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Premium Member Shot In the Dark

Everything that forms in words comes from deep authority inside 
it identifies itself though unspoken feelings within limbo 
there is a line no soul should cross boundaries morally set 
The intoxicated spirit drunkenly cuts to the ice core logic 
frozen articles burning coldly hot blooded with faith 
Emotions dressed in white pure as the driven snow cleans the tracks 
truth dares to challenge the opposite opinion in reverse 
When a veil falls seeing some not having got their affairs in order 
its hard to find or hide that we do not tread on familiar grounds 
The path your on harbours destruction canvassing with hate chosen 
self appointed  bigot such rules boycott everything honest in favour of the liar 
This anger towards right surely is heading towards something sinister
condemning wrong has a twisted view out from the mirrors 
blind darkness  hidden  ugliness has no shape always lost invisible 
without a shadow or a second opinion that would hold no ground 
will the wolf cry without a moon picturing it's existence alive 
pitch black nothingness is the empty space between the ears filled with lead

Premium Member A Shot In the Dark

dreamt to relieve myself
of fearful thoughts, patriotic
plots. dressed to kill in Washington
skirt, no pants of a farmer
wielding a British brown bess
blessed with happiness before
the frightening knock at the door
exploded out of shock
towards the door...towards the door
while family holds their revolutionary breaths
the bouquet
of children unaware
of dangerous situation
a shot in the dark
a shot heard round the world
that never stops

7/16/2020

Premium Member A Shot In the Dark

the sun out there
somewhere
somehow
just asking
for a little faith



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~DARK CLOUDS~ 2020

AP: 2nd place 2020


A Shot In the Dark

once again
i've eaten
too much
soup

my bladder
from the last
twenty four hours
has given in to not

giving
again the
tracks are 
backing up

after all
in the States
why don't we have
bullet trains

Premium Member Shot In the Dark

A heart felt prayer with four chambers alights on a maiden voyage

Meets valves and percussion awaits tenderly to be tuned into harmony


Passion where had been void and stagnation and pulse been icy and flat

The mind once arrested in dangling contemplation halts its corrosion

A wandering soul solders confusion towards awakening warmth while

Destiny folds its narrow lapels onto the fabric of chimes of the time


Tim had enough of canned laughter mocking his elegiac mourning

Surpassing melancholy contempt he ventures an unknowing path


A map shadows mountains temples and valleys in starlit desire

His labyrinth mazes amazing adventure looms spindles of thread

The open book threatens no longer all gloom and fear has been bared 

Closing chapter and shimmering verse find beginnings in ends


Trenchant acrimony cast aside Tim arises from pulverized trenches

Reminds himself gently that happiness is more than a smouldering gun

02 February 2019

A Shot In the Dark { Narrative}

helplessly he stumbled 
through the door
holding his bloody chest 
Mother gazed into 
her fourteen year old eyes 
and just knew that he was up 
to his old antics of gang banging 
Yelling and cursing did nothing 
to wake this kid up 
Mother's tears flooded 
like an open gate 
she wondered 
where she went wrong 
raising him 
for he had the best 
of everything 
a home a job an education 
anything he wanted 
or needed 
was right at his fingertips 
maybe having only one parent 
in the household 
or just not enough discipline 
now she stands helplessly 
over her young sons 
lifeless body 
lying on the kitchen floor
in a pool of blood 
all that she could do now
was to pick up the phone 
and call the police 
and the morgue 



Tribute To Children


Just a Shot In the Dark

Push me please,
Make me go.
Make me follow,
Time on a clock.
Wake me up,
Let me know,
Give it a shot.

Your so much closer than anybody has ever been.

Open me please,
Let yourself in.

Shot In the Dark

Blood on the ground
The leaves will be turning red
A shot in the dark

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