Excited Poems | Examples

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Premium Member A Long Islander's Goal

Red light  

Shining bright  

Such the sight  

Twirling bright  

After a toothless fight  

Sticks and pucks  

What's a Canuck?  

Many asked  

Listening to the Islander perform winning tasks 

Potvin was the man  

In demand  

Waiting for John Sterling’s winning command  

“Islander Goal, Islander Goal”  

Coming from the ice that was cold  

Trophy lifted, five times in a row  

While Rangers bowl  

Throwing strikes  

John Sterling manned WMCA’s mike  

Replacing Simone  

Who was hanging up his phone  

Wanting to hear  

Nassau Veteran’s cheer  

Near  

Hofstra where the Jets train  

And never complained  

Since Broadway Joe  

Headed to a Hollywood show  

Knees were saying, “time to go” 

Sadly, Stanley Cup was too violent for regular routine TV  

And that is why we appreciate John Sterling’s decree  

When Trottier did his thing  

And Chico was the goalie King  

Who was there?  

John Sterling’s enthusiastic flair  

Bringing victories home  

For those alone  

Enjoying the Cinco mayo championship run  

Entertaining and fun

Premium Member Spring


Spring is coming
I can feel her light
Falling, becoming
Stars glisten at night

Spring is in the air
Healing winter’s bitter
I say a silent prayer
Stunned by her glitter

Spring reminds me
There is precious hope
Whatever may be
His love will help me cope

Spring is writing joy
Through my life
Never quite so coy
As she heals my strife

Spring is the song
That sings her praise
Her praise is never wrong
She knows Him who’ll amaze

Spring is coming soon
And I’m so excited
She pours out her moon
So my soul is delighted

Premium Member The Children Excited For Christmas

The Spirit of joy
Is felt by children
Getting excited
For Santa to come
Everywhere they look
Decorations seen

Soon  Santa will be
In thew shopping mall
Children wrote a list
To give to Santa
For their Christmas gifts
That  they hope to have

Children are  anxious 
To  meet Santa Clause
Sit  upon his lap
Telling him their list
The gifts they  would like 
For the Christmas Day


Premium Member No Longer Excited

      Autumn’s first colorful leaf 
        leaped at my feet

     Though I am no longer excited
       by bold promises, false pretexts

Premium Member eager goldfinch

eager goldfinch 
gather at my birdfeeder
~ a family feast


AP: Honorable Mention 2025

POTD September 1, 2025

Premium Member Love the Excited Music Contestants

Entering a singing contest would fill me full of woe
I’m not saying singers would mock me as I would go
But I am not a crooner, as every relative doth know
I cannot carry a tune, yet I adore music so….

The Voice and American Idol are my favorite shows
I love the excited contestants and music that flows
Entering a singing contest is not for me in any way
But I love classical music and folk music every single day.


Is this immoral to you or am I just too excited?

JULY 2023

Hazy, Rampant, Hammering
Foggy-headed, I must be lazy enough to put just the right effort in.
It drips down and stains the pore.
My disease is acidic, fatal,
And the way that your alkali sense draws me in ...
How I'd beg to neutralise once more.
But the ants won't push against my unmoving tyres.
And anywho, isn't this against your morals?

Vivid, Violent, restless still
I'm floating away, I'm just really not lazy enough to notice it.
I'm ruining your favourite dress,
Your uniform for every non-uniform event.
Please don't let me soak you.
Please disappoint me again. Or you could prove there's no shame,
Because either way, at the end of my every walk, I fear that I'll be the same as my love for you when it isn't to see your uncloudy eyes,
But I'm not being lazy enough.
And I'm trying so hard to not try hard,
But I don't think it was ever really enough.

Premium Member 'twere thuh excited ''ty Lord''

.

                      'bout that land
                             earth
                        'neath your
                              feets
                        'neath yourn
                              bare

                              that's 
                      holy ground girl
                         holy ground

                 i bet every desert dry'd
                       blade uv grass
                           and twig
                     know'd you were
                     fix'n tuh lay there

                                 i
                     already pray'd girl
                                 i 
                          dun pray'd

When feel loved

When the world loves you
 You heart beats to a musical tune
 You like you whole body 
You have engery that soon Take you to the moon 
You feel every sunbeam Hit your soul with esteem 
Your smile light up the dark
 You frolic in the park 
Each bite of your daily meals 
Hits a ravishing tongue in the feels
 You have a great day In each and every way 
You can't not be brought down
 You love for your friends and family to come round
 You wake up in the morning with a spring in your step 
You could be patting your beloved pet 
Hugging sends vibes to your soul 
You feel young you will never grow old
 The way you walk is effortless 
The forest is calling you to de-stress
 Your morning coffee is divine 
 You take a sip of the finest wine 
And think about how great it is To truly be alive

Premium Member too excited to sleep

too excited to sleep
school starts tomorrow
I have new notebooks
fresh and crisp

I cannot wait to open them
they have a new smell
that I adore
it always feels like a new beginning

every year is a new year
an opportunity to make new friends
I cannot make them at home
right?

I am too excited to sleep
tomorrow I get to wear my new clothes
and my new shoes
my hair is adorable tonight!

school tomorrow.
I cannot believe it
Summer always lasts about two weeks too long
I try to close my eyes, but they will not close.

Premium Member What Keeps me Excited Every Day

I have joy in my heart daily now
Living on a farm, that could house a cow
A cow has not wandered by, but I have three dogs
There is room for sheep, and a couple of pot belly hogs

My husband knows that in order to keep me around
He has to let me have pets; their presence keeps me sound
I also bring home flowers, bushes, vegetables and trees.
It is a joy to plant them in the summer breeze.

I am an artist, and must paint every day to stay up.
Lying on all three sides of my chair is a sleeping pup.
I paint cartoons that are fun in every way to me.
Nothing keeps me as fresh as a new fantasy

I cartoon dragons, castles, faeries, and pirate queens of the sea.
There are fifteen hundred canvases, painted by only me.
I also love to write, and toss down ten poems onto a page every day.
These things are what keep me enthusiastic in a cheerful way!

Premium Member LIFE

.    .                                    Littlies
     .                                    Instinctively
     .                                    Feeling
     .                                    Excited

Premium Member Expiring Experienced Excited Emus

expiring experienced excited and enticed enthusiastic emus
extracted exact experimental explosives from exfoliated flues
exasperating exam-free extraterrestrial expedition views
extraordinary x-rayed exclamations exuding as clues.

Premium Member Celebrations




remember the delight,
reflected in wild hearts, eager and excited,
by moonlight

soul gently kissed,
by roaring fires of joy, lighted
heart’s mist

observe
hopes invited,
verve

remember the delight,
by roaring fires of joy, lighted
verve

Premium Member Excited For Christmas

No snow on the ground
   Houses decorated
   Inside and outside
   When the darkness comes
   The decorated lights
    Lit up the brightness
    The darkness at night


    Children are excited
    Waiting for Santa
    To come with the gifts
    On the Christmas Eve
    They will wake up early
    Excited to see
    What Santa brought them

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