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And Still I Drive - Part One
Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
And sadly...i start to drive.
Through the unremarkable village with its tall 
Georgian Bay window panes, lightless,
devoid of visages; outwardly staring back at my 
Abject countenance with detached contempt and...

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Categories: commuter, heartbreak, places,
Form: Rhyme



Premium Member Ides In Ivy
Oh, these trees, arms reaching as they
      did then, but even wiser ... perhaps I as
         well have learned another thing-or-two
 ...

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Categories: commuter, education, imagery, memory, nostalgia,
Form: Narrative
Premium Member Unquotable Quotes:Gals, Dolls, Bitches and Broads - Xxxvii Part One
Unquotable quotes: Gals, Dolls, Bitches and Broads – XXXVII

( No aspersions are being cast here, willingly or otherwise, on the fairer, stronger and infinitely more sagacious sex. Even if these over-used words are somewhat overloaded...

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© T Wignesan  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commuter, family, girl, husband, men, parents, wife, women,
Form: Epigram
Shane
Shane walks in, hurries to the back of the bar. He finds the door opened to an alley littered with the garbage of the restaurant beside it, the one whose neon sign has two lights...

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Categories: commuter, anxiety, best friend, betrayal, brother,
Form: Prose
Premium Member Where the Railroad Track Meet
Where the Railroad Track Meet 

Grasping, lunging as does a donkey for the
dangling apple leading it forward, I reached
for the ever elusive spot.  That place where
the railroad track meet.  Almost had it in
Idaho...

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Categories: commuter, moving on, remember,
Form: Prose Poetry



University Where's That
University of Chicago? where’s that? Black/White America 

There are two Americas
A black and white America
A mostly white middle-class, and upper class America
And a mostly black and brown lower-class America.

It has been this way
Since the beginning....

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© Jake Aller  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commuter, dark, fear, violence, world,
Form: Free verse
Computer Space
I am fascinated by space science because it is so divine. I am fascinated by space science because everything it entails is sublime. Human operates machine and machine work for human; human input the information...

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Categories: commuter, business, character, community, computer, confidence, conflict, internet,
Form: Narrative
Zipperella the Cross Dresser
Rubber lover, Zipperella, 
is not a brother or a fella. 
He has false tits and kitten heels, 
not a chest and ankles made of steel 


His spiky rubber bag is old, 
cleverly patched with a...

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Categories: commuter, friendship, funny, people, woman, day, sad,
Form: Rhyme
Entrance Into the Garden of Eden An Exit Oft Repeated In Four Acts
Entrance into the Garden of Eden
An Exit Oft Repeated in Four Acts
By Sy Roth

Act 1—Somnolence

Smells of winter tickle a warm sun.
Crisp air, 
Red, brown and yellow leaves, 
Thrust the trees aside for their impending sleep.

They...

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© Sy Roth  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commuter, anxiety, character, destiny,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Thanks, But No Thanks
Although the name, Tat Tvam Asi, was new to me, the thought and meaning were not unfamiliar.
If I say that I am closed minded, would you judge me and set me apart as one incarcerated?
If...

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Categories: commuter, christian, faith, god, religion,
Form: Verse
Echoes of the Heart
lub dub, lub dub  echoes of the heart
just one sound that will tear it apart
its reins will tighten and choke the air sacks
fuselage lines squeezed  from the fortress of  plaques

the alarm is...

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Categories: commuter, health, heart,
Form: Rhyme
Between Things and Colors1
The sun sank into rusty chains
Ancient Mesopotamian constellations begin to spin
Shadows in the bushes
Sidewalks walking from the back
Cetoniinae trapped in glass
Your gaze runs through the sky
yes, like Schelling's rose
Tesla cars crossing the border
The dust of...

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Categories: commuter, abuse, africa, allah, allusion, america,
Form: Ballad
Bulletproof Vest Palpitations

It’s Faint Paddies Day
everyday,
from my oxy scarce commuter view

At this Rocky Mountain skin altitude,
death is always on the dispatch menu

Faint Paddies 
be sweating onion fear on a ghetto roll
Cry babies
be diaper blues potty wailing —...

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Categories: commuter, fear, society, truth, wisdom,
Form: Narrative
Runaway Train
While others writers think of love
you’ve shat on that pure white dove.
Before on and on, I must go,
I’m telling others of what I know.

Love to ride the ‘Royal Scotsman,”
but this train I’m on is full...

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Categories: commuter, life, satireheart, heart, love,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Eleven Hundred Thousand
What would your therapeutic family do
with an extra eleven hundred thousand?
A surplus donated beyond perennial operational expenses
for birthing and maintaining healthy lives
and burying and repurposing nutritional death.

First,
Let's invite co-investors to take back ten percent;
a million...

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Categories: commuter, community, earth, health, integrity, money, peace,
Form: Political Verse
Premium Member Urban Morning Sound
hear others out there, just beyond my wall-wrapped sharing space
  they break on through, sneaking inside my head
  far above, front-nosed pilots point high-flying seated people tubes
  passengers squeezed in tight, some...

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© Ian Love  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commuter, day, Lullaby, morning, sound, urban,
Form: Verse
At Least It Was Diverse, Part Ii
...I was working construction jobs,
there was a big job for the trains,
to replace an old viaduct
that shook in the wind and the rain.
The government gave money and
put strings on it, that’s what they do,
wanted to...

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Categories: commuter, discrimination, how i feel, political, satire, society,
Form: Rhyme
Premium Member Td-The Donald
Ivanka and Melania walking the 5th Avenue Street 
Red Wolves stalking their beat 
Being ever so sweet 
Looking at the window dressing 
Critical topics they are addressing 
Knowing Daddy Donald will get them a treat...

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Categories: commuter, america, art, best friend, dad, football, political,
Form: Rhyme
Commuter Widow
Trainspotting 
isn’t fun 
not when she’s dead tired 
arms of jelly 
ears full of tears 
	baby wants 
	baby wants 
pick the kids up 
from school
strawberry jam 
sandwiches uneaten 
traffic jam 
	ma I’m hungry 
	baby wants...

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Categories: commuter, absence, life, loneliness,
Form: Free verse
Smile
Falling out from the pit of his sleep,
Robin sits himself up, on the edge of his bed.
Dragging his body to the austere bathroom,
Facing the mirror, blankness just filling his head.
He looks at himself, so tanned...

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© Euan McFee  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commuter, conflict, depression, health, lonely, mental health, smile,
Form: Rhyme
My Jealous Adjectives

Everyone she meets want to
sunbathe in her smiley face
My happy-go-lucky girl
with the sexy turnabout twirl
She’s got a wooing walking way,
sensual sway ... sultry sashay
And my adjectives get jealous
about her everyday
Office chatter gets whisper low
when my...

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Categories: commuter, feelings, jealousy, love, word play,
Form: Burlesque
Swine Rush

Little piggies in a hurry,
gotta run and catch that muddy dollar
As me rat race cheese-off,
peddling asphalt fumes of a 401k Harley

Punch-the-clock tired worker bees
drone alone in a homely cubicle
Fraidy kitty cats don’t snatch the keys,
‘cause...

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Categories: commuter, allegory, humorous, jobs, parody,
Form: Burlesque
Choose Your Shortcuts Wisely
Shortcuts are best suited to desktop on the computer,
Not intended for the average commuter.
You will always get cut short, if you try one from a plane,
And shortcuts from a train only ends in pain.
Your stay...

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Categories: commuter, angst, change, character, conflict, crazy, culture,
Form: Didactic
Premium Member Righteous Riders
Ten thousand eyes will each day pass but not a single one will see,
for the folly of their hubris hides from harsh reality,
and when they pass by homeless people posted prone in poverty,
cold cloaked, they...

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© Eric Cohen  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: commuter, allusion, extended metaphor, satire,
Form: Dramatic Monologue
Premium Member City of Trees
I saw one day a city of trees
Walking down a path with me
Following hidden eyes to see

Saplings jungled up together
Like a stream of walkers too
Confused at all by windy weather

Deer pellets scattered walk-aways
Somebody's got to...

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Categories: commuter, mythology, nature, tree,
Form: tristich

Book: Reflection on the Important Things