Surprise Poems | Examples

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Premium Member A stamp

A stamp retreating  to a corner
Travels round the world
Without boundary
No political
Colourless
Timeless
With wavy emotion of the lovers
With startling surprise of the children
With  overwhelmed joy of the parents
And now with the humbleness of me
Who is one of his owner

Premium Member Rainbow Magic Minichu

god's bit to poetize
airborne raindrops deflect sun rays, rainbow emerges
swift surprise!

heavens in trance
human spirit dispossesses
joy dance!!

moonstruck 
time infringes
luck!!!

god's bit to poetize
human spirit dispossesses
luck!!!

New Born

New Born	
By Frank Daub

Putting up the wash – Again
one wooden clothes pin gripped
tightly
in her lips. On toe-tips; blonde hair wind-whipped
dangling in her eyes.
The sun an apricot surprise
on the back of her legs.
All busy hanging clothes
and 
Watching in the yard to see the baby lulling in the doze
	Of May.
My perennial loving Guard.


Premium Member WITHOUT WARNING

aging startles in small ways~
a soft turning of the heart,
a sudden shimmer of truth
I didn’t know
I was ready for.

You may read the companion personal narrative piece at: poetrysoup.com/short_stories/surprise_13936

Premium Member And suddenly...

Torrential rain crashed upon us.
We laughed though our picnic was ruined.
Surprises make the best memories.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2026

Premium Member Chet's Enormous Surprise

Chet is in for an enormous surprise
Serves him right for fishing at sunrise
Underneath his boat called the Lucky Loo
There is an enormous alligator named Lovely Coo

Lovely Coo has been waiting for a corpulent snack
A stag would have been fine with an enormous rack
But here is this man, with a tummy so thick
He is going to flip his boat and gobble him up quick


Premium Member As a child every holiday was a surprise

When I was a child, every holiday was a surprise
teachers had us designing jack-o-lanterns and cutting out ghosts
this is how I had an inkling Halloween was afoot

It seemed like we were tracing our fingers to make turkeys the next week
Christmas was thrown at us by the music teacher.
We did not have an art teacher back in the day
our teacher was our art teacher

There was no winter program
there was a Christmas program
No one had ever heard the term politically correct

As an adult I can finally predict when the holidays are arriving
They come fast and furiously every year, like tornadoes and windstorms

Premium Member AVIAN RAINDROPS

AVIAN RAINDROPS 

Birds flew overhead,
Leaving wet droplets falling;
But they were not rain:-

Premium Member my date was a surprise

my date was a surprise, a cat fish special for sure
He looked like GQ Magazine, but smelled like manure
He was carrying grain as if it was a present for me
I feigned sickness, and stayed home to drink apple tea

IRIS

IRIS       
Little Jane ran to Mike
Joyfully jumping and hugging
Mike elated after long trip
Jane points to calm Iris
Linda, sweet Iris so listless,
Our sweet birdie not talking,
Over a week, Linda said teary eyes.
No singing, no wise crack, no mimic.
Mike held parrot with heavy heart.
Doctors after doctors node their head,
Final answer bulbar A L S 
Came as stone on head.
Linda screamed why god why ?

Premium Member No way

Ohhhh... did you really just do that?



AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Premium Member My Cunning Cat


My cat Mimi, cunning and  so wise,
Will wait quiet, then bounce by surprise
Make a rat its prey
Hold it in its sway
With it to play in triumphant guise.

Premium Member Mischief being his middle name

You'll never guess what I just did



AP: Honorable Mention 2026

Premium Member Shoebox Surprise

I found a shoebox stored away
under my young son’s bed one day.
It hadn’t been there two evenings ago.
What could it be? I needed to know,
for in its lid - small holes he had made.
Its contents I felt prompted to invade.
At two lidless eyes I felt myself gape.
A tiny lizard scrambled to escape.

Premium Member Shoebox Surprise

Oh, shoe box, what you hold makes happy feet,
though shoes are kept inside for just a while.
So, what happens then?
Are you thrown away?
Seems most times you are kept for further use,
being the right size, saving special things
to be found some day-
holding memories?

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