My Lover Artist

YOU   ARE   THE ENEMY   OF   MY   PAIN

 SOMEONE   WHO   IS   A   TRUE GOD   SEND

EVEN   THOUGH   YOU   LIVE   SO   FAR

YOU   HAVE   HEALED  MY  SCARS

A  CHILD- LIKE INNOCENSE   THAT YOU POSSESS

IS   SOMETHING   I   LOVE  AND  I  MUST  CONFESS

THE   WORLD   HAS   YET   TO  REALISE

SOMETHING   THAT  I VISUALIZE

FOR  THEIR  IS  A  DREAMER  WHO  CAN   HYPNOTISE

THIS   SLEEPY  WORLD  WITH  HIS  GOLDEN   EYES

THE  LIGHT  IS  HIDDEN  IN HIS  TRUE  ART

SUPERSEDING   THE   OLD   AND   YOUNG  HEARTS !

MY   LOVER-ARTIST   YOU   HAVE  CHANGED   ME

AND   THIS   LOVE   HAS  NOW  SET  ME  FREE

FROM   THE  SATANIC  WORLD   OF  DARKNESS

NOW  I  HAVE  FOUND  SOLACE 

IN   YOUR   POETRY...

I  CAN  BREATH  THE FRESH  AIR  OF  LIBERTY

AND  SPEAK  MY  MIND  WITH  BREVITY

IN  YOUR  EYES  I  FOUND  MY  INNOCENCE

FOR  YOU  TAUGHT  ME  PATIENCE  WITH  PERSEVERANCE

MY  LOVER  I  WISH  TO  DRINK  YOUR  SENSUOUS  LIPS

LOVE  YOU  TILL  THE  MORNING  KISS

I   WOULD  BECOME  THE  LINES OF YOUR PALM

HUG  YOUR  LOVE  WITH  MY  OPEN  ARMS....









Copyright 2011 by Smriti Jha

This is for a very very very very special person !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/9/2016 11:03:00 AM
Truly a very meaningful expression of sincere feelings for someone who made a positive impact on you and changed your life around. I think I know who you were referring to, having already read other poems which you wrote later on....wondering if he's still on the scene! hugs // paul
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:09:00 PM
WOW I love that first line "YOU ARE THE ENEMY OF MY PAIN" and the last line is just perfection in motion "HUG YOUR LOVE WITH MY OPEN ARMS"
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Date: 5/22/2011 12:32:00 PM
i am so jealous, this is so beautiful, and one of the most heart felt poems i have read, it feels like it means so much to you...
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Date: 5/21/2011 9:21:00 PM
Very very good emotions and loving thoughts we need more of this in our sad world great verse mate Don
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Date: 5/21/2011 6:01:00 PM
The lines of his palm...... Yes you are very free!!!!
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Date: 5/21/2011 1:15:00 PM
such a special write for this special person.. so much energy and emotion in your lines Smriti.. a great tribute to a lucky love...luv..
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