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I was born and lived in Williamson Iowa.I found poetry at the young age of 8 or 9. It helped me deal with most of lifes many turns and curves! I never had family or so I had thought.! I moved to Dallas Texas,then to Burlington Iowa, then to Santa Maria California before moving back to Iowa.! I have used my poetry to help me make sense of things. Mainly because no one was listening to me. I had a hard life but I'm not complaining, because it helped me find my passion for poetry.!

Who Is The Winner Of This Rap Battle?

Blog Posted:4/10/2018 8:59:00 AM
Ok people seems me and Nick Trim have a little all in fun Rap Battle between the two of us and we need your help to judge it for us! We each posted on our page the rap we challenged the other with! His is "Brenda Chiri Challenged Me, This Is Her Eulogy" and mine to him is called "Trim Shady Come Out And Playyyy" ok guys we need you all to decide who won this battle otherwise we will both try to claim the win!;) So help us out all here is your chance to judge me for one and to help us decide between us two who slammed who and takes the crown this time!! Thanks all and just be honest is all I ask nothing more !
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Date: 4/11/2018 4:46:00 AM
Brenda, after reading both, the clear winner is you!.....
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/12/2018 4:11:00 PM
Thank you joseph you are too kind!;)
Date: 4/10/2018 9:28:00 AM
What a fun challenge, Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 4/12/2018 4:11:00 PM
It was Line really it was and helps take ones mind off other thinhs too lol thanks!

My Past Blog Posts

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My Recent Poems

Date PostedPoemTitleFormCategories
10/22/2018 Lullaby Dreams Lyricbaby,beautiful,Lullaby,mo
10/22/2018 My Prince Charming Free verseconfidence,friendship,hea
10/22/2018 Never Ending Coupletcourage,encouraging,life,
10/21/2018 Finding Myself Proseself,
10/19/2018 Cold Heart Transformed repost and rewritten Rhymeheart,love,
10/18/2018 Is My Time Up Free versechild abuse,creation,deat
10/18/2018 Naked Free verselonging,love,
10/17/2018 Caring Free versecare,life,
10/17/2018 A Spiritual Awaking Rhymebeauty,spiritual,
10/17/2018 You're The Light Inside Free versebest friend,life,
10/16/2018 Promise Fulfilled Free versebeautiful,love,lust,toget
10/15/2018 The Promise of More Free versebeauty,god,green,love,
10/14/2018 The Bravest Thing Free versedeath,life,
10/12/2018 Reality Free verselife,
10/11/2018 Soulmate Free versebeauty,longing,love,soulm
10/11/2018 Let Me Love You Free verselonging,love,
10/10/2018 Broken Mirror Free versebeauty,betrayal,conflict,
10/10/2018 Dawn Free versehope,life,
10/9/2018 Longing Free verselove,
10/8/2018 This Unique Thing Rhymebest friend,crazy,desire,
10/5/2018 Breathless Magic Rhymeemotions,encouraging,long
10/4/2018 Gentle Caress Rhymeheaven,
10/4/2018 Empty Arms Broken Heart Free versedream,emotions,heart,hear
10/3/2018 Your Love Is Like Fire Rhymedeep,desire,fire,love,lus
10/2/2018 The Second Two Are Your Name Rhymeblessing,crush,friendship
10/2/2018 With My Broken Wings Versefear,flying,heart,raven,s
9/30/2018 Mending Hearts Coupletcourage,heartbroken,love,
9/29/2018 Moons Distress Free versebeauty,confidence,courage
9/28/2018 Obsession Coupletabuse,confusion,grief,jud
9/26/2018 What Do You See Rhymeconfusion,courage,judgeme
9/25/2018 Unbreakable Rhymebeauty,blessing,heart,hop
9/24/2018 Reason For Your Poetic Words Rhymedream,poetry,romantic lov
9/24/2018 No More Butterflies Coupletbetrayal,butterfly,charac
9/23/2018 Just You I do not know?care,friendship,friendshi
9/22/2018 Heaven's Lullaby 2 Rhymebaby,dream,heaven,love,pa
9/17/2018 Heaven's Lullaby Rhymebeauty,encouraging,feelin
9/16/2018 Dream Coupletdream,fantasy,friend,love
9/13/2018 A Tear Drop On A Rose Rhymebooks,cry,heartbreak,reme
9/10/2018 On A Napkin Was My Poem Romanticismcrush,cute love,encouragi
9/9/2018 Woman Survivor Free verseheart,power,strength,trut
9/8/2018 Love In The Rain Free verseemotions,heart,love,parad
9/4/2018 Diamond Tear Drops Free versecry,emotions,image,poetry
9/2/2018 Essential Essence I do not know?dance,heart,life,lost,lov
8/31/2018 Our Bliss At Its Purest We Loved Each Others Naked Sight Romanticismbeautiful,blessing,devoti
8/30/2018 Regain What Is Lost Free verseconfidence,courage,inspir
8/29/2018 Clouds Eclipse The Moon Free versecourage,endurance,moon,se
8/24/2018 Our Souls' Would Weep Free versedeep,devotion,longing,lov
8/20/2018 Seductive Saltiness Beckons Me Free versechange,courage,longing,lo
8/17/2018 A Ghost's Embrace Rhymechildhood,dad,daughter,fa
8/12/2018 Transcending All Free versebeautiful,heaven,love,mag
8/9/2018 Save That Line Light Versefunny,men,silly,
8/7/2018 Spring Showed Me Versebetrayal,farewell,heart,l
8/6/2018 Words Hold No Truth Sonnetlost love,truth,words,
8/4/2018 From Despair To A Promising Breeze Free verseemotions,hope,
8/1/2018 Your Body My Temple Collaboration with Nicholas Wallbridge Coupletdesire,heaven,love,lust,m
8/1/2018 Deceit Thrives Sonnetallusion,evil,innocence,
8/1/2018 Breathless Passion Versebeautiful,emotions,lust,p
7/31/2018 Educated Fool Sonneteducation,emotions,life,s
7/28/2018 In Way Too Deep Sonnetconfusion,deep,emotions,h
7/25/2018 Ancient Goddess And Mortal Man II Romanticismbeauty,fantasy,god,lust,m
7/22/2018 Ancient God and Modern Woman I Light Versebeautiful,fun,god,mountai
7/18/2018 No Give And Take Sonnetabuse,child abuse,girl,gi
7/17/2018 Contemplating Love Coupletdevotion,dream,inspiratio
7/16/2018 Time Begins Again Coupletcute love,emotions,encour
7/15/2018 Cold Heart Transformed Rhymecool,dream,hurt,love hurt
7/11/2018 Two Loving Pens Coupletbeautiful,blessing,love,m
7/10/2018 Words Evolve To Express Rhymeemotions,growth,inspirati
7/8/2018 Soft Moist Lips Coupletfeelings,heaven,love,lust
7/6/2018 Could You Coupletemotions,i love you,inspi
7/6/2018 Effect Not The Cause Sonnetappreciation,confidence,h
7/4/2018 Told You She Wasnt Typical Rhymebetrayal,for him,funny,ga
7/3/2018 With Eyes Wide Open Sonnetanger,betrayal,friendship
7/2/2018 War Goddess Rhymeblue,fear,flying,god,myth
7/2/2018 Yet It Did Survive Sonnetemotions,growth,hope,scar
6/26/2018 A Mirrored Symmetry Rhymeabuse,conflict,corruption
6/23/2018 A Quest For Two Sonnetconfidence,courage,dream,
6/18/2018 Another Piece Of Me Sonnetbetrayal,friend,games,lif
6/17/2018 Expectations Sonnetconfidence,conflict,life,
6/15/2018 You Cant Handle This Slam Rhymerap,rude,
6/13/2018 A Pure Kind Of Love A Collaboration With John Flemming Sonnetromantic,soulmate,true lo
6/12/2018 I Cant Say Goodbye Rhymebaby,death,mother,pain,re
6/9/2018 Wishful Thinking Coupletappreciation,beauty,chara
6/8/2018 Tears Turn To Smiles Sonnetbeautiful,cry,emotions,ho
6/4/2018 The Perfect Embrace Sonnetblessing,cry,emotions,end
6/3/2018 Your Emotional Slave Sonnetabsence,allusion,courage,
5/26/2018 You Are The One Sonnetbeautiful,crush,friendshi
5/23/2018 Stole My Breath Free versefeelings,freedom,life,
5/21/2018 Stolen Friendship Rhymebetrayal,emotions,forgive
5/13/2018 True Deep Selfless Love Free versehappiness,heaven,love,rom
5/13/2018 Shades Of Possibilities Free verseconfidence,destiny,encour
5/12/2018 Trusted Soul Coupletbeautiful,friendship,insp
4/30/2018 Animal Essence Free verseanimal,devotion,fear,spir
4/26/2018 Hurricane Of Grief Threatens Free versebeach,grief,love,pain,sad
4/26/2018 These Thoughts Of You Free versedevotion,feelings,giving,
4/23/2018 Realize My Spark Coupletcourage,dark,life,self,wi
4/22/2018 Save Your False Praise Rhymecharacter,corruption,game
4/22/2018 Guarenteed I Will Please Rhymedesire,fantasy,lust,memor
4/20/2018 Taking My Happiness Sonnetdark,depression,fate,hear
4/20/2018 In Your Dreams Rhymedesire,dream,fantasy,long
4/20/2018 Joseph My First Born Rhymeboyfriend,funny,mother,mo

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One Speaks Aloud Narrativeabuse,anger,betrayal,chil
So Elegant Romanticismbeauty,
Service With A Smile Free versefun,
legs of women Free verseabsence,appreciation,endu
The suicide hut Free verseintrospection,
The Man in the Wheelchair Quatrainallusion,art,brother,dedi
What I See Rhymelove,
Crazy Kinda Lovin A Collaboration Coupletbody,crazy,love,lust,
Lust Rhymelust,
My vice in rhyme Rhymeintrospection,
City Lights In The Rain A Collaboration Rhymelonging,
Clear Free verseintrospection,
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Where We Are Free verselove,
Speak To Me Free verselove,
Turned Off Free versecrazy,cry,imagery,introsp
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I Belong To You Rhymelove,
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Love Matters Rhymei love you,
Night Eyes Dreaming - Collaboration with Brenda Chiri Romanticismallusion,imagery,romantic
Poets of a New Dawn Prose Poetrypoets,truth,visionary,wis
Unmasked Narrativedark,death,judgement,wisd
Picture Rhymelonging,love,
Just Another Pretty Face Free verseallusion,beauty,love,trut
A Look Deeper Into Life Coupletappreciation,art,fate,gro
on some foreign island Free verseintrospection,
A Quiet Fury Coupletnature,
Towers And Bridges Rhymelonging,
Again Lyricbreak up,emotions,heartbr
The Bastard The Rebel The Poet Free verselife,
The gallant traveler Free verselost love,
Plagiarized - Nothing New Free verseconflict,
Tend Thy Orchard, Its Bad Limbs Prune Rhymeart,blessing,future,happi
Into Your Beauty Free verselove,
Respond with Abandon Free verselove,romantic,
August rains Rhymeaugust,nature,poetry,rain
In eternal sleep i will find thee, Julia Rhymelost love,love,
A Musing Rhymedestiny,relationship,
The Fate Of Whole Nations Rhymefor her,myth,
Here In This Place Today Rhymebetrayal,myth,
I Saw You Again Yesterday Rhymeromance,
When Caught In The Wreck Of Her Gaze Rhymeconflict,
Another Callous God Rhymelust,
The Turning Rhymecelebration,
Odyssey Of A Soul Free versejourney,spiritual,
Providence On Behalf Of Love Rhymedesire,destiny,passion,tr
Her Grace Free versebeautiful,woman,
Beckoning her Epicdestiny,missing,true love
If I call you beautiful Free versebeauty,love,,cute,
A Poem on a Napkin Epiclove,poetry,
My flower, my precious one Free versegood morning,
The Age Of Summer Love Sonnetromantic love,sensual,sum
The Age of Summer Love Was Kismet Kissed - A Tribute Sonnetinspiration,love,passion,
Time and Its Sad Afterglows Haikuage,appreciation,art,asso
Your Love Redeemed My Faith In Hope Rhymeemotions,hope,romantic lo
Guess Who's Back, Offence And Pain Aint Two Of The Same Rhymeslam,words,
To Stupid To Care Rhymenonsense,
Forever Remember, Lest We Forget Rhymeremembrance day,
Monkey Rhymeanimal,
Believe Rhymecharacter,confidence,cour
Moving On Rhymegoodbye,
Bath City Rhymeappreciation,
FIFA Forever Corrupt Rhymefootball,soccer,
Depression Dreams Rhymeanxiety,depression,dream,
Poems That Quote The Bible Are Not Poems But A Preach Rhymebible,
His Star-Dusted Desire Free versebeauty,desire,romantic lo
Revelation Rhymeconfidence,endurance,hip
True Colours Rhymeappreciation,friendship,p
Freedom Of Speech Rhymefreedom,perspective,right
Bath City And Proud Rhymeappreciation,celebration,
Humble Thunder Rhymeconfidence,crazy,hip hop,
The Artistry Of Your Loom Free verseinspirational love,love,s
I AM ENGLAND Rhymeengland,patriotic,pride,s
The Final Frontier Free verseanalogy,
Never Surrender Rhymeanxiety,character,confide
Ageless Seeds Of Simple Joys Rhymeage,appreciation,happines
It's Two Days After Thursday Rhymehip hop,me,rap,smart,stre
Bumble Bee Rhymesummer,
Big Ego Rhymehip hop,life,perspective,
Self Doubt Rhymeanxiety,desire,hope,hurt,
Lost Part 1 Rhymeanxiety,confusion,depress
Lost Part 2 Rhymeanxiety,depression,lost,m
We Are Poetry I do not know?poetry,
Not Fair Rhymedepression,life,
Football Manager Rhymecomputer,football,soccer,
Writers Block Rhymewriting,
Scream Until They Hear You Out Rhymeperspective,truth,
Not Afraid Part 1 Rhymechange,character,depressi
The View You Choose Rhymeappreciation,perspective,
In The Final End Free verseangst,dark,emotions,fate,
Not Afraid Part 2 Rhymeanxiety,character,depress
Perception Free versepoetry,write,
A Five Word Line Rhyme Rhymepoetry,
Split In The Road Rhymebest friend,destiny,frien
The Mind's Cornfield Terza Rimaallegory,death,emotions,f
This Poem Has Been Done Before Rhymepoetry,

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