Long Loss of control Poems

Long Loss of control Poems. Below are the most popular long Loss of control by PoetrySoup Members. You can search for long Loss of control poems by poem length and keyword.


Final Fantasy

Follow me and I will follow you only to sacrifice and pledge my soul.
Now known only as one!
Soaring in the winds with rapid inspirations exploding one by one,
It is your final fantasy to live again!
Victim of suicide revealed by fate and conquered by the depths of love,
Life of life has just begun!
The warmest touch begs respect for the quality found deep within.
It is your final fantasy to finally begin!
Encouraged by beliefs to uphold the strength of one’s destiny,
Yet, embraced with one final and endless thought!
A kiss of pleasure obscures the kiss goodbye,
Accompanied with its warmth to pleasure your need!
It is your final fantasy to bow down for these borrows and trade.
Subtle with perfection you are as pure as a white dove.
Your desire is to never ever get lost with what you’ve caught.
Insensitive delights begin to dwell from deep within,
You burn and ache for a place to finalize where it is that you belong.
It is your final fantasy to conquer these steps in which you alone have made.
Sacrifice those objectives captured and held in your time!
Acknowledge your very own self with the quality known only by the depths inside of you!
Fly away with me, but only for a moment.
Embrace only that which enlightens the moment seized!
It is your final fantasy to touch and feel everything that you never knew.
Life is our mystery, yet we uphold its true value with our righteous dignity.
Harvest your life moment by moment,
Make it your very own prey for the little ones who never knew.
Gather the sensations and absorb life as you breathe in your every breath of air.
It is your final fantasy to indulge with the intrigued and explore all of these parts inside of 
you!
Release yourself from the depths of love and find what it is that you truly seek.
Life of life has finally just begun!
Looking up and looking down but never looking all of the way around,
The loss of control is the loss that you will gain!
It is your final fantasy to whisper in the dark and to cry in plain sight.
Open minds with open hearts capture the true essence, for they completely belong!
Spirits fly and soar through life with so much energy powered with intensity’s strength.
They find the treasures you’ve always sought but have never found.
Your final fantasy is to escape your darkness and to find yourself inside of this beaming ray of 
light!
© Ann Rich  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Narrative


Inspired Words-Find Happy

Some strong emotion
touched my mind today
it wasn't quite expected 
and was quickly pushed away

then later as the evening passed
the thought that harvested emotion
intruded on every thought that entered
     my awareness
and pressed for recognition

this thought was not a thought of harm
in fact was intended to inspire
this thought that reaped a harvest of fear and hurt
was simply stated
find happy

and now as evening passes 
     into morning
I quietly asses
the thoughts that help me
     to be happy
and can tell that they too
     cause distress

for although the memories 
     from within the fields of my mind
often find a way to feed
     some hunger
they also seem to be a plague 
that tears my heart asunder

how is it that a happy thought
can lead to so much destruction
that at one point you're laughing
     and have cramps in your face
     and tummy
and the next you're crying
     and hurt all over

after going through a period 
     of disconnect
and feeling a storm build despite
     the elements from climate control
why is it so surprising that
one thought
could cause such a LOSS of control

Even now a scientist may wish
     for climate control
But a thing as simple as the beat
     of a butterfly wing
     as small
throws even the best plans off

Then why should a thought of control
not be effected 
by the similar
the beat of one butterfly wing
the same as one phrase
is small, yes
but is not insignificant

I have learned over time
that control is an illusion
so why I thought my mind 
     protected
eludes me still

A thought becomes that tiny spark
that transforms into emotion
the trick is in turning the effects
into something useful

I guess what I can take from this
is that not everything can be contained and controlled
and what I am given
that is loosed in my mind
can be turned into something of value
its worth greater
that its weight in gold

a thought of inspiration
may indeed sometimes cause
     hurt
but taking time to be AWARE
will help you grow
and help you learn to acknowledge the hurt
     to live
     to accept the moment 
     to not push it unwanted away

and with those thoughts
the inspired words
find happy
you learn to be happy

My Mind Runs the Show

In those very few moments just before rising,
my Mind is busy with things that must be done,
as it plans the day ahead and organizes my time
into smaller segments that will fit into place,
then decides how I can do each one,
so that by nightfall, I will cross the finish line.

It reviews each activity line by line,
as it watches until it sees the sun rising
in the east, then my Mind and body become as one
machine, ready to reach its goal, until all is done.
I eat my breakfast at the very same pace and place
I do each day, and then rush to my tasks to be on time.

I try to concentrate on each thing, one at a time,
so as to be organized and keep all things in line,
but this is no easy task to keep things in their place
and I feel a loss of control and my blood pressure rising,
but I must stay at it so that I can get them done
and not be left short of doing the very last one.

But why the importance to finish every single one,
not allowing some things to be left until the next time,
instead, wearing out the machine, trying to get them done?
This is no more than my Mind trying to keep me in line,
taking control of the machine, to stop my will from rising
and doing the things I desire, in this or any place.

"Everything in its place, everything in its place,
one by one - one by one - one by one." 
This mantra fills my ears and the sound is rising
ever louder, deafening me as I rush to finish on time,
line by line - line by line - line by line - line by line,
and the machine is breaking down, trying to get them done.

But what will be the penalty if things are not done,
and the consequences if they are not in their place,
and what can my Mind do if I step out of line,
nothing, for I have a will that answers to no one,
not to my body, nor my Mind, nor the dictates of time,
and with this realization, I feel my courage rising.

I step to the back of the line and relax, for I am done
working. I watch the rising sun come from its place,
knowing that I am the one in charge of my time.
Form: Sestina

Cashing a Feeling

I use to be and might still be
completely dedicated, 
chasing a better feeling, 
I needed to, I want to. 
Constantly running from the silence, 
that is deafening. 
Every day is the last time 
I will motivate myself, 
I will feel in control, till the feeling fades 
and dread will once again fall upon me. 
Wishing I can keep my promise to myself, 
but soon I will convince myself it's okay, 
this time will be the last. 

My best friend is the night, 
that loyalty and safe feeling, 
Everything second is welcoming. 

A little bit to keep the feeling in place, 
my mind will play tricks my thoughts so abstract 
and my reality will start to play. 

Awake, so awake 
into the early hours, talking to myself. 
playful to make a blanket fort, 
and i will disappear in an imaginary world. 
sometimes wishing for a child-like imagination,  
again to create an imaginary friend.

But most nights I wanted to be a freak, 
concentrating hard to lose my mind, 
the madness 
the total loss of control, 
will make space
in my mind. 
Thoughts overflow 
like too much popcorn on the stove. 

I need a pick me up again, 
chasing a better feeling 
I need to defeat this dread. 
It’s my fault for letting you get to me, 
it’s my fault for not letting go. 
I constantly waiting, 
watching, thinking of ways to fix it, 
constantly refilling my thoughts, 
wasting my time with of you, 
disguised as something amazing, 
so intoxicating. 
the tempary confidence 
and motivation. 

I am tortured by my mind
and uncertain constantly. 
A little more will keep it away. 
I am drowning while you smile
enjoying your masterpiece of distraction.

I Had a Father Who Loved Two Women

I had a father who loved two women:
one so faithful and sincere, the other 
spell maker and always showed a defying grin.
no, nobody in that god-fearing town liked her!

And mom, the devoted one, hated her and hid her pain,
she bore him four pretty daughters and a handsome son
who picked beautiful cyclamens and dazzling roses,
and gave them to her with thrilling and smiling eyes! 

I had a farther who loved two women,
his restless life had to be shared without compromise,
and the one who suffered was mom feeling the disgrace;
isn't betrayal a cruel and despicable sin?

Sweetest mother with lips that spoke gently,
and when they kissed me I tested honey...
spreading her tenderness beyond an earthly gladness;
most devoted mother, are you singing with all angels? 

I had a father who loved two women,
one had nothing, the other had everything;
should an abused wife go on without crying?
Tears will roll down and resemble a fountain!  

Mothers, unlikely fathers, are much closer to us
and their words linger on the waft of the warmest breath;
listen to them and you'll go far in life to achieve dreams:
their whisper is the gentlest breeze sent to earth! 

I had a father who loved two women,
he ran out of the semi dark and silent house on starlit nights,
did he worry about his wife and children?
What does a guiltless cheater gain to pursue selfish desires?    

If anytime bitterness cringes inside, tun to your beloved; 
there's no better friend than a mother who feels loved, 
but gives comfort to stop the grief built inside a lost soul:
restoring faith with her wisdom to keep loss of control!
Form: Ballad


Premium Member Loves Cliche Coup

It was love at first sight
Thought of you every night
Can’t stop thinking of you
What am I gonna do?
Blinding love at first sight

It was love at first sight
me feeling high as a kite
Ah, but this too shall pass
searching for greener grass
Crazy love at first sight

(Chorus)
Head over heels into the unknown
Doomed to fail before true love’s seed sown
Loss of control by true love’s presidium
Love’s cliché coup (surrounded by idioms)
~ Blinding, crazy love at first sight

It was love at first sight
but not all black and white
If I throw caution to wind
will my life then upend?
Stormy love at first sight

It was love at first sight
Why am I so uptight?
Will i be lumped with fools,
An exception to rules?
Scary love at first sight

(Chorus)
Head over heels into the unknown
Doomed to fail before true love’s seed sown
Loss of control by true love’s presidium
Love's cliché coup (surrounded by idioms)
~ Stormy, scary love at first sight

It was love at first sight
Dizzying passage of rite
Love is blind at what cost?
Best to have loved then lost?
All’s fair in love at first sight

It was love at first sight
Can two wrongs make a right?
One plus one’s never two
when one’s heart isn’t true
Fickle love at first sight

(Chorus)
Head over heels into the unknown
Doomed to fail before true love’s seed sown
Loss of control by true love’s presidium
Love's cliché coup (surrounded by idioms)
~ All‘s fair in fickle love at first sight
© Mark Toney  Create an image from this poem.
Form: Lyric

I Told Lara

I told Lara,
told her we would meet again.

Her on the metal table,
the light bleeding over
stainless steel and clinging to
arm hair’s, draining
color from her matted fur.

In her eyes something - not light
more what light becomes
when soil is shoveled up,
a soft luminosity, rain dark.

On the way here,
she had  on the backseat of the car
the loss of control, her blindness…
for a while she shuffled,
put her nose to the side window
as if smelling better days,
then she whimpered,
from the driver’s seat I heard myself say:
'there, there',
knowing we were 'there' already.

When we arrived
she was laid down between the seats,
I had to tug her out the back door,
she let me, sometimes she liked to play dead
when she didn't want to do something -
not now.

Now I am looking down
watching her blind eyes following something,
maybe tracking these strange smells,
or seeking out shapes only blindness can see.
Animals don’t think of their own death,
they don’t imagine it, for them
it’s just a place where they are.

The young woman in the white coat
asks me if I wanted to hold her?
I could tell my old dog was going,
I held my breath, staring at the ceiling
trying not to be anywhere.

I don’t believe in the past or the future,
not in any absolute sense.
My guess is that Lara did not either,
maybe we are meeting now
as I write these words -
words not spoken.

Stage 4 silence

Diagnosis:stage 4 silence 

Treatment:a kinder world (one where racism doesn't exist)

Cure:unknown

Lifespan:1-5 years, if that

Symptoms:
? a silenced voice
? being black
? loss of control over body autonomy 
? racism
? microaggressions 
? discrimination 
? stolen childhood 
? stolen innocence 

The cancerous silence had spread through her body
She had tried to tell the doctors and nurses
They called her dramatic
With each dismissal
It grew more aggressive 
More violent 

'It's probably just anxiety'
It had sneaked its way into her bloodstream 
It was beginning to be seen
It's screams fell on deaf ears 

'Stop making everything about race'
It had moved to her stomach 
Corrupting her digestive system 
They had played it down to stress
They said maybe you should rest

With each microaggression
Each racist remark
It grew stronger 
More powerful
More deadly 

Until

She collapsed 
In the hospital they couldn't ignore 
What happened to this girl 
They say next time we will listen 
But we all know they haven't learned their lesson

That begs the question 
Of what will happen to the health care system 
Will they be punished
Or will she just be an unfortunate lesson they'll never learn 
Will she forever remain a forgotten victim 

Where a place that is supposed to help kills still exists
Why isn't anything being done about it?

Premium Member Cancer - a Demon of Our Making

loss of control. an aberration. a defect,
when the perfection of creation is lost,
a cell grows and grows without a stop,
and all its purpose and function is deranged,
it blinds the eye or strangles the bowels,
floods the lungs or stops the heart!
children die for no good reason…
who can argue with such a demon?
Hippocrates knew it and the pharaohs,
but the disease was not as often as now,
as greed grew bigger and hatred spread,
more chemicals filled our living space,
the demon grew stronger and stronger,
now it catches and eats even babies in cradle,
what was once a disease of the old
now strikes the young before they have begun!
as a doctor, I have held the hand of a dying 5 year old,
waiting for his mother who was late to arrive,
The tragedy of cancer is not in the disease,
but in the fact that we are the cause of it,
more we destroy the nature we live in,
more poison we create for our own kind.
A life of purity and green living,
is the way to conquer many beasts
of our times.
true wealth is nature, that gives without count, no cash needed, no receipt printed.
False world of man gives tokens of no value, awards and merits that perish with time. 
we wear blinkers of social prejudices and lose the greater reality of nature!
Live in nature, love nature and be part of nature! 
A panacea for all man made diseases like cancer.

It Is What It Is

11/28/16


Thrive survive and live

It is what it is
A day of nothing or success using sieves
Carbonation in the soda pop making it fizz
Distinguished areas for hers and his
Individuals involved or infatuated with the showbiz
Don't get in a tizz


Some just take and or give

The planet spins
Life with cartilage and fins swims
Strikes, splits and gutterballs in lanes with bowling pins
Rooms for rent available at inns
Breath mints in tins
Boys and girls occasionally born as twins
Music made with all instruments even violins
Sports and games played with javelins
At church they'll sing hymns
Sometimes you'll need a membership to certain gyms


Whole milk, soy and skim
Going out on a limb
And off a whim
You either lose draw or win
Even if it's only by a smidge
Another opportunity and day begins
Going from light to dim
Above and below the ridge
On either side of the bridge


Help out your kin
Especially when times are grim


Low to high bids
Placed on items
Waters fished for nearly everything, including squid
Due to road conditions, speed and a loss of control, the car slid
Around the corner and the tires started to skid

Recently or way back when
People have disappeared off the grid


No idea all that you or I have did
And the same could be said for where we've been

By: Dalton Ogletree
Form: Rhyme

Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad