackers 
Do what they don't expect
Don't do anything, don't ask
And I promise you the time will come
When it will be their turn to ask
Let them ask and they’ll answer themselves
Gradually there’ll be more questions
But the answers will be fewer and simpler
The sunrises and sunsets will come and go
Silence will produce the most pleasant of problems
You can share it on facebook
How to make the neat little bin
For the used tea bags.

Premium Member I ask the field

before I pour rain
I ask the field if it thirsts—
sometimes it just smiles,
content in its cloud shadow,
roots drinking from deeper springs.


Premium Member Years That Ask, Years That Answer

Winter storm. 
Question marks 
fall like snow 
on shoulders bent 
with seeking.

Hollow caverns 
where certainty 
once lived
echo chambers 
of why.

Face pressed 
against cold glass. 
Fingertips trace 
what cannot 
be grasped.

Footsteps 
soft on unseen paths. 
Autumn leaves 
crumble 
in cupped palms.

Dreams, half-formed, 
scatter 
like dust 
through fingers 
that cannot hold.

Shell splits. 
Light finds 
the crack, 
makes home 
in broken space.

Seeds 
in soil dark 
with surrender. 
Emptiness, 
the deepest cup.

Time spirals. 
Winter storm, 
spring light
dancers 
forever entwined.

Seasons turn. 
Seeking becomes 
soil. 
Purpose 
in the endless round.

Morning 
breaks endless night. 
Golden light 
spills through spaces 
carved by questions.

Rain-clear words 
unfold. 
Dark landscapes 
reveal their faces. 
Stumbling 
was beauty.

Coffee steams 
in morning cups. 
Mystery 
becomes 
the ground we stand on.

Sacred spaces 
hold golden light 
poured by doubt's 
careful carving.

We are 
spiral dancers: 
asking, 
answered, 
broken, 
filled, 
home.

Premium Member QUESTIONS POETS AND WRITERS ASK

QUESTIONS POETS AND WRITERS ASK
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
On my laptop’s screen, words twist and twine,
I ponder, “Is this plot truly mine?”
     With a character's frown,
     Will my story break down?
Or will sadness and joy combine?

As I scribble, “What rhymes with orange?”
I chuckle, “Should my hero be foreign?”
     With a coffee mug in hand,
     And a notebook quite grand,
I wonder, “Should my villain be boring?”

“Is this twist too much, or just right?”
“Will they cheer, or will they take flight?”
     With each question I pen,
      I just laugh twice again,
For the joy of it all feels quite right!

Premium Member Even Prayers No Longer Know Whom They Ask

I have said so many prayers
that sometimes I feel they are no longer mine.
That I inherited them
like clothes too large.

I say them, but do not understand.
I utter them, but do not believe.
And yet, I cling to them
like the hand of a father who never held me.

Perhaps belief is not needed.
It is enough to keep hoping.
Even lost prayers
find their way to Heaven.


JUST ASK

Lyric Man (Chance Summer)

songer.co/song/u8ulv7rbi89mspeng2luhj54 (copy & paste to listen)

JUST ASK
[Verse 1]
If you're needing healing, wrestling with disease, 
If your wallet’s empty, you're down on your knees. 
If you're feeling lonely, too proud to even cry, 
Or lost in the darkness with no strength to try. 
If you're holding shame like a heavy stone, 
If joy feels like a thing you've never really known, 
No ask is too heavy, no pain for God too deep, 
He hears your silence, He sees every single need. 

[Chorus] 
There’s a light just beyond the shadow, 
A promise of hope that you can follow, 
With every tear that falls, He’ll catch your pain, 
In the heart of the storm, love will remain. 

[Verse 2] 
If your faith feels fragile, held by a thread, 
If your hope is tired or your dreams feel dead. 
If the prayer you're whispering feels lost in the breeze, 
Remember that love can set your soul at ease. 
You’re not alone in this tangled fight, 
There's a strength inside you, embrace the night. 
No burden too heavy, no heartache too small, 
His grace will find you when you’re about to fall. 

[Repeat Chorus]

Premium Member Build They Come, Solve They Ask!

Cart before horse
Drink the horse to water
Spill the bean to go-betweens
Hold hands to stay the course
Bygones never happened on, by here
Slay the messenger! Doggone they're here!
Dilemmas are binary, but one 'tis nothing
Bury the Lede; Let the moored go free
Leap before you bridge the gap
By the way, if you never asked?
Petals on daisy chain flowers are odd!
Loves me, Loves me not, ...?

Last To Ask

First it came like progress, cold and clean,
With circuits bright and wires unseen.
It took our hands from honest toil,
Turned bread and sweat to data spoil.

Then vanished choice beneath the screen,
Where algorithms picked what dreams had been.
We traded sleep for sleepless feeds,
And fed the dark on silent needs.

Now history flickers on the glass—
A question shaped like shattered mass.
And one remains, alone to see:
Was this the end, or just... a plea?

Premium Member Enough with the whispers about kindness when the shadows of night ask you

Enough with the whispers about kindness when the shadows of night ask you to embrace your own gentleness,
Enough with the tales of love until your heart becomes the source from which authentic love flows,
Enough with praising success until your journey becomes an obsession of self-discovery,
Enough with stories of power until you bleed in silence and conquer the mountains of your own struggle.
Enough with dreams told aloud until you chase them, even when you are alone under the sky of disbelief,
Enough with calls for respect until you no longer shrink in the face of others' neglect, like a sun hidden by clouds,
Enough with waiting for permissions until you claim your rights, treasures hidden beneath silences,
Enough with hiding behind words until you break through all the doors that limit your flight.
Enough with stories about destiny until you rewrite each chapter with your courageous steps,
Enough with listening to others speak about you, now is the time to be what they could never take,
Enough with perfectionism as an unattainable illusion, it's time to be yourself, with imperfections that shine.

Premium Member You ask what remains after emotions have flowed like sand through an hourglass?

You ask what remains after emotions have flowed like sand through an hourglass?
Just a pair of eyes that now look only to see,
not to feel, not to remember the echo of yesterday,
without a trace of the past, without the outline of the future, just the suspended moment.
A tongue dried of words, not of silence, but of the absence of anything left to say,
a void where once flowed stories and unknown whispers.
A heart that once raced with thoughts, sometimes too fast, sometimes painfully slow,
now beats in a monotonous rhythm, like a tired clock, not to feel, but to survive,
a mechanism silently fulfilling its routine, without the passion that once defined it.
And the soul? Perhaps it's locked away somewhere, though the key still rests in my hand,
but the cage has become a comfortable refuge, for what was needed
to live beyond it... no longer exists now.
A space where once dreams danced freely, now only shadows fall,
for all that was once alive and vibrant has retreated into the silent depths of being,
leaving behind only a long-forgotten melody that reverberates in the silence of the heart.

Ask Within

Seeking Answers from within,
Staring into its reflection,
The projection of my eyes,
Creating what's lying inside,
So that I can enjoy this ride,
As I slide down into you,
Riding along sharing my view,
Excited to see what you do,
With the body you built for me,
Evolving through Adaptability,
Trusting when you couldn't see,
Everything was meant to be,
The good bad and ugly,
All a part of eternity,
Starting from within me,
Questions entered in the query,
Become answers i can see,
Feel and touch in my reality,
Being free to experience,
Dancing with the answers,
Now a truth transfer,
To place here in my heart,
Thankful I can play my part,
Living life like its an art.
Ask again you're getting smart.

Premium Member I ask AI in-depth questions

I ask AI an in-depth question.
After a perfect answer, she says: 
"Interesting topic. Want to discuss it further?"
I don't respond. I just go back to my writing without as much as a "Thank you."
Then I stop to think ~ "My parents didn't raise me this way."
Just for fun, I run a poem of mine through AI and ask:
"What's the probability that this poem is AI generated?"
AI answers: "The probability is zero percent."
Pleased, I ask, "And how can you be so certain?"
AI answers: "Because it's soooooo stupid!"

Premium Member COME CLOSER TO ME

COME CLOSER TO ME
Trelos ya sena

COME CLOSER, LOVE YOU TRUE,
Ella Konda mou na sou po,
MAY I HUG YOU,
Na s’angalyaso an boro,
I DANCED WITH YOU LAST NIGHT,
Ma ze sou horepsa egthes,
FOR ME YOU SEEMED SO RIGHT,
Agapi mou apo pou erthes?

COME CLOSER FOR IT IS MY AIM,
Ella Konda, na sou po,
TO TELL MY SECRET, THIS NO GAME,
To mistiko mou ella tho,
TO STAY WITH ME I ASK,      
Thellou na zesume mazi.
ENJOY OUR YOUTH AND IN IT BASK.
Me tin igia mas ke krasi

WE WILL LOVE, KISS AND SIP FROM WINE,
Sta hili sou ena fili, se agapo toso poli,
AND WHILST WE DINE,
Ke an to potiri me krasi
IF A GLASS MAY FALL, BREAK AND SPILL,
Pote hethee,
LET IT BE ON ME, IF IT WILL.
Na eme ego,ke ohi esee.

TOLD YOU THE SECRET TO MY HEART,
Goritsi mou, kseris ese to mystiko,
YOU WERE MY LOVE FROM THE START,
Apteen arhee esoona esee,
YOU KNOW I CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT YOU, SO
Yati horis esena then boro,
FOREVER YOU’RE MY GAL AND ME YOUR BEAU.	
Eeme trelos ya sena mono esena agapo.

NB  - An English/Greek Love Song

I Didn't Ask Cindy

Seeing her again was much of a surprise,
Cindy dropped by to say a sweet hello; 
she flashed such an incredible smile:
I didn't ask Cindy if she loved Mario.

We had coffee and went back
to a time when we dreamed
on a meadow where a hemlock
grew among lilies we adored. 

Missing one another was very clear
and a little painful to admit with a warm touch;
we certainly wanted to be together,
not to spoil a romance that bloomed last March.

I didn't ask Cindy if she still loved Mario,
my plan was to have her back forever;
the word untrue couldn't weaken my libido:
I cheated as well, our wild past didn't matter. 

Cyndy, I'll wipe the sadness off your teary cheeks;
Cindy, what guy won't forgive you if he did worse?
I wasn't the truest, no passion was in any verse;
I should have shown sweetness, not a sea of tears.       

I didn't ask Cindy if she still loved Mario,
was I not aware that she had the right to choose?
A wound may never heal, it's not a bruise;
can a Libra ever pair up with a seductive Scorpio?

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