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Premium Member The Essential Point

(“Anagogical Moments Merit Badge”, 2011, original oil)

The essential point
Is that the Natural Great Perfection 
Of complete and perfect enlightenment is uncreated,
Not dependent on causes and condition
Thus not subject to change and degeneration.

Uncreated it simply is
Simply waiting to be discovered
Our true nature
Changeless, primordially pure, untainted
And complete.

Maybe this just doesn’t compute
Flying over your head
Like a satellite at midday, 
Or better yet, Sun on its usual course 
Across the great arc of space.

Doing what it always does
Unstoppable, indispensable
Immutable and ineffable
So easily taken for granted 
Yet so easily appreciated with every cell of Life.

(5/19/26)

Premium Member Breakfast with a Hangover

The party's over
You got in bed with the devil
And pulled the covers up over your head
It's a bed of your own making
Now you have to lie in it 
And lie you have and lie you will 
Over and over and over again
You'll toss and turn until morning comes 
And after that sleepless night 
It will finally dawn on you
It's time to wake up and smell the coffee 
To go with your breakfast of crow
Which costs more than you will ever know
And we're all paying the price

I am not a poet

I don’t like poems because they are exact summaries of everything felt at the time they are written. Memories of grief, pain, sorrow, sadness, anger, guilt, shame, joy, passion, love, jealousy, and envy wash over you, flooding your senses. You relive whatever moment led to the inspiration behind the piece, and it is both taunting and exhausting. I feel the weight of all the emotional labour I must overcome just to consume the art.

I prefer fictional writing because of its endless scale, its boundless freedom to explore any reality, any dimension. It’s fun, it’s pretend—it serves as a never-ending night sky, covering you like a blanket over your head, protecting you from anyone who might interrupt your fun. In fiction, I can transport myself to an entirely new experience, forgetting everything that might pull me away from this mental escape.


Premium Member Thirty-second Shower

  
     You’re in the army now
       Lather you up, lather you down

     Jump in the tub, give a good rub
       Bucket of H2O over your head, bub

Premium Member Simple Poetry

Simple Poetry 
Love of nature 
Through flowing rivers 
Trees planted 
Seeds watered granted 
Humble beginnings 
Sometimes clouds follow me 
In the sky, only breathtaking 
A peaceful place with no complaining 
Turn off the noise 
Small things matter most 
Clothes, a roof over your head,  
And food on the table 
Keep life simple 
No electronic devices 
Just outside nature 
The wind passes me by 
As one, you and I 
Breathe in fresh crisp air 
Live in solitude  
In the middle of nowhere 
Through green prairies 
Fragrances and beauty 
With soul searching 
A Simple Poem 
Just the two of us 
Room to grow 
Early morning rise 
Wake up to the aroma of coffee shine

What do I do today?

What a luxurious question I wonder,
Or is it ?
To take a pause leave the day unclaimed
No ticking of clock,
Over your head-

Unbothered by other’s agenda,
No login on time,
Or leaving the house on ungodly hours,
I get to choose,
To curate my day-

I wonder-
If I am found by this question,
Would I treasure it?
Or would I procrastinate my life away?
letting the time slip through
like a water through cupped hands.

Our minds so conditioned,
to dance with the tick and tok of the clock.
Suddenly, unrestrained.
Dumbfound,
Like a drunkard lost in a room full of time.

So I ask again,
what do I do today?
Do I seize, create, become?
Or simply linger in the beauty
of having the choice to wonder?


THE RIFT

Parents are not perfect and
Neither is their children
But a child/children
Believes that a parent is
Or should be, not true
This generation now finds
The simplest thing to go
No contact with their parents
If they weren’t physically and 
Mentally abused that” s different, 
But if you had a roof
Over your head and food to eat
And clothes on your back and 
They try to protect you then
You’ve been blessed
Stop allowing your lover 
Or friend to come in between
You and your parents because
Some people are jealous when
Families are close, because
They’re not use to having it
themselves

Empathy


I might not be a healer, but I do have words—
Comforting words, soothing words,
Perhaps lies,
But certainly not disguise.

If you come to me, I will put on your skin.
I don't claim I feel like you do,
But I will hold your hand and listen to you,
And never pause you until you pause.

When clouds camouflage over your head,
Certainly I will light a candle.
I will scatter clouds with my palm
And never leave you until you leave.

If your stars do not align the way you wish,
I will align myself with you
And wait for your stars to fall in place
And never stop embracing you until you stop.

Premium Member Keeping score

Nowadays people keep track of all the wrongs so they can hold it over your head

ESTRANGE CHILDREN

Parents aren’t perfect
They’re human being to
They make mistakes but
As long as you weren’t abused
In any kind of way and you had 
Food, a roof over your head and
Wasn’t forced to be a parent
To your siblings 
And some of your needs were met
You’re bless, because every child
Don’t have that luxury 
But to be judge because you
Wasn’t cuddle enough or you
Didn’t have your parents
Undivided attention or designer clothes 
Is a crock, it’s so many excuses
If you’re a 25-year-old adult 
Or older and your
Parents can’t tell you how to live
Your adult life
How can you expect them to
Take care of you and pay your bills

Premium Member A letter to a sick child

There once was a little snail,
That wondered why It didn't have a proper tail,
She asked all those that passed her by
If there might be a rather simple reason why.
None proved to be that kind,
Which put her in an awful bind,
Until one fateful sunny day
She met a hare along the way.
My friend he said, looking awfully smug,
A tail Is something others often tug,
That's why I run faster than near most,
Never resting coast to coast.
You instead are blessed indeed,
As you I know can get good sleep.
With a house over your head,
You're never far from that great bed.
So even when you dont feel well,
Isn’t it better than my hell?

Premium Member Boo

What are the things that scared you at night

Blankets pulled over your head and eyes closed tight

Is it a witch a goblin or goul or maybe a teacher from
Your new school.

Is it snakes spiders or rats or believing vampires are really bats. 

It could be witches that fly around on brooms 
And make all the shadows in the corner of the room

Could it be a loud bang from outside at night 

Or maybe a Clown that causes you fright. 

But now times have passed and maybe your bolder 

The things that scared you are gone now you are older. 
                       OR HAVE THEY......

Dance Partner Directive

Come to my gravesite
All dressed in red
A black umbrella held
over your head
that partially obscures you from view

As I am gently lowered to
my final place of rest
Take the bouquet you hold
So tightly to your chest
Tossed in as a final farewell from you

Abuzz with life the word will fly
Who is this and what does it mean
This gesture of love so blatently shown
before this to others unseen
Then solemnly turn away

And you and I who loved from afar
Cross the space of realities apart
Will once more connect in this day and time
In this expression from the heart
A beautifully executed ballet

Premium Member French Connection

Lake of beauty there in France
Invitation for romance
Of course you know what I'll now say
I want to go with you someday

We don't know French but no big deal
We'll learn together, so much appeal
There is in doing things with you
And I still hope you want me to

But if you don't I understand
And I'll still write odes by my hand
To let you know that I'm still here
Expressing love through words, my dear

And if one day that well runs dry
Just look for me up in the sky
A little plane can create art
With it I'll draw for you a heart

And loop-the-loop over your head
In yellow smoke, a feather bed
Of lilac clouds and Vera Wang
Ascends from you, those scents will hang

And blend in with my best cologne
Acqua di Gio descends down 
A fragrant zephyr fills the air
Together, forever floating there

Premium Member Hot Summer Heat

It wears on you
 hot summer heat
 still hot at nine PM
 just want to stay inside
 a hundred and three, a hundred and five
 feels like blazes
Lord Almighty how I love the ac
 too old to do without it now
 actually am drinking water
 in excessive heat it quenches that dry thirst
 do everything in the morning, early morning
 by nine AM before the sun burns hard and savage
Just want to sit in the dark and enjoy cool air
 go outside and the summer heat will melt you
 like being in a daze, sleepy, unmotivated
 day dreaming of blizzards and Canadian arctic blasts
 those cozy freezing frost biting winter winds
 how you miss them in the hot summer heat
Hot and worn out, wet from sweat
 let the shower run cold for fifteen minutes
 before you step in, so hot the water in the pipes
 way to warm, takes time to turn cold
 let the cool water run over your head soaking your hair
 onto your face and be absorb by your overheated body
And it is only nine thirty AM
 going to be another cruel long hot day in the summer.

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