COME CLOSER TO ME

COME CLOSER TO ME
Trelos ya sena

COME CLOSER, LOVE YOU TRUE,
Ella Konda mou na sou po,
MAY I HUG YOU,
Na s’angalyaso an boro,
I DANCED WITH YOU LAST NIGHT,
Ma ze sou horepsa egthes,
FOR ME YOU SEEMED SO RIGHT,
Agapi mou apo pou erthes?

COME CLOSER FOR IT IS MY AIM,
Ella Konda, na sou po,
TO TELL MY SECRET, THIS NO GAME,
To mistiko mou ella tho,
TO STAY WITH ME I ASK,      
Thellou na zesume mazi.
ENJOY OUR YOUTH AND IN IT BASK.
Me tin igia mas ke krasi

WE WILL LOVE, KISS AND SIP FROM WINE,
Sta hili sou ena fili, se agapo toso poli,
AND WHILST WE DINE,
Ke an to potiri me krasi
IF A GLASS MAY FALL, BREAK AND SPILL,
Pote hethee,
LET IT BE ON ME, IF IT WILL.
Na eme ego,ke ohi esee.

TOLD YOU THE SECRET TO MY HEART,
Goritsi mou, kseris ese to mystiko,
YOU WERE MY LOVE FROM THE START,
Apteen arhee esoona esee,
YOU KNOW I CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT YOU, SO
Yati horis esena then boro,
FOREVER YOU’RE MY GAL AND ME YOUR BEAU.	
Eeme trelos ya sena mono esena agapo.

NB  - An English/Greek Love Song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 5/20/2025 2:40:00 AM
You have the making of a song lyric writer, Jenny; this is lovely, romantic and very enjoyable. I see that a video is awaiting my attention, so off I go to watch the end product! Warm regards // paul
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Date: 4/26/2025 12:58:00 PM
Hi All, To follow shortly will be a video composed by Maria and Ron Williams. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/1/2025 6:38:00 AM
Its coming along well Jennifer, I think you are going to love it. Very romantic song and video....Hugs
Date: 4/19/2025 1:26:00 PM
What a stunning love song, dear friend. I am so happy I found it. I love the way you incorporated the Greek and English. I would love to hear you recite this poem. Somehow it wouldn’t feel like Easter without sending you blessings for Easter joy - by the pool! Blessings, dear friend.
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Date: 4/19/2025 3:20:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Nice romantic love poem. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 4/18/2025 9:58:00 AM
- A beautiful love song, dear Jenny :) - I agree... it should be sung with a soft melody :) - Hope everything is well with you :) - hugs
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Date: 4/14/2025 12:59:00 PM
Wonderful love poem. It has nice rhythm and flow. Very powerful and inspirational. Really loved the Greek. Thanks for posting.
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Date: 4/4/2025 4:18:00 PM
First, I'm so glad you posted, thought I'd lost you after just finding you. Life business/pleasure must have just kept you away for a bit. I need to write you a message sometime soon. I really enjoyed this, tried reading in Greek which I probably butchered. Are you fluent? Right now, I can't recall any memory of the Greek accent. What means NB? Love ... CayCay
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Date: 4/3/2025 7:03:00 AM
Hi Jennifer I'm on my way lol,loved reading your wonderful poem dear friend God bless. xx
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Date: 4/3/2025 5:59:00 AM
Dear Jennifer,a beautiful lyrical poem. Is it the one you told me about? I'm not sure if my generator will get the pronunciation right but I could try...Hugs
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 4/3/2025 10:59:00 AM
Hi Maria, thank you for your kind reply . Please see soupmail
Date: 4/2/2025 10:08:00 AM
You should put this to music Jennifer, Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Date: 4/2/2025 8:23:00 AM
A beautiful love song Jennifer, a fine start to a life of romancing and happy dancing… Beryl
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