Notes About The Poem

And suddenly...

Torrential rain crashed upon us.
We laughed though our picnic was ruined.
Surprises make the best memories.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2026, Honorable Mention 2026
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 3:11 PM
I agree...surprises are THE BEST!
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 4:22 AM
It's never boring ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 10:55 AM
Hello Lin, You will never forget this picnic. Hugs. /darlene/
Gauthier Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 4:22 AM
lol ~ hi, Darlene
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