Uptake Poems | Examples

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Huh

'Sweet are the uses
of adversity,
as the heart grows fonder
by diversity,'
as, hoping to raise a smile,
yet nutty as a fruitcake,
I spoke none too fast
at someone fun to poke
but slow on the uptake,
as tho' it takes quite a while,
he who laughs last,
finally gets the joke.

The Crow

The Crow

(A lone voice whispers)


No happiness for me and my best friend
Tony the pony today

For we lost our beloved muse
At 2 pm

One minute she was in full view 
Perched on our old Oak tree

Watching us with beady black eyes like a true devotee

Then just like the uptake in poetry 

In the 21st Century 
By the younger generation
 
We were old news

She must have flew away to better things, we both thought

As we walked home
Past the village post office

Thinking of our old muse
With the crow like black hair

Lost to us forever 

After getting us addicted to reading writing and listening to poetry

Underneath that old Oak tree
Now flying alone

Somewhere 
Out there

Looking down below 
For a new home 

Like it once had 
With Tony the pony

And me

(C)
Copyright John Duffy 

Foundation.

Is poetry like a bird flying around looking for somewhere new to land, after introducing others to its mysterious pleasures?

But as the newer generations get addicted to gaming platforms, and social media.

Will it eventually find landing, harder and more and more rarer?

Premium Member Blistered Anger Rondel

Grateful for my blistered anger
propelled by a tolerance break;
Awe can put an end to slander
when it’s about all you can take;

Most of the time I curb dander,
often it’s gone with a handshake;
Grateful for my blistered anger
propelled by a tolerance break;

Mashed up processes meander
leaking out into fists that shake;
Some may be slow on the uptake 
trying me was the first mistake; 
Grateful for my blistered anger.


The Mind of a Child

"A hand reaches for the unveiled and that’s the child’s mind.”
                   - Quote by Poet

The child’s mind is a camera,
It captures the day’s events down to the smallest details,
None seldom passes by,
Not even the one that escapes like a fly.

The child’s mind is a book,
In it, every event is written,
As dawn opens the door and twilight closes it,
As the clock ticks setting the stage for the events to emerge.

The child’s mind is a meadow,
It blossoms as the elements aid an uptake of the soul’s food,
It shrivels when scorched by the desert’s heat,
Awakened by the summons of the unseen.

The child’s mind is a boat,
Happy to sail but frightened by the storm,
It sees other boats a distance away,
Focused, it goes on its journey.

The child’s mind is a road,
It goes through the forest observing and understanding,
It tunnels through the night in search of light,
It ends where stars cease to shine.


October 4, 2024.

Spring Cheer

Hue
Rebirth
Petrichor
Refreshing rooms
Uptake of nutrients
Frail boughs come alive
Blooming anticipation
The beauty of nature pervades
Dawn harbingers revitalized hope 
Basking in the fragrance of purple fields


February 24, 2023.

Premium Member OCTOBER WITH EFFULGENT LIGHT

So brightly lit, my birthday cake.
Such icing-on-dessert uptake.
My Autumn years illumined flight,
October with effulgent light.

Candy corn, shaped like fangs, I eat.
Orange-yellow, Brach’s honey-sweet.
Smiles, blinking pumpkin, in the night.
October with effulgent light.

The crisp and thrash, of pretty leaves.
The grandkids’ beat; my heart receives.
Plenipotent sound of the night -
October with effulgent light.

The cold, fresh air and bonfire smoke;
The colorful lanterns and folk.
Big, bright and red - the Hunter’s moon.
October with effulgent light.


Premium Member Screen of Awareness

these events and thoughts pass all over me,
like insects on a fluorescent screen,
a glitter, a moment, flicker of time,
a lifetime to travel in social slime!

memories are made, memories erased,
on the brain slate of nerves, bemused and dazed,
writer is unseen, the chalk doesn’t screech,
my story unfolds and fate? out of reach! 

many voices come through, somewhere from dark,
no faces to see, no glimmer, no spark,
my eyes are shut but my mind is awake,
soul records my spiritual uptake!

I am but a blank white sheet on time’s book,
million pages may not get a second look,
I am imprinted with what hand writes on me,
what generations may read, I let be!

a world of illusions, world of untruths,
from our birth to old age through erring youth,
in this ignorance is silent wisdom,
seeking eternal truth, yearning freedom!

 
Unseeking Seeker sponsored 
Screen of Awareness Poetry contest
Written 24/05/23
10 syllables each line
5 stanzas with aabb rhyme sequence

Bloomed

Withered boughs are awakened from their sleep,
Rejuvenated from their prolonged rest,
There's a rapid uptake of nutrients,
There's a rebirth and an awakening,
Spring is at the helm of the renewed life,
There is a lavish display of colours,
Oh, spring your arrival has brought newness,
A door is opened to refreshing times.



May 19, 2023.
B - Forms and Words Poetry Contest, 
Sotto Poet.

Premium Member Whirling Fairies Rondine

Whirling fairies on your fingertips glide,
cajoling imagination awake;
The touch of a flower right at daybreak
electric, there’s no place magic can hide;
Everything’s vivid your mind feels tie dyed;
Lit by a current green eyes turn opaque;
Whirling fairies;
If you believe? You’ll never be confined;
Nature’s surroundings you quickly uptake;
They tend to reside outside by the lake,
 your initial vision magnified;
Whirling fairies.

Return of Spring

Springtime
Hue on display
Moment of refreshing
There's an uptake of nutrients
Trees spread out their healthy and joyful boughs
Season of rejuvenation
Harbinger of newness
Rebirth of hope 
Springtime



January 22, 2023.
Pen A Rictameter, Hopes Of Springs Return Poetry Contest,
M. L. Kiser.

Spring

Spring
Nature
Awakens
The rains descend
Renewed hope it brings
There’s an uptake
And lavish
Budding
Rain



August 17, 2022.

Premium Member Childlike Wonder

The wonder of a childlike kind helps keep the person younger and empowers him with the sensation of excitement that is essential to survive difficult circumstances. In addition to this, it infuses their surroundings with vitality, joy, and enthusiasm on a consistent basis, so serving as a powerful reminder that there is promise and trust.


a childish impress
refresh the atmosphere's vibe~
swell the bliss uptake 


Written: July 18, 2022

Premium Member Zombie

Little birdy said “a lot of coma coming soon”
When the earth chills down with a blood red moon
Silent shrieks abound as the brain dissolves 
Big mistake on the uptake man devolves
"Wrong again!" the only right I’ve ever heard
Weaned off electronics from a full blown nerd
Hope to keep my pattern going and be wrong once more 
Otherwise, we all have zombies scratching at the door

Premium Member Is Slow the Way To Go

Slow Rolling railcars are a better pick,
If high-speed travel makes you sick.

Slow On The Uptake is confusing,
Slow But Sure, safe but unamusing. 

Slow Markets make a stock broker mad,
Slow Release tablets - best to be had!

In the Slow Lane, you're just an onlooker.
Best “Slow” I know is in my Slow Cooker.

Premium Member One Poem, That's It

"One Poem (That's It)!"

These words ring in my ears as I dream of a meaning
I'm hungry to post, have another heart taste,
such, that promise of sex might not tempt me at all!
Hark! Sharp uptake of breath from freak's mind at a phrase,
oh, the wordplay's so sweet. There are twists of mind's canyons
that slime the sleepwalker from wheat fields to slopes
of more vertical content, now riddled with pause!

How she hangs on the edge of this precipice leaning
toward whispers of answers that gather, lays waste
to what my verse had going! I try hard to stall
as real protein shows glimmer, I slide through this maze
like a snail on a knife's edge, but move wants companions.
The fat is so thick now, verse mired down in hopes!
Not lazy, weird contract, my Muse funds the Laws.


Brian Johnston
30th of September in 2020

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