A Shot In the Dark

once again
i've eaten
too much
soup

my bladder
from the last
twenty four hours
has given in to not

giving
again the
tracks are 
backing up

after all
in the States
why don't we have
bullet trains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 11:05 AM
Fibre!
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September 27, 2019 at 5:35 AM
Yep yep yep.
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