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My dad taught me how to conserve water by taking a 30-second shower, like he had to do in the army in WW2. You can just imagine how thrilled my mom was with this 'great way to save a dime or two.' 

Thirty-second Shower

  
     You’re in the army now
       Lather you up, lather you down

     Jump in the tub, give a good rub
       Bucket of H2O over your head, bub
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Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 9:17 PM
What a fun poem. I was told you did a tribute to Pangie but I can't figure out which of your recent poems it might be. Could you send me a note in comment or soupmail giving me its title? I would love to read it.
Maverick Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 4:32 PM
Plenty of bubbles anyway..If all the Soap didn't wash away.'
Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 7:23 PM
A regular Champagne party. lol.
Rolland Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 4:16 PM
enjoyed the irony, thanks poet
Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Your enjoyment is my priority. Thanks, Yann.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 9:26 AM
But freedom gives us leave to keep the lovely warm water flowing. Oh, dear old dad…lol
Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 7:28 PM
Ain't no freedom in this man's army, sister. LOL!!
Lawless Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 9:22 AM
it beats running naked in the rain...well...maybe not
Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 7:32 PM
That's right. Nothing like that famous runner, 'Soapy Streaker.'
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 5:46 PM
I grew up in a small home with five boys....our showers had to be quick -- that is if we wanted a hot shower :-)
Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 7:39 PM
Ha, ha. Your dad forgot to teach you how to LOVE cold showers. Too late now, or I'd teach you. ~ Ig Lou
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