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My Jealous Adjectives

Everyone she meets want to sunbathe in her smiley face My happy-go-lucky girl with the sexy turnabout twirl She’s got a wooing walking way, sensual sway ... sultry sashay And my adjectives get jealous about her everyday Office chatter gets whisper low when my girl arrives Top-of-the-morning goes spinning fast into noon Five o’clock takes a commuter dive, I can’t wait for my baby to come home soon Go out on a dinner date; order romantic radish thoughts, creamy tossed salad kisses on my plate The waiter serving is looking a little too close, my baby’s curvy cleavage is too near his nose My adjectives are getting jealous again, and a hard stare is the only tip he got coming On the dance floor, she got a lot of eyes turning ... yeah, both women and men Then some cologne doused clod wanna cut in, sparking the ire of my jealous adjectives once more But my loving baby puts her hands on my hips, and pulls me closer to her Then she puts her mahogany cheek on my lips, and tells him that I was here first She knows how jealous my adjectives get, and likes when a non-verbal fire gets lit Her body rhythmic movements says her flaming passion is all mine ... Such delightful, adjective promises — It’s supernova loving time when our two combustible hearts combine And at home, we vow to never quench any of it, as the night candle lights burn down to the wick This poem was inspired by the poem titled "Purpose" by the talented poetess Mindy Clay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/7/2018 12:40:00 AM
Love this write, Freddie. Wow! Very unique and creative. It has flair and style. Well done.
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Date: 1/5/2018 12:42:00 PM
Loved this creative, romantic write Freddie! ~ Judy
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Date: 1/4/2018 2:30:00 PM
You painted a portrait of beautiful woman--one that everybody wishes they knew..a lovely interplay of emotions...well written romantic creation...her image feels alive..well done, Freddie.
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Date: 1/4/2018 1:43:00 PM
Inspired you are, "It’s supernova loving time," All the best Freddie
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