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Bloggers PhotoI was born and lived in Williamson Iowa.I found poetry at the young age of 8 or 9. It helped me deal with most of lifes many turns and curves! I never had family or so I had thought. I moved to Ottumwa Iowa in 1982. From there I moved to Dallas Texas,then to Burlington Iowa, then to Santa Maria California before moving back to Iowa. I never wanted to be old and grey talking about all the things I wish I had done,I just did them. From 1982 until today I have used my poetry to help me make sense of things. Mainly because no one was listening to me. I had a hard life but I'm not complaining, because it helped me find my passion for poetry.

Who Is The Winner Of This Rap Battle?

Blog Posted:4/10/2018 8:59:00 AM
Ok people seems me and Nick Trim have a little all in fun Rap Battle between the two of us and we need your help to judge it for us! We each posted on our page the rap we challenged the other with! His is "Brenda Chiri Challenged Me, This Is Her Eulogy" and mine to him is called "Trim Shady Come Out And Playyyy" ok guys we need you all to decide who won this battle otherwise we will both try to claim the win!;) So help us out all here is your chance to judge me for one and to help us decide between us two who slammed who and takes the crown this time!! Thanks all and just be honest is all I ask nothing more !
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Date: 4/13/2018 11:29:00 AM
In all-time best rude poems i'm at number 6, Blooby is at 24 and Brenda is at 25, so......... I WON :)
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Date: 4/12/2018 11:38:00 AM
Blooby made us both look amateur I think, his poem is straight up comedy
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/12/2018 4:21:00 PM
Ah but Nick he also had youfeat on it with him but lmao ifya all want to take it lol ya still cant take it till someone other thanus decide us there are three other people who need to sumit their raps as i challenged the "5" top winners to the battle not just you two! Ahhh kinda puts a little spin on it now huh? Lol! See this was bwtween me and you but if he wants in then we have to add the 3 people who i also challenged ! Hummmm lets seeif they take my challenge and add their rhymes to ours zooo it isnt over till the fat lady sings! Lol!
Date: 4/11/2018 12:14:00 PM
I won, i was funnier and had better rhymes than both of you, please check out Brenda Chiri Challenged Me Too ft Nick Trim and then decide
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/12/2018 4:14:00 PM
All depends upon who you speak to Bobby! All depends! Lmao! Some say you lost i won hands down if you consider yours has you fest. Nick on it soooooo...lmao! You let a girl beat you lol!;) all in fun!
Date: 4/11/2018 4:46:00 AM
Brenda, after reading both, the clear winner is you!.....
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/12/2018 4:11:00 PM
Thank you joseph you are too kind!;)
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Bobby Blooby
Date: 4/11/2018 12:15:00 PM
Please check out Brenda Chiri Challenged Me Too ft Nick Trim, and then decide, she started a war on two fronts
Date: 4/10/2018 9:16:00 PM
I choose Norman! Congrats
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Bobby Blooby
Date: 4/11/2018 12:16:00 PM
Please check out Brenda Chiri Challenged Me Too ft Nick Trim, and then decide, she started a war on two fronts
Date: 4/10/2018 9:28:00 AM
What a fun challenge, Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/12/2018 4:11:00 PM
It was Line really it was and helps take ones mind off other thinhs too lol thanks!

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