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Bloggers PhotoI was born and lived in Williamson Iowa.I found poetry at the young age of 8 or 9. It helped me deal with most of lifes many turns and curves! I never had family or so I had thought. I moved to Ottumwa Iowa in 1982. From there I moved to Dallas Texas,then to Burlington Iowa, then to Santa Maria California before moving back to Iowa. I never wanted to be old and grey talking about all the things I wish I had done,I just did them. From 1982 until today I have used my poetry to help me make sense of things. Mainly because no one was listening to me. I had a hard life but I'm not complaining, because it helped me find my passion for poetry.

Who Is The Winner Of This Rap Battle?

Blog Posted:4/10/2018 8:59:00 AM
Ok people seems me and Nick Trim have a little all in fun Rap Battle between the two of us and we need your help to judge it for us! We each posted on our page the rap we challenged the other with! His is "Brenda Chiri Challenged Me, This Is Her Eulogy" and mine to him is called "Trim Shady Come Out And Playyyy" ok guys we need you all to decide who won this battle otherwise we will both try to claim the win!;) So help us out all here is your chance to judge me for one and to help us decide between us two who slammed who and takes the crown this time!! Thanks all and just be honest is all I ask nothing more !
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Date: 4/11/2018 4:46:00 AM
Brenda, after reading both, the clear winner is you!.....
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/12/2018 4:11:00 PM
Thank you joseph you are too kind!;)
Date: 4/10/2018 9:16:00 PM
I choose Norman! Congrats
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Date: 4/10/2018 9:28:00 AM
What a fun challenge, Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/12/2018 4:11:00 PM
It was Line really it was and helps take ones mind off other thinhs too lol thanks!

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Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
7/18/2018 No Give And Take Sonnetabuse,child abuse,girl,gi
7/17/2018 Contemplating Love Coupletdevotion,dream,inspiratio
7/16/2018 Time Begins Again Coupletcute love,emotions,encour
7/15/2018 Cold Heart Transformed Rhymecool,dream,hurt,love hurt
7/11/2018 Two Loving Pens Coupletbeautiful,blessing,love,m
7/10/2018 Words Evolve To Express Rhymeemotions,growth,inspirati
7/8/2018 Soft Moist Lips Coupletfeelings,heaven,love,lust
7/6/2018 Could You Coupletemotions,i love you,inspi
7/6/2018 Effect Not The Cause Sonnetappreciation,confidence,h
7/4/2018 Told You She Wasnt Typical Rhymebetrayal,for him,funny,ga
7/3/2018 With Eyes Wide Open Sonnetanger,betrayal,friendship
7/2/2018 War Goddess Rhymeblue,fear,flying,god,myth
7/2/2018 Yet It Did Survive Sonnetemotions,growth,hope,scar
6/26/2018 A Mirrored Symmetry Rhymeabuse,conflict,corruption
6/23/2018 A Quest For Two Sonnetconfidence,courage,dream,
6/18/2018 Another Piece Of Me Sonnetbetrayal,friend,games,lif
6/17/2018 Expectations Sonnetconfidence,conflict,life,
6/15/2018 You Cant Handle This Slam Rhymerap,rude,
6/13/2018 A Pure Kind Of Love A Collaboration With John Flemming Sonnetromantic,soulmate,true lo
6/12/2018 I Cant Say Goodbye Rhymebaby,death,mother,pain,re
6/9/2018 Wishful Thinking Coupletappreciation,beauty,chara
6/8/2018 Tears Turn To Smiles Sonnetbeautiful,cry,emotions,ho
6/4/2018 The Perfect Embrace Sonnetblessing,cry,emotions,end
6/3/2018 Your Emotional Slave Sonnetabsence,allusion,courage,
5/26/2018 You Are The One Sonnetbeautiful,crush,friendshi
5/23/2018 Stole My Breath Free versefeelings,freedom,life,
5/21/2018 Stolen Friendship Rhymebetrayal,emotions,forgive
5/15/2018 Embrace Your Happiness Free versemeaningful,perspective,se
5/13/2018 True Deep Selfless Love Free versehappiness,heaven,love,rom
5/13/2018 Shades Of Possibilities Free verseconfidence,destiny,encour
5/12/2018 Trusted Soul Coupletbeautiful,friendship,insp
4/30/2018 Animal Essence Free verseanimal,devotion,fear,spir
4/26/2018 Hurricane Of Grief Threatens Free versebeach,grief,love,pain,sad
4/26/2018 These Thoughts Of You Free versedevotion,feelings,giving,
4/23/2018 Realize My Spark Coupletcourage,dark,life,self,wi
4/22/2018 Save Your False Praise Rhymecharacter,corruption,game
4/22/2018 Guarenteed I Will Please Rhymedesire,fantasy,lust,memor
4/20/2018 Taking My Happiness Sonnetdark,depression,fate,hear
4/20/2018 In Your Dreams Rhymedesire,dream,fantasy,long
4/20/2018 Joseph My First Born Rhymeboyfriend,funny,mother,mo
4/11/2018 Once Held Sweet Emotion Coupletbetrayal,confusion,emotio
4/10/2018 Trim Shady Come Out And Playyyy Rhymecomputer,dedication,engla
4/7/2018 These Feelings I Have Coupletdesire,for him,happiness,
4/1/2018 You Seek Romance A Collaboration with Sean Solomon Romanticismdesire,devotion,heart,
3/28/2018 The Silent Contest Shatters A Collaboration With James Swartz Free versegames,love,
3/27/2018 Night Eyes Dreaming Romanticismbeautiful,love,night,star
3/25/2018 Youth Suicide Coupletchildren,family,fear,love
3/25/2018 Your Healing Arms Sonnetaddiction,caregiving,devo
3/16/2018 Dreams of Dreaming of You Romanticismdream,feelings,love,lust,
3/16/2018 A Sip Of Pure Pleasure collaboration with James Swartz Romanticismlove,lust,romance,
3/12/2018 Life To The Fullest Collaboration With Sean Solomon Free versebeautiful,deep,destiny,de
3/10/2018 Hit 'Em Up Collaboration with Nick Trim Rhymefear,rap,
3/8/2018 The Collective We Rhymeangel,appreciation,beauti
3/7/2018 Release The Real Me Free versebeauty,destiny,flying,goo
3/5/2018 Beauty in Loves Pain Free versebeauty,heartbreak,love,pa
2/28/2018 Abundance of Pure Pleasure Free versedesire,magic,passion,sens
2/26/2018 Half of Being A Loving Whole Free versebreak up,desire,destiny,l
2/24/2018 DMI Instant Response Rhymefor him,rap,woman,
2/20/2018 My Soul Knows Yours Free versebeauty,hope,memory,romanc
2/18/2018 Shattered Can't Be Made Whole A Collaboration With Sean Solomon Free versebreak up,confusion,grief,
2/17/2018 Upward Journey Of Lessons Rhymecare,change,goodbye,grand
2/15/2018 The Smile A Collaboration with Richard Lamoureux Rhymechange,courage,cry,moving
2/12/2018 And He Did It Again part two Romanticismbest friend,care,friendsh
2/11/2018 The Things That You Did Coupletappreciation,friendship l
2/11/2018 When I Dwelt Deep Within Your Soft Shimmering Lights A Collaboration with Robert J Lindley Romanticismendurance,forgiveness,hea
2/10/2018 Silk And Lace Free versedesire,dream,love,lust,pa
2/7/2018 Phoenix Rising Sonnetbird,fire,flying,mytholog
2/7/2018 Double Dare Rhymecare,faith,happy,light,so
2/7/2018 The Raven's Last Plea Sonnetbest friend,faith,heartbr
2/5/2018 A Lie Is Still A Lie Free versebetrayal,corruption,frien
2/4/2018 At 13 Only Feeling Shame Rhyme7th grade,betrayal,child,
2/3/2018 Destiny's Pain A collaboration with Joseph May Rhymeconflict,dream,fear,memor
2/3/2018 Watched The Blood Red Moon Rhymebody,computer,desire,heav
2/3/2018 A Tempered Glass Plate Sonnetbest friend,confusion,fri
2/2/2018 Essence Of Beauty Free versebeauty,character,heaven,i
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1/26/2018 Genie Of Desire Rhymebody,desire,kiss,lust,sen
1/26/2018 Is It True Haikufriendship,
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1/19/2018 No New World Of Me Rhymecharacter,emotions,feelin
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Picture Rhymelonging,love,
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A Look Deeper Into Life Coupletappreciation,art,fate,gro
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Towers And Bridges Rhymelonging,
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Here In This Place Today Rhymebetrayal,myth,
I Saw You Again Yesterday Rhymeromance,
The Turning Rhymecelebration,
Another Callous God Rhymelust,
When Caught In The Wreck Of Her Gaze Rhymeconflict,
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Her Grace Free versebeautiful,woman,
Odyssey Of A Soul Free versejourney,spiritual,
Providence On Behalf Of Love Rhymedesire,destiny,passion,tr
Time and Its Sad Afterglows Haikuage,appreciation,art,asso
Just An Old Poet, Holding On Until I Die Sonnetart,creation,happiness,po
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Guess Who's Back, Offence And Pain Aint Two Of The Same Rhymeslam,words,
To Stupid To Care Rhymenonsense,
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Monkey Rhymeanimal,
Believe Rhymecharacter,confidence,cour
Moving On Rhymegoodbye,
Bath City Rhymeappreciation,
FIFA Forever Corrupt Rhymefootball,
Depression Dreams Rhymeanxiety,depression,dream,
Poems That Quote The Bible Are Not Poems But A Preach Rhymebible,
His Star-Dusted Desire Free versebeauty,desire,romantic lo
Revelation Rhymeconfidence,endurance,insp
True Colours Rhymeappreciation,friendship,p
Freedom Of Speech Rhymefreedom,perspective,right
Bath City And Proud Rhymeappreciation,celebration,
Humble Thunder Rhymeconfidence,crazy,hip hop,
The Artistry Of Your Loom Free verseinspirational love,love,s
I AM ENGLAND Rhymeengland,patriotic,pride,
The Final Frontier Free verseanalogy,
Never Surrender Rhymeendurance,inspirational,m
Ageless Seeds Of Simple Joys Rhymeage,appreciation,happines
It's Two Days After Thursday Rhymehip hop,me,rap,vanity,
Bumble Bee Rhymesummer,
Big Ego Rhymehip hop,life,perspective,
Self Doubt Rhymeanxiety,desire,hope,hurt,
Lost Part 1 Rhymeanxiety,confusion,depress
Lost Part 2 Rhymeanxiety,depression,lost,m
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