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The West Really Is the Best

In the west any woman
can invite a man to bed,
but do that stuff in Iran
and they’ll huck rocks ’till she’s dead.

In the west any Christian
can get with like folk to pray,
try doing that in China
and they might just lock you away.

In the west any person can
criticize religious figures,
do the same in the Middle East
and they kill you with great vigor.

In the west we own up to
mistake made against Indians,
to this day Turkey denies what
it did to the Armenians.

In the west our women take part
in public like and politics,
in Saudi lands the women are
shrouded up in tent fabric!

In the west we’re open to
music of every kind,
in the Muslim world music is
often evil in God’s eyes.

In the west if a man steals
he’s gotta do time in the slam,
in Arabia they would rather
publically chop of your hands??!!

In the west we long ago
fought to free those who were enslaved,
but in Libya and Sudan
you can still buy them to this day.

In the west our poor people
often suffer from being fat,
how many North Korean poor
wish they could ‘suffer’ like that?

In the west we always expect
rule-of-law to serve us well,
in Mexico half the police
are working for the drug cartels.

In the west natural rights
are recognized the greatest good,
superseding even culture,
as your freedoms always should.

But in so much of this planet
naught but tyranny persists,
with cultures that deny the fact
that your rights even exist.

Professors say we’re all the same,
aren’t they supposed to be smart?
Results alone speak for themselves,
tear their rantings all apart.

Look at the ideas that have doomed
the once rich Venezuela,
ask how many people are now
desperately swimming to Cuba?

They all come here seeking success,
of that there is little doubt,
our ideas are so appealing
we build fences to keep them out!

Despite our past imperfections,
the cold hard fast can’t be missed.
when it comes to self-improvement,
the west’s running away with it.

Our history and our results
so very clearly can attest,
the cultures, they are not the same,
and the west really is the best.
Form: Rhyme


Wonder Clouds

Wonder Clouds

Sometimes I wonder,
And then I wander, in my thoughts.
What lies above those clouds up high?
Beyond the bleached, yellow sometimes blue sky.
Some say that clouds are but a mere cloud of vapour,
But is that true?
Sometimes I wonder,
And then I wander, what is above those clouds?

Maybe an entire civilisation,
Of dragons and fairies and queens and kings,
Where there are lilies that jump around and toads that sing,
Wolves big and bad, pumpkin carriages round and stout,
Rainbows, unicorns, pearls,
And all those wonderful things, tiny tots dream about.

Sometimes I wonder and then I wander,
Maybe that is where He lies,
Superseding all,
Guiding us above,
Uplifting our falls,
Ruling over fates and destinies,
Lives and deaths,
But then does He really exist?

Sometimes I wonder and then I wander,
That’s where I will find good old peace,
A holy sane kingdom
Where there is serenity, beauty, probably freedom,
Where there is no worry, no sadness, no negativity.
Where there is no tiring search and no disheartening find,
But then isn’t peace a state of mind?

Sometimes I wonder and then I wander,
Maybe that’s where actual life is,
With trees and birds and breeze and rivers,
Where there are no dark lights and cold chills or shivers,
Where there are playing children, whispering mothers and laughing elders,
High above the rain and thunder of the world,
Where everyone is blessed with an eternal kiss,
But without an end, can a beginning persist?

Sometimes I wonder and then I wander,
What lies above those clouds?
Maybe something we have uncovered,
Or something not meant to be discovered.
But imagination lives on,
And dreams never die,
And theories never perish,
Because that’s where true creativity lies.
Whatever is above there, 
I believe it’s not very far,
From an open mind and a welcoming heart,
But I can’t help but wonder,
How fateful the birds really are,
How hateful the birds really are.

Manya Chopra
15 years old
Mumbai, Maharashtra, India.
Form: Ballad

Morning Rush Hour

The image of morning mapping from the four cardinal points at the center of 
busy pedestrians running ups and down to the bottom of their energies, 
Chasing the note they never designed to decimate 
ownership.

The smiling morning bubbling their imagination to the high magnitude of 
Success languishing behind heart seeking to control situation to the center 
of the market, number of desperate merchandises queuing to drink their 
Imagination protruding bellies where Satan jolts their hearts to refine 
thirty with disastrous desires.

The noise is enough to tantalize the talon of termites boiling at the 
center hopping to solve dove segmented wants which never will be OK to 
Occurrence of the occupation that too schlock to crumble tantamount to 
desire of the heart.
Despite the pain still depicted on his hustle still never give up searching 
the treasures that he never keeps no he pinpoints the right place, but just 
Living in dilemma of success rocked of magenta quill of shaving beard.

The center of plying to control the Flocks moment of people from all 
Angles, prices are bargain with sometimes smile with sometimes waged with 
Sadness, the sanity of controlling the market trends is far from certain.

Stalls from left to right which drank the movements of people from one 
Place to the other impossible night mad with workaholics perambulating with 
Stitches ideas like the mountains of women flashing around with eagerness 
to cook the dinners for husbands paying the prices for being too long away from home.

I blame the desires that preoccupied the daily lives of individuals 
Superseding with treasures that don't accompany neither nor accomplish your 
  Bills for the prayers you missed and messed your time behind rouged   
the Treasures that still is your colonial master.

Premium Member Unreasonable Reasons for Fighting Dragons: Off Planet, Exiled


"Unreasonable Reasons for Fighting Dragons: Off Planet, Exiled"

I could write something beautiful for you,
like outside the windows
the raindrops slide off tips of green leaves
there are tears like pearldrops falling
onto moist lips like ripe rosebuds 
hints of myrtle lemon that the tongue licks
like sticky marshmallow fingertips sweetly glued
softly placing a bookmark, between pages.
we should stop there for the night, before bedtime, 
because bedtime is where love waits impatiently 
for all manner of things, 
like daughters immersed in all their removed seasons
reflected in unreasonable reasons 
for fighting dragons in their imagined labyrinths 
I cajole you, I proffer 
that the very first love you will ever know
has prickly barbs like a bee that stings 
and sticks deep in the skin like supersedure, 
n.b. for hives, use Royal Crème, 
and the preceding Queen bees 
take an unaccustomed back seat,
sipping thoughtfully on honeyed 
words and mead 
in that tricky place, 
where their children once played
and now those daughters
are the superseding 
Royal Queens;
they are without doubt 
the strongest in this case, 
immortal paramours 
and whilst their doppleganger stance 
is terribly traumatised and competitive, 
the archives, I have learned 
as chief librarian in this place,
in grounds most territorial, 
must be handled 
with speak easy kid gloves,
insert the softest lambs’ wool here -

black sheep
all of the above



Candide Diderot. ‘24

Nightmare On An Endless Loop

Whose is that hat lying sideways on the ground?
What about the bloody shoe with nothing else around?
The ominous absence of the crowds that usually roam,
Stepping over puddles and things that once were owned.
Such disparity to hear the ringing cell phones stuck on repeat,
A worried friend? A distraught mother? 
Someone praying it’s not their brother!
The shock must be retreating 
Because quickly the fear is superseding 
Painful memories begin to emerge, 
it’s all coming back in a violent surge
distorted screams, running, running, I’m down, come back!
don’t leave me here all alone to react
I can hear the loud popping approaching from behind
My time has come, I don’t want to die, My Adrenaline is at an all-time high!
Someone pulls me up, but I can’t hear what he’s saying 
Is it safe here? we hide in fear, hoping he’s not too near!
Sirens wailing, bodies shaking, people moaning, bodies aching
Armed officers rush over, my adrenaline is dissolving
This night has changed us in no way worth describing.
Help me brain, forget this day, make me numb to this pain
Yellow tape all around, empty slugs all over the ground
Bodies draped in fresh white linen, now crimson red-soaked sheets
Underneath a thick like syrup, seeping toward my feet.
What seems to be over is just the beginning of a horrid dream
A hellish nightmare on an endless loop of suffering
So many questions that can't be found...
Whose is that hat lying sideways on the ground?
Form: Lyric


Premium Member Winged Snowflakes

Jack Frost, Jack Frost, how we feel your icy touch.
The earth lies under your freezing clutch.
You are a sneaking thief coming to steal the russet sun,
And mercilessly take away all our outdoor fun.

Fluffy snowflakes on feathery wings unfurled,
Fall gently and silently over the sleeping world.
First they come slow and then in torrential showers fast,
As if the snowing will never stop, but forever last.

Busy streets and pavements are now lying bare.
People stay indoors. To come out, they hardly dare.
Rodents have gone into hibernation in their ditch.
It seems life altogether has gone out of pitch.

Birds sit with drooping wings in their woody nests.
Within eyeshot, no trace of any roaming beasts.
From nowhere comes the song of a single bird.
On the slopes, one cannot sight the grazing herd.

Inch by inch, foot by foot, snowflakes fall, 
Surrounding us on all sides like an oppressive wall.
Tawny roof tops are crusted with flakes of milky snow,
That the sun with golden beams alone can thaw.

From the cobalt sapphire sky’s misty veil,
Fall down the snowflakes like summer hail.
Unpigmented piles get heaped on the ground,
And the Earth lies inundated in a sea of milk churned.

From the seamless sea of ice, strewn with scattered gems,
Aureate, flaxen sunbeams make glittering diadems.
Thus Nature creates variegated scenes, delighting the heart, 
Superseding every piece in a museum of man-made art!
Form: Rhyme

Docter Woofgang Sinister

PROTONS AND NEWTONS
THE FLAVORS
THAT FAVOR MEANS
THE MODE OF THOUGHT
THE SCEINCE OF
THE THING THAT CAUSES
GROWN MEN TO DREAM
LABOR THROUGH THOSE
EMOTION
THOSE STUMBLING BLOCKS
THAT HINDER THINGS
CREATED FROM THE DISTORTED
THOUGHT
THE KIND OF WORDS
WHERE PROCESSES BEGAN
IN THE DIRECTION OF THESE ACTIONS
MIGHT THIS SATISFACTION
BE MEASURED IN TERMS 
OF SUCCESS, MONEY, AND DREAMS


DISCLAIMER,   MUSSIENDUL VACKTURBERGS " TIME MACHINE", IS A FICTIONAL TALE OF A DEVISE THAT MEASURE 13 FT. TALL, WITH A WIDTH OF 7 FEET, AND MOVED 3 METERS, ALLOWING THE OCCUPATES TO TRAVEL THROUGHT TIME AND SPACE. THE COMPLICATIONS OF THE DEVISE WERE DEBATED BY A 21 CENTERY SCEINTIST WHO RAN FOR PRESIDENT OF AN ISLAND NATION. oTHER COUNTRIES FEARED HE HAD DEVELOPED A TIME MACHINE, THIS CAUSED A STRUGGLE WHICH LEAD TO THE INVASION OF HIS COUNTRY. FICTION, WRITTEN BY OTTA THANG, NEW YORK WRITTTING COMPANY. IT WAS SAID THE FICTION WAS WRITTEN TO INSPPIRE A MOVIE, THE SOUNDTRACK, WAS WHAT THE AUTHER HAD WANTED, HE WAS A MUSIC LOVER.THE IMPLICILY OF SUPERSEDING SOMETHING THAT IS ALREADY IN EXSISTANCE. IN SERTION OR STRIKING SOMETHING THAT HAS BEEN CREATED AND THAN RECREATED TO MANIPULATE IT IN ANY MANNER. REDRESSING A SUBJECT TO REPROACH, THE MANNER OF SPACE, FROM ONE END TO ANOTHER, THE ENACTMENT OF FINDING FAVOR IN MANIPULATING FORWARDNESS THRU SPACE TRAVEL.

My Admissions

Escalated had it, through mere words
An argument with a drunk, leaving none sober
Avoidance I practiced, consequential to unity
A day of togetherness, spent alone
My desire to leave, superseding my will to stay. 

You were right, I conceded; true or untrue
A waste was it to speak, when I would be unheard
To read was it my choice, to refuse 
A key preventing entrance, denying inebriated lectures
Solitude enlightening the festivities, more than company. 

The skies were blue as I walked toward a reprieve
Blame was exchanged, for a norm that was apparent 
Maybe a little disappointment, wooed me forward
But an excuse does that afford none, for irrationality
Irresponsible was I in not informing ; irresponsible were you in trying to find me. 

Your defence would I always assist, to rectify or sway 
Good to me were you never not
Imperfections denied by a bond, unbroken
My respect wanting to yield, but not confounding
Your pedestal never lowering, even when your actions requested. 

Maybe forgiveness is to be asked, to relieve
An apology would do well, to alleviate
One person, a victor, the other not; egos choosing 
Toxins I am unaccustomed to, poisoning minds
I want to hate, but love remains true.
Form:

My Lover Artist

YOU   ARE   THE ENEMY   OF   MY   PAIN

 SOMEONE   WHO   IS   A   TRUE GOD   SEND

EVEN   THOUGH   YOU   LIVE   SO   FAR

YOU   HAVE   HEALED  MY  SCARS

A  CHILD- LIKE INNOCENSE   THAT YOU POSSESS

IS   SOMETHING   I   LOVE  AND  I  MUST  CONFESS

THE   WORLD   HAS   YET   TO  REALISE

SOMETHING   THAT  I VISUALIZE

FOR  THEIR  IS  A  DREAMER  WHO  CAN   HYPNOTISE

THIS   SLEEPY  WORLD  WITH  HIS  GOLDEN   EYES

THE  LIGHT  IS  HIDDEN  IN HIS  TRUE  ART

SUPERSEDING   THE   OLD   AND   YOUNG  HEARTS !

MY   LOVER-ARTIST   YOU   HAVE  CHANGED   ME

AND   THIS   LOVE   HAS  NOW  SET  ME  FREE

FROM   THE  SATANIC  WORLD   OF  DARKNESS

NOW  I  HAVE  FOUND  SOLACE 

IN   YOUR   POETRY...

I  CAN  BREATH  THE FRESH  AIR  OF  LIBERTY

AND  SPEAK  MY  MIND  WITH  BREVITY

IN  YOUR  EYES  I  FOUND  MY  INNOCENCE

FOR  YOU  TAUGHT  ME  PATIENCE  WITH  PERSEVERANCE

MY  LOVER  I  WISH  TO  DRINK  YOUR  SENSUOUS  LIPS

LOVE  YOU  TILL  THE  MORNING  KISS

I   WOULD  BECOME  THE  LINES OF YOUR PALM

HUG  YOUR  LOVE  WITH  MY  OPEN  ARMS....









Copyright 2011 by Smriti Jha

This is for a very very very very special person !
© Red Fiery  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Art And Loving

Tendency is, to apportion 
Love:

like slices of iced sweet
at a party

braying festive, 2 playful swipes 
at a swinging, loaded donkey

(not the husband this time)

toffee for the dear loyal mate -- 

allotment of love, for precious children;

for all our Prayer-family, appealed
a canopy of blessed shade, like that 
bible gourd,

cat and dog needing, also,
some petting reward – no special
reason...just because -- 

to the poet, as with painter,
superseding costume body of flesh, 
art is voice-echo and representative
image

one's deeper beating sentient part

ventricle tools, the writing pad, the brush...

more poignant the words,
broader the expansive, lyrical stroke:
ruled paper or mystifying canvas~ the soul,
       a bottomless well from which to
                                     creatively 
                                        draw
fluid destinies

for controlled dabbing

abundant dashing-splashing

spirit-inspired

awesomely appealing
          
saturating pour --
© Joe Dimino  Create an image from this poem.

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