No Longer Excited

      Autumn’s first colorful leaf 
        leaped at my feet

     Though I am no longer excited
       by bold promises, false pretexts
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 4:37 PM
a feel a twinge of sadness...to be let down is disappointing.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 1:36 PM
Hmm..sad one…
Maverick Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 11:18 PM
Who has let you down? Or should that be (how many.?)
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