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Thanks, But No Thanks

Although the name, Tat Tvam Asi, was new to me, the thought and meaning were not unfamiliar. If I say that I am closed minded, would you judge me and set me apart as one incarcerated? If I say that I am open minded, would you welcome me, embrace me, accept me as yourself? If I say that I am both closed and open minded, would you deem me schizophrenic or delusional? Such were questions posed to one I met on a commuter train who challenged me to a "Rethink".* He was well versed in his belief, calm, poised, relaxed, and offering me a key to meet the real me. He even challenged my life-long belief that mankind needs a restoration because of a separation. He insisted that I reject the need for restoration because there never was a separation from God. We had a long commute of at least an hour, and as I deboarded the train, I was more convinced. More convinced and confident that I was on the right train and the right track at the right time. The right time because I needed someone like the eye-opening gentleman to challenge my faith. I am reminded of one occasion or encounter I had with people of a much different faith than my own**. At the conclusion of a failed conversion attempt with me, I complemented the gentleman's taste in his attire as a way of saying, "No to your religion, but yes to your dress code". He seemed startled by my kindness. With regards to the commute train gentleman, I, with a sense of gratitude, was able to determine with a sense of certainty that I was opened-minded enough to graciously respect and listen to him; and at same time, I was closed-minded enough to say graciously, "Thank you sir, but no thank you". 072521PSCtest, 'Tat Tvam Asi' Contest, Unseeking Seeker *Fictitious story **True story

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Date: 7/26/2021 5:39:00 PM
I really like this. Being cordial and respectful while keeping to your true self and beliefs!
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 7/26/2021 10:08:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. Blessings.
Date: 7/26/2021 4:13:00 AM
Interesting and well done. Your respect shines through too :)
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Curtis Johnson
Date: 7/26/2021 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Heidi

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