Echoes of the Heart

lub dub, lub dub  echoes of the heart
just one sound that will tear it apart
its reins will tighten and choke the air sacks
fuselage lines squeezed  from the fortress of  plaques

the alarm is out to all cells standing in harm’s way
its possible they may not make another day
it could be sudden  like a viperous bite
that could send the body into a shocking flight

tunnels are  barricaded, tissues starving  for blood 
chemical stations are straining to get thru the mud
the flashing alarm has tripped, all  responders are rushing
anti coagulators gown up to intercede and begin crushing

sirens in the rescue bunker, corpuscles set out to quell
can they  get there quickly or will life end up in the well
detour routes are now flagged to allow an alternate flow
when safety is signaled all lanes will open and be set to go.

all commuter service has been put on red alert
predators do not interfere, let the squads tend to the hurt
second alarm sounded as there are many causalities 
the impact is enormous,  there may be reduced mentalities

life lines installed to improve the balance of nutriments 
also to flush out the exorbitant level of ill condiments
recovery is expected although time is of the essence
 mortality levels can rise post arterial strikes, during convalescence.

all teams called to aid in the tragic head on collision 
will undergo  precautionary measures for structural revision 
efforts were made with fortunate outcome without a fatality
all inhabitants within the vascular circuit now have stable vitality.

this highway thru hell  episode will be published in medical journals  
to exemplify what occurs to inbound route and to those externals 
echoes of the heart rely upon safety of all users of the track
drivers will have annual inspections for hazardous cargo like plaque.

this has been an  inside look at actual effects of a  heart attack.
and cast have been commentated for their heroic tributes.
the events has been edited for visualization  but are true to life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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