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the sun out there somewhere somehow just asking for a little faith Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~DARK CLOUDS~ 2020 AP: 2nd place 2020 Submitted on November 2, 2022 for contest 2022 POETRY MARATHON MILE 19 sponsored by MARK TONEY Originally posted on December 23, 2019

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Date: 1/1/2020 8:24:00 PM
I believe you hit the mark with this poem. pun intended. Nice...
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Date: 1/1/2020 9:31:00 PM
Thanks, Robert. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/26/2019 1:42:00 PM
That is a hot issue!! Some think faith is the problem. But I think faith is important and can definitely help in tight situations - I go to synagogue most Friday nights and just bought batteries for my electric menorah. In the words of AC Powell: Keep the faith! And keep writing verse! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 12/26/2019 9:56:00 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Matthew.
Date: 12/25/2019 3:15:00 PM
Your poem hit home. It is pouring rain here today Line, but I have faith by tonight when I go to the airport to pick up my granddaughters the rainbow have ceased. It is a little difficult driving in the rain at night for me. I wish you and your family a beautiful Christmas and new year. Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo
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Date: 12/25/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thanks, Connie. I hear Hawaiian rain doesn't last too long. It will surely be wonderful indoors!
Date: 12/25/2019 8:59:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments! Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/25/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/25/2019 8:44:00 AM
love this.... Merry Christmas Line :) hugs
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Date: 12/25/2019 9:55:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/25/2019 4:13:00 AM
Simply beautiful. Kai
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Date: 12/25/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kai. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/25/2019 3:36:00 AM
Delicately done. Beautiful brevity Line.
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Date: 12/25/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and compliment, Caren.
Date: 12/24/2019 10:11:00 PM
Merry Christmas Line Gauthier. -Richard
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Date: 12/24/2019 10:42:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. Best wishes.
Date: 12/24/2019 9:27:00 PM
I'm with Maureen (below) 1,000% and then some. Merry Xmas, Line!! :) gw
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Date: 12/24/2019 9:21:00 AM
Ooh, I like it a lot! Merry Christmas Line, hugs & warm thoughts, xomo
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Date: 12/24/2019 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maureen. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/24/2019 5:21:00 AM
I do hope the sun finds you soon, Line. Brrr...it's cold outside. Happy Holidays to you and your family. Charlie
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Date: 12/24/2019 10:27:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 12/24/2019 2:26:00 AM
Line, The sun had it right all along. A little faith is all I know. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iuHAh-2xGxw -Richard
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Date: 12/24/2019 10:27:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Richard.
Date: 12/23/2019 11:14:00 PM
The sun has got it dear Line, thank you for the poem and Merry Christmas from my heart to yours xo
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Date: 12/24/2019 10:28:00 AM
Thanks, Pixie, for your delightful visit and comment.
Date: 12/23/2019 9:10:00 PM
i like this one...it can be taken a couple ways...lovely penning Line :) hugs
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Date: 12/23/2019 10:20:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Much appreciated.

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